Western city updated

[Austinredstoner]

Map name: Western city
Server: TNT run
Build by: @Austinredstoner

changelog
Added 3 extra layers
Video and download link here

 

[Austinredstoner]

I forgot to put the link to my last thread of the map here's the link if u want https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/western-city.128307/

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[temmie!!]

still lacks detail qwq

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[Austinredstoner]

still lacks detail qwq

Well I updated it I also added a video of it maybe try downloading the map or it's because u didn't watch the video

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[temmie!!]

Well I updated it I also added a video of it maybe try downloading the map or it's because u didn't watch the video

still lacks detail

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[Austinredstoner]

still lacks detail

Have u download the map I added the download link to it

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[Ryupaii]

I agree with @Pxbbles. You can improve this design so much more. Like when I saw this, all I thought was placing blocks randomly for the walls and I also believe the space for the levels is small. However, I do enjoy the fact that the blocks you choose matched your theme in the title.^^

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[lucas1901]

This isn't really a "Western City", it's just blocks randomised in a wall which is pretty plain tbh. You should instead try making some western style buildings as the background, it'd look muchh better than this wall

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[Austinredstoner]

This isn't really a "Western City", it's just blocks randomised in a wall which is pretty plain tbh. You should instead try making some western style buildings as the background, it'd look muchh better than this wall

I agree with @Pxbbles. You can improve this design so much more. Like when I saw this, all I thought was placing blocks randomly for the walls and I also believe the space for the levels is small. However, I do enjoy the fact that the blocks you choose matched your theme in the title.^^

still lacks detail

Should I try replacing the stone or should I re build the whole thing with different blocks

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[lucas1901]

Should I try replacing the stone or should I re build the whole thing with different blocks

Sorry dude but the wall is very plain and doesn't look very good You should remove it and search up western style stuff for inspiration. Here are some photos that can help:

Adding those buildings and that background and really give it more of a "Western" feel, and it'd look much better and detailed (sry if i wasn't clear enough before)

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[temmie!!]

Should I try replacing the stone or should I re build the whole thing with different blocks

Instead of just a wall add more things like a ranch, a house, a blacksmith, cacti, etc the things I’d see in a cowboy movie

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[Austinredstoner]

This isn't really a "Western City", it's just blocks randomised in a wall which is pretty plain tbh. You should instead try making some western style buildings as the background, it'd look muchh better than this wall

OK I will start all over hopefully next time there's no problem with it

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[temmie!!]

OK I will start all over hopefully next time there's no problem with it

it takes time to build a map, especially a good one. Try and spend more time on it by giving it more detail and stuff

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[BopI]

bruh agree with all of the tops

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[p0tat03_]

not much of a western city

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[Dominicshortbow]

Like what Lucas said, take a look at some images of the western buildings. Then what I suggest is to but the walls as invisible barriers and behind the barriers you could add all western buildings and background stuff like cactuses. Take a look at the Murder Mystery Map called Wild West. That should give some good ideas, but I would copy their building. Try making your own style of Wild West.
Also for people to know that's there are barrier blocks, put like red wool around the floor of the barriers.

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[temmie!!]

Like this has more detail that all of your map-
Like the patterns with the boarder-

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[AnUnknownDuck]

Honestly I’m a noob at building but I think maybe you could make some layers a bit bigger...?
Then, you could add some decoration like a building
Also, same I agree, it’s a bit plain :/
You don’t have to use this advice tho-
Yup okay this is bad advice xD

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[liax]

bruh if this is added i would play run more oftenbut yes more detail plsssssssss

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[Eyow189]

Map name: Western city
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Added 3 extra layers
Video and download link here

I agree with lucas, I was considering not saying it because I usually hurt people by being straight forward but this isn't really a western city, it's just a wall made with randomized blocks that don't even compliment each other, there's no city either. Lucas has sent some pictures for future builds which for me inspired me a lot I hope you are. You have the guts to make maps but don't have the skills.... yet. Good luck ^-^

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