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For once It's is out! The THANKSGIVING war story!
Me In real life: No no no! I was supposed to released the story on November 24... but I been doing family stuff and I didn't have time to write anything so please forgive me if it's late but I promise myself that I wouldn't released it when November ended so ya :3. Ok so sorry if it late but at least it out Right? So ya let's start xD....
And we're back to this story I call The Thanksgiving war story. A story based on 24 Warriors, 1 Staff member, 1 Helper and 1 announcement guy on this journey to find out who will actually clam the last person alive? Now if your haven't read the first chapter go here:
https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/season-1-the-thanksgiving-war-chapter-1.36209/
Anyways were we left off was at the end Smooosh .3. and ~GingerbreadSwirl~ Sadly died I'm sorry ._.. But anyways all of us will die but from 1 person will clam the reward but what happen when that last person standing in the middle of nowhere? He/she will have no one to talk cause they are all dead so what will happen? Well let find out in the story I called The Thanksgiving war story!
If your wondering the role/rank of the players then here are they:
Here a thing. At the end it gets very sad and dark so it might be a little to much but it's a very good story into it so yup.
My grammar is still at a 83%/110% so I'm still a Gold rank at writing so don't judge my writing :3
But for now that enough of that and now it the moment we all been waiting for... The Thanksgiving war story! Who will be the last person standing? What will happen to them? Who know but let's see in the story I made called: The Thanksgiving war story!!
._.> De best writer on the forum's ._.>
Caption64: "Why why and why? He say with a puff, My hand hurts, my feet hurts and my brain hurts. I don't think I'm able to join the war this why." PhantomS: "Cap CAP listen to me. He start talking faster then usual. Look everyone else is feeling the same even Steve the cat ( Steve6495 ) But we can't give up this fast, I been in much worse pain and I didn't give up.
What I'm trying to say Cap is that you should never give up on what you choose cause at the end you might actually succeed in it and by the end you will feel proud that you didn't quit on what you wanted to do best and have the best day of your life!" Cap: "*sigh* he say in a deep thought. Well you almost made me cry by the end of that at story but your 100% right.
Your right about everything I'll say to that! I shouldn't give up on something I been practicing ever since I was a kid. When I was a kid I always saw my dad going to the Thanksgiving war and at standing up for our right to have the best feast in the year but sadly *cry* he died in 1989. And now I'm here standing up to what my dad did for us and winning the war and that shiney trophy for us."
PhantomS: "Wow cap I'm sorry, I didn't know this was a big thing for you. I thought you were those other people that just joined to win a dumb trophy and see there poor friend dead on the ground and don't give 2 crap on what there friend did for this and move on." "I'm really sorry for this." Caption64: Well it's ok, I just thought I'll share with you sometime before it's to late."
PhantomS: "Ok buddy, if you need anything just ask me and I'll be here for you." Caption64: "thank you Phantom I'll be sure to call you when I need your help, thank you. PhantomS: Np Cap, anytime. Eric: After that they both went for a break fishing to take there minds away from the war and have a little fun. Cake: hmm... She say confused. Xbam: "So what are we going to do has the plan?
He said in a rush. We don't have much time left, We only have today and that it." Cake: "I know Xbam that we have today but what we need is a plan not YOU rushing us." Xbam: Sorry it's just I running out of idea on taking down team 2 that I forgot what to do at this point." Cake pull Xbam by the shirt. Cake: "Listen pal, you and me sign up for this and if we're going
to fail on our job that we been practicing for 8 years in a row then we should be a shame to the world." "So I recommend that you stop complaining and get on it cause I'm not in the mood in joking around understand?" Xbam: "Ok ok fine you don't have to be so mean about it." Cake: It's not calling someone mean it mean that they are telling the truth and you should follow it."
She flips her lovely hair in the air and walk away from him. Xbam: "What have I done to deserve this." Xbam walk away sadly to the camp.Gal: "W-what happen Xbam?" "Is everything alright?" Xbam: "Umm.. ya sure.." Gal: "Did cake say something mean to you?" Xbam: "no, she was just telling me the truth and I should follow it and she 100% right." Gal: "Well has I say not everyone is perfect and you are just has good has the day I meat you."
Xbam: "Aww thank gal your the best." "Anytime Xbam." Eric: So while Cake study and write down the plans and gal and Xbam talk about the war, we go on on what Mr.Steve6495 is doing to get ready for the war that going to happen very soon. Steve: "Eyy, I'm proud of myself of running a great camp but sadly it will all be over in few day cause we are all going to d- *Phone rings*." "Oh I wonder who can that be."
Steve picks up the phone. "Hello?" "Oh hey Lachlan!" Lachlan aka Lachlan20 is Steve best friend, they meant in Middle school when Steve was new to his school. "Umm.. sorry Lachlan but I have a job to do and sadly this might be the last phone call I'll be making so listen...." That day Steve spend that hole day to Lachlan about what can be happening and it will be over.
