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Before I begin, This is a Christmas GIft Story to @Itz_CoolieShive and his idea too so thank him for it ^-^
I'm those stupid writer that make no sense what so ever .-. Wow other people story get so much attention while I get none -.-
Anyways the only reason I accept his story submission was because I didn't have anything to do until I put sign up for The kids who stole Christmas story on December 5 so I have like 5 days ( started in November 30 ) to write whatever I want! So now I shall tell the story but if you want to see how it started or how the story work then it will be in the spoiler but for now let's start!
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Story info:
Type of story: Adventurous
Rate story: 7/10
Made by: @Ericthewriter ( to
@Itz_CoolieShive )
( If you were Writing this story) Writing time: 4 hour 34 Minutes
Actual Took to write: 2 Hour 43 min 04 sec
Words in total: 3,747 Words 18,601 character
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<------- How it started
<------ What is the story about?
Let's start ;D
The young boy ran and ran with all his guts to the nearest store that he can find, rush into the story, graped his $30 dollars that he had in his pocket and brought everything that a family will need for a blizzard that was going on outside. He raced back to his house which was like 1 mile away from what he ran from. He didn't care what got in his way! He kept running and running no matter what got in his way.
He finally got back in his house and time to spare in fact. Her mother lighten up a candle so they can in the dark since the light was out. The young boy got out the food he brought with his pocket money for the family to eat for at least 3 days until they decided what to do. The room was getting darker and colder to even be out of bed. They all went to bed and hoping the next day was better.
But sadly it wasn't better in fact it was worse. Door were jam cause of the snow, people couldn't go to work due to the high snow, there was still no power inside the town, but the good news to him was there was no school lol. Her mother couldn't handle the cold so she kept herself in bed for the hole day.
Same went for her husband, to cold to get out of bed. So they both stay in bed except the young boy.
The young boy didn't care that it was cold outside. He went into the living room, got some wood from the attic and fire it up in the fire camp.
He went into the kitchen, got some hot chocolate recipe, some marshmallows and brought the hole thing to the living room. He started cooking the hot chocolate in the camp fire near it and waited for about 20 minutes to cook and after it did, he put the marshmallow inside it and drank it.
3 house later, he was so borad of the house that he decided to go outside into the snow and start his journey on his own and into the world! He got long socks, a hat, hoodie, long pants, mittens, snow shoes, and his trustee magic wand in cause if anything bad happens to him. He knew that something bad will happen but whatever that was, he was ready. He told his parents and they said sure has long has he was near home, it was fine. So of he was.
He open the door, and close it gently so nobody in his neighborhood heard him. He headed to the Snowy woods to find his Adventure that was waiting for him. Hours and hours past, the sun was setting down for the day and the moon was taking over. There was still no power in the town has he can see in the distance. He didn't want to go back home yet cause he knew that something out there was still want for him.
Until something hit him in the head, it made him fall and bleed a bit. He was ok but he wanted to know what hit him in the head. 2 minutes after he found what hit him and to his surprised it was a glowing green stone. It also had a note on the back of the glowing green stone. It said "Follow the green glow and there it will lead you to your destiny". He was excited and happy to find his journey!
He raced into the woods that the glowing light took him. Time was running out and the glowing stone was disappearing in his sight. It's was almost 8:00pm and he still haven't find his journey. He was so excited to start his journey just to be spoiled in a beautiful day. He started walking home sadly until he saw a glow in the woods. He ran to the glowing thing that was waiting for him and finally he found it. It was dream come true.
What he saw was no other thing he ever saw in his life. It was like a 10.8 foot tall portal that was glowing blue inside of it. But once he got closer the stone snap out of his hand and went into the portal. He got push back and fell on his face. He got up, wondering on what happen to it. He thought and thought and finally he got the idea.
He got up from the snow and was think of actually going throw the portal that was in front of him. He was scard that if he went through it, there was not going to be another way to get back home. But that didn't stop the young boy of ruining his
Adventure. He took a step back, before he jump into it he thought of his family and memory before he went into it. He pray for it.
He thought it was finally time to jump into the portal and he was going to be a hero at the end of the story. The young boy didn't care on what was in his way. He didn't care on what happen to himself! He was going into the portal, get the stone back and save the world of Town center. He was no other then Shive! Shive was the young boy that was going to save the town. He jump into the portal but on that point. Thing just got real.
I'm those stupid writer that make no sense what so ever .-. Wow other people story get so much attention while I get none -.-
Anyways the only reason I accept his story submission was because I didn't have anything to do until I put sign up for The kids who stole Christmas story on December 5 so I have like 5 days ( started in November 30 ) to write whatever I want! So now I shall tell the story but if you want to see how it started or how the story work then it will be in the spoiler but for now let's start!
