[The End] S̷ummer T̷rouble- Chapter 5

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Before I start, I wanna say something

I'm sorry this last chapter is SOOOOO late ;-; I've been busy in life that I haven't got time to write but As promised, here it is! The very last chapter of the story! ^-^

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Chapter 5- S̷ummer T̷rouble [The Final]

Narrator-

Summer, in this case, didn't really go to plan according to Lauren plan. All Lauren wanted was to have a plan and to jump scare Sami and scare away his "sadness" which wasn't really nothing necessary to be upset about but of course, as Lauren good friend, she wanted to do it but unfortunately, her plan didn't go as planned. "Out of all the people, it had to be me," she said as she tried to get herself free from the incubator. Meanwhile, with the other teammates, they were in a big trouble and it wasn't like that time I got stuck in a jelly donut cause, believe me, it wasn't fun.

I couldn't tell if everyone were either crying to death or relaxed and giving no oof about what's going on around them but that's on them. What I could tell is that this evil "Fairy" or whatever was taken her sweet time about deciding about what she was going to do with them.

Now, in my point of the prospect if I was there but since I'm a narrator, I wanna give my personal opinion on this. I would actually do nothing. Now, since any random person can be reading this right now, I feel like my point of prospect won't give a damn but it can to me. Let's look at it, Everyone is doing.. well, them! Reading, Crying, Getting there phone ready almost everyone is doing them.

I feel like I'm taking all the time in this story so I'm just gonna go off-topic and let Eric tell the rest of the story. So let get everything clear up. One group was reading a manga, the other is fixing his phone, the other rest was doing nothing but sleeping. Sami, on the other hand, thinks about that this was all his fault (which really wasn't). Going off with Lauren, Stuck in the tightest incubator with green water surrounding her. Lucky for her, she can breathe so she still had a chance of making a plan.

Unfortunately for her, the water was some kind of powerless, meaning that the water was making her straight less every time she moved.

So what will it be? Will the group escape or be forever kept in prison with the so-called "fake Lauren?"
Welp, that's not on me, but on YOU.
Let's see what the others have to say and we'll, yes "we" will continue with the end of the story.

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2 point of views (hours later)-

Verified Fangirl-

Minutes felt like hours. Hours felt like days. I felt like my life was gonna end in this pit of balls without anything to eat/drink. I wonder what was taking so long for my evil twin to decide on what to do with my friends. I wanna blame Sami for all this, but that will only boost my own ego and feel bad inside of me so I'll shut up and wait until things happen in.

I stg, I don't take this long in real life to do one simple thing. Maybe somehow it got slower? Or maybe it was telling me something but I could care less. I just this to all end.

XxjwmcxX-

Hey Hey, Jay here ;D Anyways, As some of you guys already heard around the block, I was one of those "people" that doesn't care about what was going to happen but I was worry cause I forgot to feed my cat back home so eh, that might be a problem for me. Hours past and I began to get very bored around being stuck in this cave. I guess this is what it feels like, being stuck in a cave for hours. Welp, on the bight side, I can tell this to my grandkids!

Unicorn123-

Hello! I think many hours or maybe, even days has passed, being stuck in this "bat" cave. I couldn't tell what was that so-called "Fairy" was doing but she was taking her best time and that made me mad. People think just because I'm named "Unicorn", they think that I'm ACTUALLY a unicorn which I'm actually not. My hands were sweating from the heat of the cave coming in. I only wish that there was some kind of hole so some fresh air can at least come inside this hot cave.

Xemphyr-

Oof. Unfortunately, there was no signal in this cave so I couldn't call anyone inside of here. Besides, my phone was dead anyway so I couldn't do anything.

One thing that other didn't see as I saw that Lauren evil fairy was getting a rope from her home and some fireworks so I might've got an idea of what she was planning to do with us but just to be sure, I didn't want to think ahead.

Yeonie 여원-

This was me! Your local Bts fan girl person and I'm stuck in this dark and so what cave. I saw a good friend Highlight over there in the corner and he didn't lol like he was in the mood to talk so I left him there. All I wanted is to hang out with my Bts buddy and hang out. I wonder, what happens to Icy?

нigнligнт~-

Ya know me, Without Bts around me, I was left out without there music. I saw Yeonie over there and she kinda looked fine but I didn't want to disturb her so I did my thing and left thing as they were. Hours felt like days and I was getting hungry. I just wish I've chosen the right path.


