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YLYL~ Chapter 10

Do you enjoy YLYL? Should I continue it or ditch it for another, different idea?

  • Yes, I enjoy it. Please continue it!

    Votes: 3 17.6%
  • Yes, I enjoy it. But I'd like to see your other idea.

    Votes: 1 5.9%
  • Yes, I enjoy it. I'd like to see both YLYL and your other idea, if that's possible.

    Votes: 11 64.7%
  • No, I don't enjoy it. Please ditch it for the other idea.

    Votes: 2 11.8%
  • [Different response, will comment it down below.]

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Total voters
    17
  • Poll closed .

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It was nearing the end of February, which also meant it was nearing the day where Tan would conduct the monthly eliminate process and people would be eliminated. Rouge detested that day, for she had to wake up early, at 7:30AM to be precise, just to prepare to attend the elimination. Seriously, why couldn't they do this in a different way?

Rouge yawned, her eyes adjusting to the bright light which shone into her room from the window. Sara had grabbed the curtains and opened them to reveal the sun, coming up from the mountains it had hid behind in the east.

"Good morning!" Sara chirped. She walked over to Rouge and shook her, trying to get her to wake up.

"Ugh, what time is it?" Rouge grumbled, wanting to get her well deserved rest.

"7:35AM. I gave you an extra 5 minutes today Rouge, so get up," Sara said. Her voice sounded far away, since Rouge was still half-asleep. Of course, Rouge had to get up soon, whether she liked it or not. So she willed herself to get out of bed and go to the bathroom to take a quick shower.

"Choose an outfit for me, will ya?" Rouge asked, her head poking out from the space between the space of the bathroom door and the wall. She was too lazy to pick her own clothes, plus she wanted to see Sara's sense of style. Rouge practically thanked God when Sara nodded. She closed the bathroom door, and left Sara to choose.

***

Typi sat on the couch, eyes closed, waiting for the monthly elimination to start so she could get out of the place. She wore an orange dress, which when it reflected the light looked decorated with diamonds.

Almost everyone was ready in the living room, except Strelitzia, who was probably in the kitchen looking for something, and Jc, who still hadn't come downstairs yet. Typi glanced at her watch - 8:28AM. Jc and Strelitzia had two more minutes to come into the living room.

Strelitzia came just as the time changed to 8:29AM.

8:30AM. Jc still wasn't here. Tan came up to all of them and smiled, but that smile didn't last very long.

"Where's Jc?" Tan asked, just as Jc skipped down the stairs. Glancing behind him, Tan's smile reappeared. "So, we're all here. There won't be anything different this time, anyone can volunteer to be first. We're still using a lie detector. Nothing's changed."

Typi stood up and walked towards Tan, holding out her hand. "Just get over with it," she mumbled. She let Tan get the lie detector ready then answered the question, before leaving to go pack. Everyone did their turn, and Typi came back just as the last person, Strelitzia, did her turn.

"This month's eliminated players are... Typi and Laura! Sorry guys. Laura, you can go pack, and Typi, since you're already done packing, you can say goodbye then leave," Tan said, before leaving.

Typi's eyes scanned the living room, before landing on Elania. Typi walked up to her and gave her a huge bear hug. Elania was taken a bit by surprise at first, but then smiled and hugged back. "I'll miss you, Ty."

"I'll miss you too, Elania. Love you," Typi's voice was muffled by Elania's sweater, but Elania could hear her, loud and clear. There was a cough from beside her, which made Typi look up.

"Oh, Rundas, didn't see you there," Typi said.

Rundas rolled his eyes and remarked sarcastically, "Of course you didn't."

Typi smiled and stuck her tongue out, before letting go of Elania and wandering over to Ray, who was talking to Pixie. She stood beside Ray and poked him in his cheek, causing him to look at her. Those soft, dark oak eyes which were a maze she'd gotten lost in countless times now stared right at her own pair.