Sazzy in the other hand was practicing her bow skill with Strelitzia in the sea side of the beach. Sazzy: "Ey, another perfect aim into the target." "I feel so proud that I'm a gold league on this and it's all thank to you Strelitzia!" Strelitzia: "Well sazzy we been practicing for 5 years so why not will you be good at this point xD?" Sazzy: that true xD, but still over the years I been learning a lot about this and I think I almost master it."
Strelitzia: "Welp be ready to show off those skill in the war cause you will need all the help you can get to win agents team 2." "Like even if I learn every skill in the world Ill still have a 50-50 chance against Pandee cause pandee family been doing this for 200 years, generation to generation and ya... That why she has a 5/5 rated in her stauts :/." Sazzy: Well don't let yourself down, just believe in yourself and your be fine." Strelitzia: "hmm.. that true, now lets practice some more."
Eric: "The hole group were up to there knees and be practicing 24/7 for tomorrow and get there tip top shape ready for this." "Meanwhile TheManiac, Fheonix, and Kitty Cheshire were practices there skills for this!" Who will win? Who will loss? Only the future know in this story I call The Thanksgiving war story.
Me In real life: No no no! I was supposed to released the story on November 24... but I been doing family stuff and I didn't have time to write anything so please forgive me if it's late but I promise myself that I wouldn't released it when November ended so ya :3. Ok so sorry if it late but at least it out Right? So ya let's start xD....
And we're back to this story I call The Thanksgiving war story. A story based on 24 Warriors, 1 Staff member, 1 Helper and 1 announcement guy on this journey to find out who will actually clam the last person alive? Now if your haven't read the first chapter go here:
https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/season-1-the-thanksgiving-war-chapter-1.36209/
Anyways were we left off was at the end Smooosh .3. and ~GingerbreadSwirl~ Sadly died I'm sorry ._.. But anyways all of us will die but from 1 person will clam the reward but what happen when that last person standing in the middle of nowhere? He/she will have no one to talk cause they are all dead so what will happen? Well let find out in the story I called The Thanksgiving war story!
If your wondering the role/rank of the players then here are they:
[ Announcement guy ] [ Co-Leader ]
Ericthewriter
[ Warriors ] [ Heros ]
Capitaine64
PHanTomSnIPer { New name: PhantomS }
GalacticWolf858
Fheonix
CakeTheDutchAD
Kitty Cheshire
DreamTheDutchAD { New name: ~GingerbreadSwirl~ }
Steve6495 <---- Leader of team 1
CoolXbam { New name: XbamTheDutchAD }
TheManiac
SazzyS
Strelitzia
Lunalight
XThomasXPlayzX
Verified Fangirl
PandeeDEATH
PsychicVibes
Smooosh .3.
xSnowPhystos
IceTheDutchAD { New name Icy_Hatake }
ResetTheDutchAD
SnowFrostTheDutchAD
Shive2002410 { New name: Itz_CoolieShive } <---- Leader of team 2
cheesyunicorn
[ Staff announcement guy ] [ Leader ]
Ray_Palmer_Atom
[ The helper of announcement girl ] [ Helper ]
KaWaiIeH_Ao
Ericthewriter
[ Warriors ] [ Heros ]
Capitaine64
PHanTomSnIPer { New name: PhantomS }
GalacticWolf858
Fheonix
CakeTheDutchAD
Kitty Cheshire
DreamTheDutchAD { New name: ~GingerbreadSwirl~ }
Steve6495 <---- Leader of team 1
CoolXbam { New name: XbamTheDutchAD }
TheManiac
SazzyS
Strelitzia
Lunalight
XThomasXPlayzX
Verified Fangirl
PandeeDEATH
PsychicVibes
Smooosh .3.
xSnowPhystos
IceTheDutchAD { New name Icy_Hatake }
ResetTheDutchAD
SnowFrostTheDutchAD
Shive2002410 { New name: Itz_CoolieShive } <---- Leader of team 2
cheesyunicorn
[ Staff announcement guy ] [ Leader ]
Ray_Palmer_Atom
[ The helper of announcement girl ] [ Helper ]
KaWaiIeH_Ao
My grammar is still at a 83%/110% so I'm still a Gold rank at writing so don't judge my writing :3
But for now that enough of that and now it the moment we all been waiting for... The Thanksgiving war story! Who will be the last person standing? What will happen to them? Who know but let's see in the story I made called: The Thanksgiving war story!!
._.> De best writer on the forum's ._.>
Chapter 7: Let's be friends before we die
Eric: It was another normal day at the team 1 camp and the team were getting ready to fight tommorow in the war. Eric: Half of the group were getting ready for a plan to fight the team 2 people. And the other half were practice there skills for the war. Eric: But let's see now, Who will win the war? It may not be team 1 and team 2 people might win! Welp we will have to see for that.