Xiijqnna_-

Hello Person. It's me, Jenna and guess what? I've been stuck here for hours if you didn't know that. I haven't been this long from home since the day my dog ran away and that was not a great moment to have. Anyways Sah was here sleeping so what did they expect me to do? Nothing tbh. Being in here with basically nothing is like spending a day at Florida without going outside.

xSqhaMC-

Hey guys, yesssssss! It's me, Sah with Jenna if you didn't notice and ya, as she said, this is getting boring. Hours have past and I haven't drink or eaten anything for the past few hours. My head hurt from all this heat coming inside and I felt like I was going to die in this pit.

Minty Bqbies-

Hello, Person reading this if you even get the message. I've been stuck here for HOURS! I never expected this to happen to my life until this point in time. I felt like I was gonna melt. Like an ice cream in a 100°f heat wave in the middle of Florida.

GalacticWolf858-

It's just me and my SketchBook, nothing really interesting I guess. All I do is draw around this time I guess. I don't really know what to put here so I guess this what I do? Btw all these messages you're reading, they're in a SketchBook as well so ye, that's all?

~Ang~-

Ok, so what? Ik this might've been 30% of my fault but you can't fully blame that this was all because of me. I'm just a girl that likes to be left alone and reading my Manga ALONE.

LucasTheDutchAD-

So yea, I'm "The guy" that tried to get his phone to work but can't. Anyway, I won't try to do that since my phone is dead. I've been in here for what it felt like decades and I was started to get hungry. I didn't expect anyone to save us from this horrible thing but I just wish I'd charge my phone back before going into this trap- I mean trip, ya trip. Anyway back to you guys I guess.

_Alexa_-

As a Co-Leader of Ang group, I think I was doing a great job until she decided to go the other way and things became mixed up and I got mad at her. This was not part of the plan at all but of course, she wanted to stay outside so what did you expect from me? I went inside but she decided to do her and I got mad, as always.

I just hoped my story was more "clear up" than hers.

Snowflakss-

Me? Oh, don't mind me sitting here for hours I guess. My stomach was getting hungry but looking at the bright side, O was reading some books with my manga friends in a cave with some other people stuck in here. Idk what the other was going to do but as long as I have my friends and book, I can go on in here for hours!

EVILBANANA12345-

You guys already know me, well some of you guys. I'm those types of people that never run out of bananas cause one way or another, I always have a banana ready to eat wherever I go.

I didn't know how long I've been here considering it has been a long time and hours past but I have something to eat in hear so I can't starve to death in hearing. I don't really know about the others but eh.

Ripcord-

Okie, You've reached me to see my thoughts. Now, You've already read Lauren thought and yes, She thinks this is my damn fault but what am I to blame? I do me. It's really not my fault that this all happened.

I don't want to boost my "hate" on this but Lauren was the one that told me to go into the cave. Did I have to listen to her? No. I could've just ignored her and stay home but as a good friend, I went and now, I'm stuck in here and I think I was supposed to be a backup. All well.

Nakedsurvivor109-

I felt like hours past and don't ask me how I'm getting Wi-Fi inside this cave when other people are. It was me and one of my best friends, Banana playing on my 3D's but I knew Banana was up to something but I wasn't really interested in what he was up to. I just wanted to be left alone and play on my Ds Pokemon game.

Elkears-

My elk ears couldn't handle all this pressure in this cave. They were so big that they touched the top of the cave and unfortunately for me, this wasn't a perfect element for me. I wanted to know when I could get these elk ears off and start the winter.

I was thinking about poking that evil fairy with these elk ears but that will just risk me of a bigger punishment so I'll just stay where I am.

SazDaMarshmallow-

This is Saz. Saz doesn't do anything, or that's what they think. I'm just a girl that stands there and waits until what action is to go. I don't think of a plan cause I know, it will take my place and I'll be doing nothing and eventually, I'll get out.

Welp, As always, Good luck to everyone!

Icy_Hatake-

You guys missed me in the story? Well, I didn't go anywhere. I was just waiting for the last chapter of the story! You'll see what I'm planning hehehehehhe
 
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The Story:

The long last awaits! Hours have passed all hot in the cave with nothing to drink. But one thing is, that banana was right. She had a plan but she had a small problem. How would she grab everyone at once and tied them up into the rope? Fortunately for her, she had freeze spell so she can freeze everyone at once for a short amount of time.

