Valley Farm || WIP || OITC

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Only 2 screenshots at the moment. It's very poorly built... sorry like?
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my suggestions, the big pic of the whole thing, you can see the grass, and the lime terracotta really stands out from the normal grass so I suggest adding green terracotta than lime. also maybe add more detail to the house, like make the roof stick out more, otherwise gj
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use a mixture of different blocks for the cobblestone and gravel path, it looks plain
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It looks a bit small maybe expand it. You always make the outline of the borders so small and flat. Make it more tall so we don’t see an infinite grassy lawn. Also add trees and bushes just to clear up the plainness.
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my suggestions, the big pic of the whole thing, you can see the grass, and the lime terracotta really stands out from the normal grass so I suggest adding green terracotta than lime. also maybe add more detail to the house, like make the roof stick out more, otherwise gj
They can use green powder, lime stained clay, and/or green wool for texturizing the grass.
use a mixture of different blocks for the cobblestone and gravel path, it looks plain
They should use andesite, stone, and stone brick for the texture of the path just to name a few.
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it looks too small for oitc, you should make some more spacious areas for pvp and maybe make the terrain higher, i suggest changing that water to stained glass for more like pvp area, GL improving it
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Maybe you need build more terrain.
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Its too small, and the hills also looks small
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