Caption64: "Why why and why? He say with a puff, My hand hurts, my feet hurts and my brain hurts. I don't think I'm able to join the war this why." PhantomS: "Cap CAP listen to me. He start talking faster then usual. Look everyone else is feeling the same even Steve the cat ( Steve6495 ) But we can't give up this fast, I been in much worse pain and I didn't give up.
What I'm trying to say Cap is that you should never give up on what you choose cause at the end you might actually succeed in it and by the end you will feel proud that you didn't quit on what you wanted to do best and have the best day of your life!" Cap: "*sigh* he say in a deep thought. Well you almost made me cry by the end of that at story but your 100% right.
Your right about everything I'll say to that! I shouldn't give up on something I been practicing ever since I was a kid. When I was a kid I always saw my dad going to the Thanksgiving war and at standing up for our right to have the best feast in the year but sadly *cry* he died in 1989. And now I'm here standing up to what my dad did for us and winning the war and that shiney trophy for us."
PhantomS: "Wow cap I'm sorry, I didn't know this was a big thing for you. I thought you were those other people that just joined to win a dumb trophy and see there poor friend dead on the ground and don't give 2 crap on what there friend did for this and move on." "I'm really sorry for this." Caption64: Well it's ok, I just thought I'll share with you sometime before it's to late."
PhantomS: "Ok buddy, if you need anything just ask me and I'll be here for you." Caption64: "thank you Phantom I'll be sure to call you when I need your help, thank you. PhantomS: Np Cap, anytime. Eric: After that they both went for a break fishing to take there minds away from the war and have a little fun. Cake: hmm... She say confused. Xbam: "So what are we going to do has the plan?
He said in a rush. We don't have much time left, We only have today and that it." Cake: "I know Xbam that we have today but what we need is a plan not YOU rushing us." Xbam: Sorry it's just I running out of idea on taking down team 2 that I forgot what to do at this point." Cake pull Xbam by the shirt. Cake: "Listen pal, you and me sign up for this and if we're going
to fail on our job that we been practicing for 8 years in a row then we should be a shame to the world." "So I recommend that you stop complaining and get on it cause I'm not in the mood in joking around understand?" Xbam: "Ok ok fine you don't have to be so mean about it." Cake: It's not calling someone mean it mean that they are telling the truth and you should follow it."
She flips her lovely hair in the air and walk away from him. Xbam: "What have I done to deserve this." Xbam walk away sadly to the camp.Gal: "W-what happen Xbam?" "Is everything alright?" Xbam: "Umm.. ya sure.." Gal: "Did cake say something mean to you?" Xbam: "no, she was just telling me the truth and I should follow it and she 100% right." Gal: "Well has I say not everyone is perfect and you are just has good has the day I meat you."
Xbam: "Aww thank gal your the best." "Anytime Xbam." Eric: So while Cake study and write down the plans and gal and Xbam talk about the war, we go on on what Mr.Steve6495 is doing to get ready for the war that going to happen very soon. Steve: "Eyy, I'm proud of myself of running a great camp but sadly it will all be over in few day cause we are all going to d- *Phone rings*." "Oh I wonder who can that be."
Steve picks up the phone. "Hello?" "Oh hey Lachlan!" Lachlan aka Lachlan20 is Steve best friend, they meant in Middle school when Steve was new to his school. "Umm.. sorry Lachlan but I have a job to do and sadly this might be the last phone call I'll be making so listen...." That day Steve spend that hole day to Lachlan about what can be happening and it will be over.
Sazzy in the other hand was practicing her bow skill with Strelitzia in the sea side of the beach. Sazzy: "Ey, another perfect aim into the target." "I feel so proud that I'm a gold league on this and it's all thank to you Strelitzia!" Strelitzia: "Well sazzy we been practicing for 5 years so why not will you be good at this point xD?" Sazzy: that true xD, but still over the years I been learning a lot about this and I think I almost master it."
Strelitzia: "Welp be ready to show off those skill in the war cause you will need all the help you can get to win agents team 2." "Like even if I learn every skill in the world Ill still have a 50-50 chance against Pandee cause pandee family been doing this for 200 years, generation to generation and ya... That why she has a 5/5 rated in her stauts :/." Sazzy: Well don't let yourself down, just believe in yourself and your be fine." Strelitzia: "hmm.. that true, now lets practice some more."
Eric: "The hole group were up to there knees and be practicing 24/7 for tomorrow and get there tip top shape ready for this." "Meanwhile TheManiac, Fheonix, and Kitty Cheshire were practices there skills for this!" Who will win? Who will loss? Only the future know in this story I call The Thanksgiving war story.
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