Everyone else saw that she was ready to make a move so they also gather up a together and tried to make a plan.

"Hey hey, guys come!" Ang whispered to the group. Everyone tiptoes to her and made a circle around them. "So, what do you want us for," said Jay as he ate a sandwich. "Better questions, how the hell do you have a sandwich in the middle of a cave!" Question Alexa. "You know me, I'm always ready for anything *winks*," Jay said. "Guys enough with the sandwich! That's not why I called you guys here!" Ang said.

"Hurry up! What do you want?" Lucas said. "Okie, so you see the fake Lauren with the rope?" Ang said. Everyone shooked their head. "Okie, now here's the plan."

The talked for a few minutes with the group of making a plan. Ang, as the Co-leader took over to leader cause Alexa of part of the "group plan" so she had another role in the plan. Another few more minutes have past and after that, they decided that their plan was finally official

"You know, It was kinda our fault that we didn't decide this from that start" Highlight sighed while looking at his shoes. "Well, better be happy at least we have a plan now hu?" Alexa said back. "Jezz I know, thanks for that," he said with a dirty look.

It wasn't long until the evil Lauren made her move and as the time it correctly, in about 3 minutes, she'll freeze everyone but for only 1 minute. In that amount of time, she can rope everyone up and insert us to whatever she did to Lauren.

She flew up to the top of the cave and of a country, everyone knew what she was going to do next. Everyone stood there and waited for her move. She grabbed her wand and sprinkled the ice spell on them. But something unexpected happened. Everyone kept moving! "What the-?" "HOW? I DON'T UNDERSTAND!"

Everyone took off their invisible hat.

"Give it up! We know your plan with us!" Nicole shouted! "You can't fool us. We know the ice power only works of it sprinkles in our heads so we covered it with Yeonie invisible hat from her science class. "You pathetic little inmate's. But no worries, I knew this might've failed so I planned something else!" Everyone looked at each other. "So what exactly is this plan you have?" Said Snowflakes.

The evil fairy smiled and pulled down a lever. An 11x4 feet hole opened up under them and fell all the way under. "I shouldn't have said thattttttttttttt," she said as she fell with the group.

Everything went silence and dark for a few minutes. Nobody said a word. "Is everyone here?" Unicorn said. Everyone said yes with a quiet talk. "Hey! Hey guys! I've got a flashlight?" Elk said. She turns it on with a blink and started walking. Everyone started following her as she gave the direction. "This way everyone?" She said.

Are you sure you know what you're doing elk?" Naked said. "No. But we're not gonna make progress if we stand around there unless YOU have a better idea, I'm all yours!" Elk said. "Ummm no?" He said. "Then everyone, follow me!" She said.

It was a long tunnel, well, that's what it felt like to them. Elk's eyes grow bigger as she kept walking into the tunnel. "Hey guys, is it me.or does it feel like this tunnel just keeps going on?" Sami said. "Look, Sami, everyone is tired and nobody wants to hear your complains so either keep moving or give up and die!" Ang said. Everyone stopped. "Dang Ang, that was some dark stuff you just said right there may," Jenna said. "I agree," Xem and Gal said. "Look, Ang, Everyone is tired but this is for our own good!" Gal said as she puts her hand over her. "I guess you're right," she said back.

After then, the group continues into there adventure to whatever leads them into. "Are we there yet?" Said Minty? "Patient Minty. It might not look like we are making any progress at all. But, we gotta keep going." Said Jay.

They walk which felt like hours but at last, they got to an end. "Finally! After all these time of walking, we've come to an end!" Alexa said. "I feel like my legs are going to fall off," Lucas said.


Everyone walked to the middle and saw something. "Hmmm.. this logo looks familiar. I saw it somewhere but I can't exactly put my finger to it. They continue to walk forward but before they could. A green cloud of smoke appeared out of nowhere and before you knew it, everyone fell asleep. To be exact, they could smoke was a spell that made people fall asleep.

Everything went dark for a few hours...

"Umm guys, you there," Gal said. "Oh, they're there alright, IN A INCUBATOR!" She said. Suddenly, the lights turn on and all they could see is a row full with everyone in it, even Lauren on top of the row. "Oh hi Lauren, Haven't seen you in a while! How you been?" Xem said. "Does it look like I'm okie?" She said. "Umm no, Maybe I'll shut up now." He said.