"Hey," Ray said. Typi smiled a small, sad smile.

"Bye, UmBrina #2," Typi chuckled, before waving and walking away. Ray rolled his eyes before shouting after her, "Bye Adum!"

"UmBrina #2 and Adum? What kinds of nicknames are those?" Pixie laughed. Ray shrugged.

"Our favourite singer shipped with the word "Um"."

"Weirdos."

***

Laura embraced Ray. "Goodbye Ray, good luck. Hope you win."

Ray nodded as they parted. "Thanks. Good luck in life, Laura."

A sudden thought came to Laura's mind, which made her glare daggers at Ray. "You better not quote Avicii right now or you are dead. Dead."

"Alright then. One day you'll leave this world behind, so live a life you will remember." Ray grinned cheekily and Laura punched him in his side, causing him to yelp in pain.

"Owww!" Ray frowned. Laura chuckled.

"Okay, for real this time, good bye, Ray," Laura smiled, backing out the door. Ray nodded and smiled back, waving to Laura as she left. There was a sudden weight on Ray's shoulder. Looking next to him, Ray almost connected lips with Jc. Jumping back, Ray said, "Hey Jc."

"Hey Palmtree. I see you're very popular, eh?" Jc winked, earning a glare from Ray. "Hey, it's meant as a compliment."

"Mhm."

***

Pixie and Shielo sat in Shielo's room, playing a rhyming game they had come up with to past the time. Shielo was the person starting this time.

"Duck."

"Luck." Pixie almost said the F word. Almost. She barely just saved herself.

"Tuck."

"Guck."

"That's an actual word?" Shielo asked, trying to raise an eyebrow but failing miserably. Pixie nodded.

"You can check Google if you don't believe me," Pixie said. "Your turn."

"Pluck."

"Truck."

"Buck."

"Chuck."

"Cluck."

"Yuck."

"Struck."

"Stuck."

"Can we stop now? I've run out of words," Shielo chuckled at herself. Pixie grinned at her victory.

"I won, I won, I WON!!" Pixie chanted, earning a light punch from Shielo, and a laugh which escaped her lips though she tried to stop it. Pixie lay on Shielo's bed, little bits of laughter slipping from her mouth. She grabbed a pillow and slammed it into Shielo's arm, sparking a pillow fight.

"Hey!" Shielo scowled at Pixie, before picking up a pillow and using it to punch Pixie's abdomen. Pixie slapped Shielo's forehead, Shielo hit her in her left leg, they fought using pillows for about 10 minutes before there was a knock at the door, which was probably Sara calling them to dinner.

"Coming!" Pixie hopped off Shielo's bed and opened the door, only to be greeted not by Sara, but by Ray, who was looking a bit nervous. He grabbed Pixie's hand and thrust a crumpled piece of paper into her hand before running off. Pixie looked at the paper. It said, "For Pixie's eyes only." Pixie glanced at Shielo.

"Hey Shielo, I'm going to have to cut our hangout short, I have to do something. I'll talk to you later?" Pixie said. She really wanted to continue messing around with Shielo, but she felt like the paper held some sort of important message.

Shielo frowned, but she was quick to cover it with a bright smile. "Sure! I'll speak to you at dinner I guess." She waved, and soon Pixie was out of her room. She walked to her own room, the crumpled piece of paper clutched in her hand.

***

Pixie made sure to lock the door before laying on her bed and opening the paper. She stared at the paper, at what it had to say.

"I cheated the system, just to be with you."

It was a love letter. Was it a love letter? Pixie wasn't sure. It definitely seemed like one, though. She looked near the bottom, but there wasn't a name to show who'd written to note. Prime suspect would be Ray, since he gave the paper to Pixie, but anyone could've just asked him to.

Pixie's thoughts wandered to Wolfie. Was he smart enough to cheat the system? Pixie thought of all the times she'd seen him messing with some pretty high tech stuff. Yeah, he'd probably be able to pull this off. The real question though, was would he really do it?
 
