{ Season 1} The Thanksgiving war! Chapter 2 [ END ]

[_IshEric]

Why have you started new paragraphs in the middle of a sentence? That's not how paragraphs work you know

I know but if I keep writing about what the person what saying them it will be a run on sentence.....

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[deleted_user_19610]

I know but if I keep writing about what the person what saying them it will be a run on sentence.....

You still don't start new paragraphs in the middle of sentences. Start a new paragraph when your changing the subject.

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[_IshEric]

You still don't start new paragraphs in the middle of sentences. Start a new paragraph when your changing the subject.

Ohh ok thx

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[Capitaine64]

ITS SO COOOL <3 (except the part where I die xD)

I'm su confused how I died. In the random battle, nobody even touched me. Magic :3

Srry captaine. And hey wait....

Didn't I have two lives?? I'm still aliveee :3

Np xD

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[xSnowPhystos]

I'm still wonder where @SnowFrostTheDutchAD is since she is not dead?
Did she escape the war or something. ( or did you just forgot her)

And it can be my Reading fault but wasn't I still alive?

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[XThomasXPlayzX]

I'm still wonder where @SnowFrostTheDutchAD is since she is not dead?
Did she escape the war or something. ( or did you just forgot her)

And meee

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[_IshEric]

I'm still wonder where @SnowFrostTheDutchAD is since she is not dead?
Did she escape the war or something. ( or did you just forgot her)

And it can be my Reading fault but wasn't I still alive?

Mystery

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[xSnowPhystos]

Mystery

I assume that is a I forgot her....

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[_IshEric]

I assume that is a I forgot her....

You will just have to find out next year :3

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[Steve6495]

Actually, i like how i was like "If i have to die you gunna be with me" xDDD Suu good

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[XThomasXPlayzX]

I feel like my character was op in that..

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[_IshEric]

I feel like my character was op in that..

It was

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[Kitty Cheshire]

I'm still wonder where @SnowFrostTheDutchAD is since she is not dead?
Did she escape the war or something. ( or did you just forgot her)

And it can be my Reading fault but wasn't I still alive?

Maybe she was the person who kidnapped Luna .o. shook.
NICE STORY AND GOOD JOB @Ericthewriter.
Wait a second…i wanted to be a queen? wow .o. I LOVE ITTTT

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[_IshEric]

Maybe she was the person who kidnapped Luna .o. shook.
NICE STORY AND GOOD JOB @Ericthewriter.
Wait a second…i wanted to be a queen? wow .o. I LOVE ITTTT

Yup XD thank you :3

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