wishing
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Dear staff of Broken Lens.
Hey, my name is wishing. I play on your games as much as possible, as you know. You have a built in feature that stops pain being given in PvP games. Well there is a problem with your newest game Murder Mystery. The game was good, loading in. Full game but.. we got no night vision. No countdown timer, no voting system. All we had was chat. I don’t know if you put this in on purpose but the narrator of the game sends shivers down my spine. They don’t sound normal. But maybe it was just a horror game and you forgot to say. Well, we got in the game, uhh I’ll just tell you what happened.
The lobby.
Dark, the only word to describe it. No sound. Silence broke to The familiar sound of a television switching on.
“Good evening contestants!” A raspy voice said as it broke up over the mic. The voice was hard to make out as all that was heard was static. People started waking up finding themselves spread across a snowy plain.
They woke up next to books, quite heavy books. Wishing shook the snow off her hair as she picked up the old rustic looking book. Kono flicked through and threw it in the Bush. People where sat on the bushes and in the corners with black hoodies.
NOW, that I have gotten your attention please listen up. All 24 of you have been chosen to compete in today’s games.” Said the emotionless voice. “What... games?” Questioned a quite timid female. The screen went bust and started showing pictures of rooms, in a quite big looking house. “Pick up those books.” They demanded.
Wishing - What’s this?
??? - These are the rules of our little game, now-
Wishing - Game? what kind of game has rules like this!? She clutched Kongo tight.
??? - you, all 24 of you will be put inside this mansion. Escape. You will be eliminated. The only way out is to survive. 23 innocents. 1 murderer. If you are the murderer and don’t kill. You will face a painful punishment.
They meant that last part. Wishing huffed as she had been cut off.
??? - Everyone will get a walkytalky. The murderer doesn’t.
Моё
имя
твой
страх,
кровоточит
на
губах
A new breaking point.
That tune ringed inside their heads as they appeared in the Victorian style mansion. Wishing rushed to her loved one as the screen appeared on the grey wall. “Remember. Breaking the rules results in a permimant disqualification.” A large, butcher knife with a pink-ish tint appeared on Konos Lap. He looked at it with greaving eyes “uhhh what? Why me!...” Wishing held is shoulder. “They never said anything about innocents teaming” she said in a comforting tone. “That doesn’t shake the fact that I have to kill people” he said in a broken tone as the timer went down. People where running up the stairs communicating to eatchother through the devices. They where getting up to high places and in cupboards.
Wishing peered over the balcony to see a person holding the gun. He was doing all sorts to people. Hitting them, pretending to shoot them. “Kill Him last, they cant even hold it properly” Wishing said as kono stood up with the knife hidden in his jumper. He walked into a desolate hallway where a ginger girl was skipping to the main room. He shifted towards her with great ease. Swiftly disqualifying her. 2 minutes, a broad voice shouted. Kono shivered, “22 more to go...” as much as he tried he couldn’t, he couldn’t bare to kill another. He tried chasing Powell but they jumped downstairs and dispersed on the bottom floor. The timer came to a stop.
TOTAL KILLED - 1
ALIVE - 22
Sheriff - DISQUALIFIED FOR ABUSING.
“not as good as I thought but decent. As I said, no kills means disqualification. You’re free to go”
Kono - PHEW
Wishing - WE DID IT KON-
“Next round guys” the voice demanded, clapping their hands. be here in 10.
Wishing and the rest where teleported to a old looking village. An ice fountain in the middle. And little cottages
AleGC24108368 - what was that about?
Justs3xy - I have no idea...
Wishing - We will find out more, don’t worry
She huffed while wishing sat on the frozen over fountain.
??? - “Times OVER, please remain back to your current position and STAY STILL”
they did just that, not wanting to displease the creature behind this.
Dear wishing.
Thanks for your feedback of our server, complaints like these help us advance our server and make it a better experience, we currently do not have a game called murder mystery on our server and we do not plan to. Narrators are to hard to code into our game at the moment, And the usernames you mentioned, don’t exits on our database. We suggest you do not send “prank emails” here as it wastes staff time when we could be doing more important things. If players are annoying you, you have the /ignore command.
Yourself sincerely - The Broken Lens staff team.