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HFHEUEJHDBEJUWHSNAKAO #WOLFIX XD

I really want the next chapter! This is so good!
Btw, I don't think you really care, but if you do vvvv
'Pixie slapped Shielo's forehead, Shielo hit her in her left leg, they fought using pillows for about 10 minutes before there was a knock at the door, "whcih" was probably Sara calling them to dinner.'
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NO NO NO LAUREN YOU HAVE IT ALL WRONG. UGH.
Technically , to us, Um isn't a word it's a nicknames :D
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It was nearing the end of February, which also meant it was nearing the day where Tan would conduct the monthly eliminate process and people would be eliminated. Rouge detested that day, for she had to wake up early, at 7:30AM to be precise, just to prepare to attend the elimination. Seriously, why couldn't they do this in a different way?

Rouge yawned, her eyes adjusting to the bright light which shone into her room from the window. Sara had grabbed the curtains and opened them to reveal the sun, coming up from the mountains it had hid behind in the east.

"Good morning!" Sara chirped. She walked over to Rouge and shook her, trying to get her to wake up.

"Ugh, what time is it?" Rouge grumbled, wanting to get her well deserved rest.

"7:35AM. I gave you an extra 5 minutes today Rouge, so get up," Sara said. Her voice sounded far away, since Rouge was still half-asleep. Of course, Rouge had to get up soon, whether she liked it or not. So she willed herself to get out of bed and go to the bathroom to take a quick shower.

"Choose an outfit for me, will ya?" Rouge asked, her head poking out from the space between the space of the bathroom door and the wall. She was too lazy to pick her own clothes, plus she wanted to see Sara's sense of style. Rouge practically thanked God when Sara nodded. She closed the bathroom door, and left Sara to choose.

***

Typi sat on the couch, eyes closed, waiting for the monthly elimination to start so she could get out of the place. She wore an orange dress, which when it reflected the light looked decorated with diamonds.

Almost everyone was ready in the living room, except Strelitzia, who was probably in the kitchen looking for something, and Jc, who still hadn't come downstairs yet. Typi glanced at her watch - 8:28AM. Jc and Strelitzia had two more minutes to come into the living room.

Strelitzia came just as the time changed to 8:29AM.

8:30AM. Jc still wasn't here. Tan came up to all of them and smiled, but that smile didn't last very long.

"Where's Jc?" Tan asked, just as Jc skipped down the stairs. Glancing behind him, Tan's smile reappeared. "So, we're all here. There won't be anything different this time, anyone can volunteer to be first. We're still using a lie detector. Nothing's changed."

Typi stood up and walked towards Tan, holding out her hand. "Just get over with it," she mumbled. She let Tan get the lie detector ready then answered the question, before leaving to go pack. Everyone did their turn, and Typi came back just as the last person, Strelitzia, did her turn.

"This month's eliminated players are... Typi and Laura! Sorry guys. Laura, you can go pack, and Typi, since you're already done packing, you can say goodbye then leave," Tan said, before leaving.

Typi's eyes scanned the living room, before landing on Elania. Typi walked up to her and gave her a huge bear hug. Elania was taken a bit by surprise at first, but then smiled and hugged back. "I'll miss you, Ty."

"I'll miss you too, Elania. Love you," Typi's voice was muffled by Elania's sweater, but Elania could hear her, loud and clear. There was a cough from beside her, which made Typi look up.

"Oh, Rundas, didn't see you there," Typi said.

Rundas rolled his eyes and remarked sarcastically, "Of course you didn't."

Typi smiled and stuck her tongue out, before letting go of Elania and wandering over to Ray, who was talking to Pixie. She stood beside Ray and poked him in his cheek, causing him to look at her. Those soft, dark oak eyes which were a maze she'd gotten lost in countless times now stared right at her own pair.

"Hey," Ray said. Typi smiled a small, sad smile.

