TeamSkywars! CHAPTER 2

What do you think of this chapter?

  • The worst ever. Stop writing!

    Votes: 1 5.9%

  • OML it is getting worse...

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Eh...slowly getting better

    Votes: 1 5.9%

  • Good! I can not wait for the next chapter. But needs some improving

    Votes: 7 41.2%

  • Amazing! It keeps getting better and better!

    Votes: 8 47.1%
  • Total voters
    17
Pxnda said:
My English teacher told me never use more than one and in a sentence.
But, other than that, great :)
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Well your teacher is incorrect
What if the sentence is like this
In front of me was there baskets; one red, one blue and one green, I couldn't decide which to pick, so I picked the red and blue one.
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I like the fact when I make a story only 2 replies when someone else makes one that is more boring 3 pages
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Whens that ,I am so outdated there is like a machine that needs to be cranked 10 days in the future.
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I haven't read any other storys so i don't know if they play on more than 1 Sky wars map but if its only 1 maybe u should take a poll of the most poular :)
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Jonas125 said:
I haven't read any other storys so i don't know if they play on more than 1 Sky wars map but if its only 1 maybe u should take a poll of the most poular :)
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Thanks...I'll consider that idea :)
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