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Story info:
Type of story: Adventurous
Rate story: 7/10
Made by: @Ericthewriter ( to
@Itz_CoolieShive )
( If you were Writing this story) Writing time: 4 hour 34 Minutes
Actual Took to write: 2 Hour 43 min 04 sec
Words in total: 3,747 Words 18,601 character
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So I was just finished posting a message on Ray profile and ya know we were chatting. Until Itz_CoolieShive came out of nowhere XD anyways he mentioned that he wanted to write a story about like a story that had the characters from frozen in it and he said that if I was free this week and could write it! And I sayed yes duh and ya that all lol.
So what the story is about is some characters from the movie Frozen. Ok fine ya you hate that movie but I'm not coping the movie I'm just going to use the characters of the story and mix thing up a bit that all.
Let's start ;D
Chapter1: Was i͙t͙ o͙u͙r͙ h͙o͙m͙e͙?
Once upon a time in a village not so far from the river of Mississippi River live a brave yet Adventurous kid that love to explore new stuff around his town. One day in December it was snowing so hard that the town power went off. Everyone was panicking cause they didn't know what to do since they weren't prepare for this. But that didn't stop the young boy in the village. He step outside and went with all his might to get some stuff for his house.
The young boy ran and ran with all his guts to the nearest store that he can find, rush into the story, graped his $30 dollars that he had in his pocket and brought everything that a family will need for a blizzard that was going on outside. He raced back to his house which was like 1 mile away from what he ran from. He didn't care what got in his way! He kept running and running no matter what got in his way.
He finally got back in his house and time to spare in fact. Her mother lighten up a candle so they can in the dark since the light was out. The young boy got out the food he brought with his pocket money for the family to eat for at least 3 days until they decided what to do. The room was getting darker and colder to even be out of bed. They all went to bed and hoping the next day was better.
But sadly it wasn't better in fact it was worse. Door were jam cause of the snow, people couldn't go to work due to the high snow, there was still no power inside the town, but the good news to him was there was no school lol. Her mother couldn't handle the cold so she kept herself in bed for the hole day.
Same went for her husband, to cold to get out of bed. So they both stay in bed except the young boy.
The young boy didn't care that it was cold outside. He went into the living room, got some wood from the attic and fire it up in the fire camp.
He went into the kitchen, got some hot chocolate recipe, some marshmallows and brought the hole thing to the living room. He started cooking the hot chocolate in the camp fire near it and waited for about 20 minutes to cook and after it did, he put the marshmallow inside it and drank it.
3 house later, he was so borad of the house that he decided to go outside into the snow and start his journey on his own and into the world! He got long socks, a hat, hoodie, long pants, mittens, snow shoes, and his trustee magic wand in cause if anything bad happens to him. He knew that something bad will happen but whatever that was, he was ready. He told his parents and they said sure has long has he was near home, it was fine. So of he was.
He open the door, and close it gently so nobody in his neighborhood heard him. He headed to the Snowy woods to find his Adventure that was waiting for him. Hours and hours past, the sun was setting down for the day and the moon was taking over. There was still no power in the town has he can see in the distance. He didn't want to go back home yet cause he knew that something out there was still want for him.
Until something hit him in the head, it made him fall and bleed a bit. He was ok but he wanted to know what hit him in the head. 2 minutes after he found what hit him and to his surprised it was a glowing green stone. It also had a note on the back of the glowing green stone. It said "Follow the green glow and there it will lead you to your destiny". He was excited and happy to find his journey!
He raced into the woods that the glowing light took him. Time was running out and the glowing stone was disappearing in his sight. It's was almost 8:00pm and he still haven't find his journey. He was so excited to start his journey just to be spoiled in a beautiful day. He started walking home sadly until he saw a glow in the woods. He ran to the glowing thing that was waiting for him and finally he found it. It was dream come true.
What he saw was no other thing he ever saw in his life. It was like a 10.8 foot tall portal that was glowing blue inside of it. But once he got closer the stone snap out of his hand and went into the portal. He got push back and fell on his face. He got up, wondering on what happen to it. He thought and thought and finally he got the idea.
He got up from the snow and was think of actually going throw the portal that was in front of him. He was scard that if he went through it, there was not going to be another way to get back home. But that didn't stop the young boy of ruining his
Adventure. He took a step back, before he jump into it he thought of his family and memory before he went into it. He pray for it.
He thought it was finally time to jump into the portal and he was going to be a hero at the end of the story. The young boy didn't care on what was in his way. He didn't care on what happen to himself! He was going into the portal, get the stone back and save the world of Town center. He was no other then Shive! Shive was the young boy that was going to save the town. He jump into the portal but on that point. Thing just got real.
wow gj
