Water Fight! Part 1 of 2

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I haven’t written in some time, so this may not be very good. Hope you enjoy though.



It was a hot summer day when a group of friends met up at the neighborhood park. It was so hot that everyone didn’t want to exert themselves. Everyone was laying under the trees enjoying the slight coolness of the shade they gave. Suddenly Limber sat up, “Guys! I have an idea for something we could do.”
Everyone looked at him as he kept explaining,
“How about a water fight? I can find some water guns and we can have two teams.”
As everyone agreed, Limber ran off somewhere in search of the water guns. While he was away, FireFox and DogLover decided to come up with the teams. Team Blue would be Icy, FireFox, Vix, and Fheo. Red Team would be DogLover, Limber, Nash, and Pufflin.

A few minutes after deciding teams, Limber ran back with just the right amount of water guns. Everyone took a weapon as Icy set up some rules with Limber’s help.
“Alright. Fill your guns and then we will get 5 minutes to disperse and hide. After 5 minutes, I’ll call out, then the games begin” explained Icy, as she filled her own gun.

Once everyone’s guns were filled, Limber gave the word. Everyone ran in separate directions, trying to find that perfect spot for the game. After 5 minutes passed, Icy called out “Goodluck guys! Let the game begin!”
When Nash heard Icy, he figured out where she was hiding by her voice. It wasn’t very far from his own spot. Nash decided to take her out before anyone else would come by. He looked around to be safe, before sneaking towards where he heard Icy.

Icy knew that yelling out would give her position away. That’s why she and Fheo had decided to hide near each other. If someone went after her voice, Fheo was in the perfect position to see them. Icy pushed her back against the tree she was behind as a bush rustled off to the side. Fheo heard it to, and shot the bush. However, a now wet bunny hopped out of the bush. Fheo felt bad for shooting the bunny with water, so she apologized to it. Icy found it funny and turned to look around. As soon as she did though, Fheo let out a screech of surprise. When Icy turned back around, Fheo‘s face was soaking wet. Icy ran over, determined to shoot whoever got Fheo.

As Icy ran through the bushes where Fheo was, she fired some shots towards the direction Fheo said the first shot came from. After several shots in somewhat random directions, Icy landed a lucky shot. Pufflin came out to where Icy was, shirt soaking wet. “That didn’t go very well” laughed Pufflin. Somehow, Icy heard footsteps from behind her through Puff’s laughter. She turned quickly and aimed her water gun. Nash emerged from the bushes, aiming his gun at Icy. Fheo and Pufflin slowly backed out of the way.

Nash and Icy both held their aim. They watched each other closely, waiting to see the other move their finger to shoot. They stood there a couple minutes, their arms slowly getting tired. Nash was the first to break, he moved his finger down on the trigger. Icy was fast to notice, and pulled her trigger too. Icy and Nash were both hit. Fheo and Puff stared in shock, but Icy and Nash both laughed at themselves. “Okay okay, I gotta admit, that was kind of cool” Nash said, once he stopped laughing. He and Icy gave each other a high-five. Fheo walked over to the two, saying “Half the teams are out already. That was surely fast.”
Pufflin nodded with agreement. “It certainly was,” he said, “ Come on, let’s go wait for the others to start fighting.”
The four walked back to the trees they were at earlier, discussing which team they thought would win.


Eliminated: Icy, Pufflin, Fheo, Nash.
Left: FireFox, DogLover, Limber, Vix.
 
Great job on making up a story, surely water refreshes our body cuz it’s darn hot whenever it’s summer :coffee:.Also I loved the way you make up a story with different emotions, I can sense the real scenario of the story, somehow, I made up own faces of those people (on the story) that didn’t revealed their face yet.

Edit;
The faces I made up were not really that bad :D.
Please don’t ask me what face I had came up with, it won’t be good to see cuz
I’m not really coped up with drawing :confused:.
Although I can hire a good artist to draw it, however, I don’t know :p.
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I haven’t written in some time, so this may not be very good. Hope you enjoy though.



It was a hot summer day when a group of friends met up at the neighborhood park. It was so hot that everyone didn’t want to exert themselves. Everyone was laying under the trees enjoying the slight coolness of the shade they gave. Suddenly Limber sat up, “Guys! I have an idea for something we could do.”
Everyone looked at him as he kept explaining,
“How about a water fight? I can find some water guns and we can have two teams.”
As everyone agreed, Limber ran off somewhere in search of the water guns. While he was away, FireFox and DogLover decided to come up with the teams. Team Blue would be Icy, FireFox, Vix, and Fheo. Red Team would be DogLover, Limber, Nash, and Pufflin.

A few minutes after deciding teams, Limber ran back with just the right amount of water guns. Everyone took a weapon as Icy set up some rules with Limber’s help.
“Alright. Fill your guns and then we will get 5 minutes to disperse and hide. After 5 minutes, I’ll call out, then the games begin” explained Icy, as she filled her own gun.

Once everyone’s guns were filled, Limber gave the word. Everyone ran in separate directions, trying to find that perfect spot for the game. After 5 minutes passed, Icy called out “Goodluck guys! Let the game begin!”
When Nash heard Icy, he figured out where she was hiding by her voice. It wasn’t very far from his own spot. Nash decided to take her out before anyone else would come by. He looked around to be safe, before sneaking towards where he heard Icy.

Icy knew that yelling out would give her position away. That’s why she and Fheo had decided to hide near each other. If someone went after her voice, Fheo was in the perfect position to see them. Icy pushed her back against the tree she was behind as a bush rustled off to the side. Fheo heard it to, and shot the bush. However, a now wet bunny hopped out of the bush. Fheo felt bad for shooting the bunny with water, so she apologized to it. Icy found it funny and turned to look around. As soon as she did though, Fheo let out a screech of surprise. When Icy turned back around, Fheo‘s face was soaking wet. Icy ran over, determined to shoot whoever got Fheo.

As Icy ran through the bushes where Fheo was, she fired some shots towards the direction Fheo said the first shot came from. After several shots in somewhat random directions, Icy landed a lucky shot. Pufflin came out to where Icy was, shirt soaking wet. “That didn’t go very well” laughed Pufflin. Somehow, Icy heard footsteps from behind her through Puff’s laughter. She turned quickly and aimed her water gun. Nash emerged from the bushes, aiming his gun at Icy. Fheo and Pufflin slowly backed out of the way.

Nash and Icy both held their aim. They watched each other closely, waiting to see the other move their finger to shoot. They stood there a couple minutes, their arms slowly getting tired. Nash was the first to break, he moved his finger down on the trigger. Icy was fast to notice, and pulled her trigger too. Icy and Nash were both hit. Fheo and Puff stared in shock, but Icy and Nash both laughed at themselves. “Okay okay, I gotta admit, that was kind of cool” Nash said, once he stopped laughing. He and Icy gave each other a high-five. Fheo walked over to the two, saying “Half the teams are out already. That was surely fast.”
Pufflin nodded with agreement. “It certainly was,” he said, “ Come on, let’s go wait for the others to start fighting.”
The four walked back to the trees they were at earlier, discussing which team they thought would win.


Eliminated: Icy, Pufflin, Fheo, Nash.
Left: FireFox, DogLover, Limber, Vix.
This is just a suggestion (if ever you would post the part 2 before the end of halloween), you should add spooky features in the story :D
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