Authors note :
Ok so, I’ve never wrote a story before so sorry if it’s bad! I will improve, I promise!
if you want to be a contestant in the next episode just ask meh
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Hey, my name is wishing. I play on your games as much as possible, as you know. You have a built in feature that stops pain being given in PvP games. Well there is a problem with your newest game Murder Mystery. The game was good, loading in. Full game but.. we got no night vision. No countdown timer, no voting system. All we had was chat. I don’t know if you put this in on purpose but the narrator of the game sends shivers down my spine. They don’t sound normal. But maybe it was just a horror game and you forgot to say. Well, we got in the game, uhh I’ll just tell you what happened.
The lobby.
Dark, the only word to describe it. No sound. Silence broke to The familiar sound of a television switching on.
“Good evening contestants!” A raspy voice said as it broke up over the mic. The voice was hard to make out as all that was heard was static. People started waking up finding themselves spread across a snowy plain.
They woke up next to books, quite heavy books. Wishing shook the snow off her hair as she picked up the old rustic looking book. Kono flicked through and threw it in the Bush. People where sat on the bushes and in the corners with black hoodies.
NOW, that I have gotten your attention please listen up. All 24 of you have been chosen to compete in today’s games.” Said the emotionless voice. “What... games?” Questioned a quite timid female. The screen went bust and started showing pictures of rooms, in a quite big looking house. “Pick up those books.” They demanded.
Wishing - What’s this?
??? - These are the rules of our little game, now-
Wishing - Game? what kind of game has rules like this!? She clutched Kongo tight.
??? - you, all 24 of you will be put inside this mansion. Escape. You will be eliminated. The only way out is to survive. 23 innocents. 1 murderer. If you are the murderer and don’t kill. You will face a painful punishment.
They meant that last part. Wishing huffed as she had been cut off.
??? - Everyone will get a walkytalky. The murderer doesn’t.
Моё
имя
твой
страх,
кровоточит
на
губах
A new breaking point.
That tune ringed inside their heads as they appeared in the Victorian style mansion. Wishing rushed to her loved one as the screen appeared on the grey wall. “Remember. Breaking the rules results in a permimant disqualification.” A large, butcher knife with a pink-ish tint appeared on Konos Lap. He looked at it with greaving eyes “uhhh what? Why me!...” Wishing held is shoulder. “They never said anything about innocents teaming” she said in a comforting tone. “That doesn’t shake the fact that I have to kill people” he said in a broken tone as the timer went down. People where running up the stairs communicating to eatchother through the devices. They where getting up to high places and in cupboards.
Wishing peered over the balcony to see a person holding the gun. He was doing all sorts to people. Hitting them, pretending to shoot them. “Kill Him last, they cant even hold it properly” Wishing said as kono stood up with the knife hidden in his jumper. He walked into a desolate hallway where a ginger girl was skipping to the main room. He shifted towards her with great ease. Swiftly disqualifying her. 2 minutes, a broad voice shouted. Kono shivered, “22 more to go...” as much as he tried he couldn’t, he couldn’t bare to kill another. He tried chasing Powell but they jumped downstairs and dispersed on the bottom floor. The timer came to a stop.
TOTAL KILLED - 1
ALIVE - 22
Sheriff - DISQUALIFIED FOR ABUSING.
“not as good as I thought but decent. As I said, no kills means disqualification. You’re free to go”
Kono - PHEW
Wishing - WE DID IT KON-
“Next round guys” the voice demanded, clapping their hands. be here in 10.
Wishing and the rest where teleported to a old looking village. An ice fountain in the middle. And little cottages
AleGC24108368 - what was that about?
Justs3xy - I have no idea...
Wishing - We will find out more, don’t worry
She huffed while wishing sat on the frozen over fountain.
??? - “Times OVER, please remain back to your current position and STAY STILL”
they did just that, not wanting to displease the creature behind this.
Dear wishing.
Thanks for your feedback of our server, complaints like these help us advance our server and make it a better experience, we currently do not have a game called murder mystery on our server and we do not plan to. Narrators are to hard to code into our game at the moment, And the usernames you mentioned, don’t exits on our database. We suggest you do not send “prank emails” here as it wastes staff time when we could be doing more important things. If players are annoying you, you have the /ignore command.
Yourself sincerely - The Broken Lens staff team.
Authors note :
Ok so, I’ve never wrote a story before so sorry if it’s bad! I will improve, I promise!
if you want to be a contestant in the next episode just ask meh |
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