Vegito72
Notable Member
- Mar 2, 2016
- 571
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Here is a list of things wrong with the shop:
"Your purchase help us to keep BrokenLens up and running, and will motivate us to improve your gamimg experience even more!", it should say "Your purchase helps us keep BrokenLens up and running, and will motivate us to improve your gaming experience even more!" Also the even more is not needed but k.
"Items such particles and sounds will not expiry", what it should say is "Items such as particles and sounds will not expire"
"15000 coins bonus!" Technically you can't sell soft currency (in game/fake money) for hard currency (real money)
"Level 2 for Kits on PvP games" I believe this might fall onto the list of things not allowed to sell for hard currency, along with selling the ability to craft items and selling unbans
"Minecraft is a trademark of Mojang AB.", should probably add "NOT OFFICIAL MINECRAFT PRODUCT. NOT APPROVED BY OR ASSOCIATED WITH MOJANG"
"Did you were so bad when you started playing but is far better now? don’t want it to be displayed on your BrokenLens public profile?, then this item is for you.", it should say "Were you so bad when you started playing but are far better now? don’t want it to be displayed on your BrokenLens public profile?, then this item is for you."
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"Your purchase help us to keep BrokenLens up and running, and will motivate us to improve your gamimg experience even more!", it should say "Your purchase helps us keep BrokenLens up and running, and will motivate us to improve your gaming experience even more!" Also the even more is not needed but k.
"Items such particles and sounds will not expiry", what it should say is "Items such as particles and sounds will not expire"
"15000 coins bonus!" Technically you can't sell soft currency (in game/fake money) for hard currency (real money)
"Level 2 for Kits on PvP games" I believe this might fall onto the list of things not allowed to sell for hard currency, along with selling the ability to craft items and selling unbans
"Minecraft is a trademark of Mojang AB.", should probably add "NOT OFFICIAL MINECRAFT PRODUCT. NOT APPROVED BY OR ASSOCIATED WITH MOJANG"
"Did you were so bad when you started playing but is far better now? don’t want it to be displayed on your BrokenLens public profile?, then this item is for you.", it should say "Were you so bad when you started playing but are far better now? don’t want it to be displayed on your BrokenLens public profile?, then this item is for you."
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