"Bye, UmBrina #2," Typi chuckled, before waving and walking away. Ray rolled his eyes before shouting after her, "Bye Adum!"

"UmBrina #2 and Adum? What kinds of nicknames are those?" Pixie laughed. Ray shrugged.

"Our favourite singer shipped with the word "Um"."

"Weirdos."

***

Laura embraced Ray. "Goodbye Ray, good luck. Hope you win."

Ray nodded as they parted. "Thanks. Good luck in life, Laura."

A sudden thought came to Laura's mind, which made her glare daggers at Ray. "You better not quote Avicii right now or you are dead. Dead."

"Alright then. One day you'll leave this world behind, so live a life you will remember." Ray grinned cheekily and Laura punched him in his side, causing him to yelp in pain.

"Owww!" Ray frowned. Laura chuckled.

"Okay, for real this time, good bye, Ray," Laura smiled, backing out the door. Ray nodded and smiled back, waving to Laura as she left. There was a sudden weight on Ray's shoulder. Looking next to him, Ray almost connected lips with Jc. Jumping back, Ray said, "Hey Jc."

"Hey Palmtree. I see you're very popular, eh?" Jc winked, earning a glare from Ray. "Hey, it's meant as a compliment."

"Mhm."

***

Pixie and Shielo sat in Shielo's room, playing a rhyming game they had come up with to past the time. Shielo was the person starting this time.

"Duck."

"Luck." Pixie almost said the F word. Almost. She barely just saved herself.

"Tuck."

"Guck."

"That's an actual word?" Shielo asked, trying to raise an eyebrow but failing miserably. Pixie nodded.

"You can check Google if you don't believe me," Pixie said. "Your turn."

"Pluck."

"Truck."

"Buck."

"Chuck."

"Cluck."

"Yuck."

"Struck."

"Stuck."

"Can we stop now? I've run out of words," Shielo chuckled at herself. Pixie grinned at her victory.

"I won, I won, I WON!!" Pixie chanted, earning a light punch from Shielo, and a laugh which escaped her lips though she tried to stop it. Pixie lay on Shielo's bed, little bits of laughter slipping from her mouth. She grabbed a pillow and slammed it into Shielo's arm, sparking a pillow fight.

"Hey!" Shielo scowled at Pixie, before picking up a pillow and using it to punch Pixie's abdomen. Pixie slapped Shielo's forehead, Shielo hit her in her left leg, they fought using pillows for about 10 minutes before there was a knock at the door, which was probably Sara calling them to dinner.

"Coming!" Pixie hopped off Shielo's bed and opened the door, only to be greeted not by Sara, but by Ray, who was looking a bit nervous. He grabbed Pixie's hand and thrust a crumpled piece of paper into her hand before running off. Pixie looked at the paper. It said, "For Pixie's eyes only." Pixie glanced at Shielo.

"Hey Shielo, I'm going to have to cut our hangout short, I have to do something. I'll talk to you later?" Pixie said. She really wanted to continue messing around with Shielo, but she felt like the paper held some sort of important message.

Shielo frowned, but she was quick to cover it with a bright smile. "Sure! I'll speak to you at dinner I guess." She waved, and soon Pixie was out of her room. She walked to her own room, the crumpled piece of paper clutched in her hand.

***

Pixie made sure to lock the door before laying on her bed and opening the paper. She stared at the paper, at what it had to say.

"I cheated the system, just to be with you."

It was a love letter. Was it a love letter? Pixie wasn't sure. It definitely seemed like one, though. She looked near the bottom, but there wasn't a name to show who'd written to note. Prime suspect would be Ray, since he gave the paper to Pixie, but anyone could've just asked him to.

Pixie's thoughts wandered to Wolfie. Was he smart enough to cheat the system? Pixie thought of all the times she'd seen him messing with some pretty high tech stuff. Yeah, he'd probably be able to pull this off. The real question though, was would he really do it?
Lol almost say the F word XXDDD
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