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Chapter 2

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“What’s the underworld like to be in for so long?” I asked him. He smiled.

“Well there is no newspapers so I never now what kind of murders there are but I know that it’s hard. I kill zombies for food. I have to stab them. It’s much worse but I can only survive this way.” I gawk at him.

“Why are intruders so bad.”

“You’ll get killed. They’re jealous of you for not being like them and doing…. The worst.” I don’t want to believe him.

“You’re just trying to scare me!” I yell. I rip away from him and run on and on until I can’t see him. Then I look behind me. He didn’t follow me. Then I hear something. It’s like a hiss. Low and yet hearable.

I stop dead in my tracks. The sound grows, more by the second and I start to back away when all of a sudden it was behind me too. I froze and closed my eyes. Then I built my confidence back up and ran away. I ran farther and farther until I could see the boy.

“It looks like you’re staying here, for a while Amico. Care to ask my name?”

“Yes please.” I say wheezing and gasping for my breath then letting it relax and slow down, then gasp, then slow. It slowly changes and he answers me.

“I’m Zeek.” I like his name and nod. Then I lay down.

“Tell me more about the underworld.”

“Well… Every criminal who didn’t turn into a zombie has a demon. A demon will take over a person and be a zombie if they die but when they’re alive, the demons are your friends and you must have saw a demon in that flower patch, bunnies don’t live here. The demon could have cursed you forever or given you a chance to get out of this terrible world that I’m stuck in.”

“If I can go back how?”

“Mercy. You have to visit the god of the world, you have to visit Zeus and his wife and sister, Hera. I cannot come with you, only to the foot of the castle, in Mount Olympus.”

“How do we get there?”

“We use demons.”
 
“What’s the underworld like to be in for so long?” I asked him. He smiled.

“Well there is no newspapers so I never now what kind of murders there are but I know that it’s hard. I kill zombies for food. I have to stab them. It’s much worse but I can only survive this way.” I gawk at him.

“Why are intruders so bad.”

“You’ll get killed. They’re jealous of you for not being like them and doing…. The worst.” I don’t want to believe him.

“You’re just trying to scare me!” I yell. I rip away from him and run on and on until I can’t see him. Then I look behind me. He didn’t follow me. Then I hear something. It’s like a hiss. Low and yet hearable.

I stop dead in my tracks. The sound grows, more by the second and I start to back away when all of a sudden it was behind me too. I froze and closed my eyes. Then I built my confidence back up and ran away. I ran farther and farther until I could see the boy.

“It looks like you’re staying here, for a while Amico. Care to ask my name?”

“Yes please.” I say wheezing and gasping for my breath then letting it relax and slow down, then gasp, then slow. It slowly changes and he answers me.

“I’m Zeek.” I like his name and nod. Then I lay down.

“Tell me more about the underworld.”

“Well… Every criminal who didn’t turn into a zombie has a demon. A demon will take over a person and be a zombie if they die but when they’re alive, the demons are your friends and you must have saw a demon in that flower patch, bunnies don’t live here. The demon could have cursed you forever or given you a chance to get out of this terrible world that I’m stuck in.”

“If I can go back how?”

“Mercy. You have to visit the god of the world, you have to visit Zeus and his wife and sister, Hera. I cannot come with you, only to the foot of the castle, in Mount Olympus.”

“How do we get there?”

“We use demons.”
Wow I read all the chapters.. nice.. I luv it.. xD
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I like your story the best because it isn't all lovey dovey like the rest of them.
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Everyone seems to be writing fanfics lately.. xD
Good job, Typi :D
I love it :p
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I LIKE THE STORY TYPI!!!!!!!!
:D :D :D
THIS STORY IS AWESOME!!!!:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
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I know Lauren Im amazing for my age.
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I like your story the best because it isn't all lovey dovey like the rest of them.
Everyone seems to be writing fanfics lately.. xD
Good job, Typi :D
I love it :p
;-;

Anyway, amazing story, Typi!!! I love the story plot, and for a 9 y.o. you're amazing at not making any mistakes.
I only do it cause im bored af
I LIKE THE STORY TYPI!!!!!!!!
:D :D :D
THIS STORY IS AWESOME!!!!:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Wow I read all the chapters.. nice.. I luv it.. xD
thanks, i cant make chapter 3 today sorry, ill do it on wENSDAy
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“What’s the underworld like to be in for so long?” I asked him. He smiled.

“Well there is no newspapers so I never now what kind of murders there are but I know that it’s hard. I kill zombies for food. I have to stab them. It’s much worse but I can only survive this way.” I gawk at him.

“Why are intruders so bad.”

“You’ll get killed. They’re jealous of you for not being like them and doing…. The worst.” I don’t want to believe him.

“You’re just trying to scare me!” I yell. I rip away from him and run on and on until I can’t see him. Then I look behind me. He didn’t follow me. Then I hear something. It’s like a hiss. Low and yet hearable.

I stop dead in my tracks. The sound grows, more by the second and I start to back away when all of a sudden it was behind me too. I froze and closed my eyes. Then I built my confidence back up and ran away. I ran farther and farther until I could see the boy.

“It looks like you’re staying here, for a while Amico. Care to ask my name?”

“Yes please.” I say wheezing and gasping for my breath then letting it relax and slow down, then gasp, then slow. It slowly changes and he answers me.

“I’m Zeek.” I like his name and nod. Then I lay down.

“Tell me more about the underworld.”

“Well… Every criminal who didn’t turn into a zombie has a demon. A demon will take over a person and be a zombie if they die but when they’re alive, the demons are your friends and you must have saw a demon in that flower patch, bunnies don’t live here. The demon could have cursed you forever or given you a chance to get out of this terrible world that I’m stuck in.”

“If I can go back how?”

“Mercy. You have to visit the god of the world, you have to visit Zeus and his wife and sister, Hera. I cannot come with you, only to the foot of the castle, in Mount Olympus.”

“How do we get there?”

“We use demons.”
Awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
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