2004_penguin
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Soo here's one of the rare stories that doesn't have anything to do with members on forums.
Max is an unsociable person at school and his life is basically just sleep, eat and toilet everyday, over and over. This procedure was continuous, until this day came.
Max is a just a normal everyday boy you'll see, 12 years old, blue eyes, scruffy hair and a T-shirt, so what makes him so special? Nothing really. He likes to hang out with his group of friends, and only his group of friends, no one else. His group contains of Bryan, Ethan and John.
It was almost Valentine’s Day and this was his first year he's allowed to go to the Valentine’s Day dance and he didn't want to go without a special girl. “Hey,” Max greeted Ethan as he got off the school bus,”do you want to go to the dance this year?” Ethan laughed. “Seriously you really want to go to that dumb dance?” “Sure why not?” Max replied. As they walked to class, Max caught Emily at the corner of his eye. She's so beautiful Max thought.
Emily is a girl that everyone adores, but she is also a very picky girl. She declines every request to dance with her, no matter who asked her. She had glasses, long brown hair and matching brown eyes. Her eyes seemed to sparkle and her black-rimmed glasses only made her prettier.
At the time, she was not thinking of dancing with anyone, in fact, she didn’t want to dance with anyone. None of the boys seemed to like her for her personality, just her looks.
Gliding carefully to her homeroom door, she saw a boy catch her eye, he had messy blond hair and blue eyes. He looked as old as Emily and she was surprised she had never seen him.
She returned his gaze, and for a split second the pair looked at each other before retreating to look at something or someone else. Emily was curious to know who he was, but she had to get to class.
She sat next to her closest friends, Ava and Ellie. Ava had gold hair that came down to about half her stomach, while Ellie had blond hair, as long as Emily’s. These three had known each other since they were in preschool and they were the shiest girls. Now Emily was the most popular and coolest girl out of the entire grade, maybe even the school.
“Ava?” Emily began to ask Ava who that boy was, when there homeroom teacher strode through the door. The class fell silent. Emily’s homeroom teacher was one of the strictest teachers in the school. She had short black hair and black eyes, that didn’t have much of a kind look to them.
She had a glare on her face at all times, she was thin and small, a little bit smaller than the tallest kid in class. With a face like hers, not many people said no to her, but a student way back, had created a rumour that she once punched a student who didn’t turn in his homework.
Her name was Mrs. Gravey. Just how it sounds. It was another reason for the students to be terrified of her.
But today, her face was more a sad frown. Emily wasn’t sure she had seen this expression on anyone’s face, but for some reason she was able to identify it. Mrs. Gravey didn’t say anything, she just went over to her desk, and started to work. The class by now didn’t care and began to talk again. Emily ignored her friend’s talk about some new app and doodled in her notebook. She tried to redraw the boy’s face, but messy hair and blue eyes was all she could remember. Sighing, she looked up to see Ava and Ellie watching her. The drawing on her notebook was a face, messy hair and two eyes. They weren’t even colored. But Ava and Ellie knew who it was.
“Why are you drawing Max?” Ava asked and Ellie nodded, adding in a head shake. Emily blushed and smiled at the same time, which looked cute.
“Oh no.” Ellie kind of shook her head. “You like Max?” Emily turned her head to Ellie, “No, I was just curious to know who he was.”
No title ._. <3
By: 2004_penguin & Typifox
By: 2004_penguin & Typifox
Max is an unsociable person at school and his life is basically just sleep, eat and toilet everyday, over and over. This procedure was continuous, until this day came.
Max is a just a normal everyday boy you'll see, 12 years old, blue eyes, scruffy hair and a T-shirt, so what makes him so special? Nothing really. He likes to hang out with his group of friends, and only his group of friends, no one else. His group contains of Bryan, Ethan and John.
It was almost Valentine’s Day and this was his first year he's allowed to go to the Valentine’s Day dance and he didn't want to go without a special girl. “Hey,” Max greeted Ethan as he got off the school bus,”do you want to go to the dance this year?” Ethan laughed. “Seriously you really want to go to that dumb dance?” “Sure why not?” Max replied. As they walked to class, Max caught Emily at the corner of his eye. She's so beautiful Max thought.
Emily is a girl that everyone adores, but she is also a very picky girl. She declines every request to dance with her, no matter who asked her. She had glasses, long brown hair and matching brown eyes. Her eyes seemed to sparkle and her black-rimmed glasses only made her prettier.
At the time, she was not thinking of dancing with anyone, in fact, she didn’t want to dance with anyone. None of the boys seemed to like her for her personality, just her looks.
Gliding carefully to her homeroom door, she saw a boy catch her eye, he had messy blond hair and blue eyes. He looked as old as Emily and she was surprised she had never seen him.
She returned his gaze, and for a split second the pair looked at each other before retreating to look at something or someone else. Emily was curious to know who he was, but she had to get to class.
She sat next to her closest friends, Ava and Ellie. Ava had gold hair that came down to about half her stomach, while Ellie had blond hair, as long as Emily’s. These three had known each other since they were in preschool and they were the shiest girls. Now Emily was the most popular and coolest girl out of the entire grade, maybe even the school.
“Ava?” Emily began to ask Ava who that boy was, when there homeroom teacher strode through the door. The class fell silent. Emily’s homeroom teacher was one of the strictest teachers in the school. She had short black hair and black eyes, that didn’t have much of a kind look to them.
She had a glare on her face at all times, she was thin and small, a little bit smaller than the tallest kid in class. With a face like hers, not many people said no to her, but a student way back, had created a rumour that she once punched a student who didn’t turn in his homework.
Her name was Mrs. Gravey. Just how it sounds. It was another reason for the students to be terrified of her.
But today, her face was more a sad frown. Emily wasn’t sure she had seen this expression on anyone’s face, but for some reason she was able to identify it. Mrs. Gravey didn’t say anything, she just went over to her desk, and started to work. The class by now didn’t care and began to talk again. Emily ignored her friend’s talk about some new app and doodled in her notebook. She tried to redraw the boy’s face, but messy hair and blue eyes was all she could remember. Sighing, she looked up to see Ava and Ellie watching her. The drawing on her notebook was a face, messy hair and two eyes. They weren’t even colored. But Ava and Ellie knew who it was.
“Why are you drawing Max?” Ava asked and Ellie nodded, adding in a head shake. Emily blushed and smiled at the same time, which looked cute.
“Oh no.” Ellie kind of shook her head. “You like Max?” Emily turned her head to Ellie, “No, I was just curious to know who he was.”
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