WIP // give constructive criticism

[wishing]

I’m working on a TBB/TBBS map, yes there’s going to be walls but I haven’t finished yet. I just kind of wanna know if there anything I can improve on right now?

 

[blackjana]

maybe for the tree add roots but if there already is and I cant see then sorry

your map looks great so far <3

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[wishing]

maybe for the tree add roots but if there already is and I cant see then sorry

your map looks great so far <3

I’ll add more now <3

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[blackjana]

I’ll add more now <3

You're very talented I believe in u

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[wishing]

You're very talented I believe in u

Tysmmm you’re the best

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[AllyMac_]

I’m working on a TBB/TBBS map, yes there’s going to be walls but I haven’t finished yet. I just kind of wanna know if there anything I can improve on right now?
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Nothing as of yet- looks great- also if you are interested the floor doesn't have to be white terracotta as long as Vertx can discern where the floor is (like with a border) anything can work in place of it

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[wishing]

Nothing as of yet- looks great- also if you are interested the floor doesn't have to be white terracotta as long as Vertx can discern where the floor is (like with a border) anything can work in place of it

Oh- I actually didn’t know that xd. I think I might leave it like that and change it if I think the map would suit it uwu thank you!

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[AllyMac_]

Oh- I actually didn’t know that xd. I think I might leave it like that and change it if I think the map would suit it uwu thank you!

You're welcome- I always use clay or lt gray concrete powder on mine b/c to me white terracotta looks like a flesh tone

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[Reco_]

I’m working on a TBB/TBBS map, yes there’s going to be walls but I haven’t finished yet. I just kind of wanna know if there anything I can improve on right now?
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THIS MAP IS INSANE ! The Only suggestion I have is to change the floor to another block other then that it looks cool so far

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[wishing]

THIS MAP IS INSANE ! The Only suggestion I have is to change the floor to another block other then that it looks cool so far

Thank you!

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[wishing]

What block should I make the floor? I’m curious xd

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[_NeonGreen_]

I’m working on a TBB/TBBS map, yes there’s going to be walls but I haven’t finished yet. I just kind of wanna know if there anything I can improve on right now?
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I like the outer base ground work with the mini details in the grass. Keep it up! Looks great ;P

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[Bearrel]

What block should I make the floor? I’m curious xd

I personally like the grey concrete powder ally mentioned. But I think brown concrete powder might look good since your map has a naturalistic feel to it.

And nice job on the map so far! I am excited to see the final version

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[_NeonGreen_]

What block should I make the floor? I’m curious xd

I feel like a more darker color would work or a more detailed block. Kinda like what ally said with the concrete powder

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[Sphynxx]

Looks really cool! The bottom of the house looks neat, and the top of the roof too! I like the floweriness on the grass. The mushroom looks a bit straight up, maybe having it bend a bit more would be cool, but that might look weird. Gravel or clay would make a good floor. What is the name?

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[wishing]

Looks really cool! The bottom of the house looks neat, and the top of the roof too! I like the floweriness on the grass. The mushroom looks a bit straight up, maybe having it bend a bit more would be cool, but that might look weird. Gravel or clay would make a good floor. What is the name?

Yea I was thinking that about the mushrooms too, and I’m not sure what to name it xd

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[TheCooki3Cat]

It's so beautiful, it gives off a mythical pixie type theme to me. But also like a secret oasis. This map would actually be super cool to play in! Also I would wait to change the floor as you might find a cute block you'd want to do when its finished!

Amazing!!

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[Reco_]

What block should I make the floor? I’m curious xd

Hmm , maybe wood?

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[SplashingPaint836]

The leaves of the branch from the tree could be more natural. Add a few holes in the leaves and make the shape more random and imperfect since no tree is perfectly shaped!

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[karmatic]

Looks great so far!
Maybe you can add fairy lights dotted in the tree, I think it'll look pretty at night

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