"Okie you. You've us now. What are you going to do to us?" Unicorn. "You see, I alright said to you. I put every single one of you in an incubator so I can suck up all your energy so I have enough energy to destroy the world and conquer it!" She smiles. "You sick sick pathetic person. Stealing innocent kids so you can kill them and take over the world!" Saz said.

"Well, I wouldn't call myself a sick person really. I'm justing doing this for a good cost for my friends I promised too." She said while pushing some buttons. "OH, SO YOU'RE GETTING PAID FOR DOING THIS? YOU REALLY ARE A SICK PERSON INDEED!" Saz scream.

"Okie, I guess I deserved that eh," She said disappointedly. "But all well, you guys can't do anything since you guys are stuck in an incubator and you know what is the best thing is? Nobody knows about it! Ha." She laughed.

"You might've to control us but I'm 10 steps ahead of people," Lucas said. "What do you mean? Anyways there is no internet pass this place so jocks on you" she said. "That's what you think" Lucas whisper. "So Lauren, you still mad because this was all my fault?" Sami said. "No.... This was all my fault. I shouldn't have done this and I knew this was going to be a risk." She said. "Ya know, there's still hope before she sucks up all our energy and destroys the world," Sami said. "I guess so," Lauren said.

"Are you guys gonna hug or should I just go?" Banana said. "Banana, you're so lucky we're stuck in this incubator or else!" Sami said. "Hey hey, what's the fuse?" The fairy said. "Oh, we just have Sami and Lauren having love," Jay said.

Everyone looked at Jay. "Okie, that wasn't funny, wasn't it?" Everyone said no at the same time. "Enough! It ends here!" The fairy says. The incubator started putting pressure into the incubator and sucking up the energy out of the all the people and putting the energy into a giant bowl.

"Let us out!" Jay said. "Oh I'll let you out, in heaven" She smiled and pushed the pressure button 1.2x faster.
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"Ow this hurt!" Highlight said. "Relax Highlight, keep calm," Yeo said. "Ya, no I can't. I'm sorry!" Highlight explained to her. "You know, I really wish I stuck to plan #12,938 to be honest," Lauren said. "What was that?" Sami said. "Being stuck in my room all summer vacation and eat nothing but bread and water all vacation and complain how Season 2 of 13 Reason why sucked balls?" She said. "I've no words" Sami said. "That's what everyone else says when I say that to them oof."

I felt the pressure coming into me from the fact the incubator was getting short by the second. I knew there wasn't much time before this thing squishy us into a splat of the puddle of blood that we all filled with bones. There was still hope, she could've come at any minute from now and saves us! I just need to give it some time from now and everything will be good but who knows when she'll come. Let's just hope she comes before she splatters into a straw of spaghetti.

"I recommend you guys saying your last words before ya know, boom boom" she rubbed her hands. But just then, rocks started falling from the ceiling! The whole cave started shaking and guess who arrives? Icy!

"Let them go or face your death," she said holding a Death Ray. "Woah Woah, Careful with that thing," she said. "I'll be careful alright until you let them go!" She said still holding her Death Ray." "So, you wanna play like that?" She said while giving her a dirty look. "Well, two can play this game!" She grabbed her freeze Ray also. "Ya know, the death Ray is more powerful than the freeze Ray?" Icy said. "It is? Prove it!" Lauren fairy said. "Hey, that's my line!" Lauren said.

She zaps her death Ray but to her surprise, she froze. "Oh wow, I guess she had the death Ray and I had the Freeze, Ray. All well, still work haha!" Icy said.

Everyone cheers at her as she won the victory! "I'll like to thank Lucas for warning me about it!" Icy said. "Wait, I thought your phone was dead?" Alexa said. "I lied ha," he said. "Tsk Tsk," everyone says. "But should I really let you guys out?" Icy laughed. "ICY!" Everyone screamed.

She let us all out and took down the factory that she was controlling us and called the police.

2 hours later.

"Yup, that's the one police!" Ang pointed. The police took her to Justice and watched them go as the sunset was setting down.

Everyone sat on the rock and looked at the sunset go down. They all grabbed a soda and sat down again. "Hey guys, this one is for Icy for saving our life's and half Lucas for warning her!" Lauren said. "And for me, I'll promise to never go into a cave with a bunch of groups!" Everyone hold their soda and said, "To icy! And half Lucas!" "To icy!" Everyone drinks their soda and watched the sun go down as they enjoyed there good rest of there day all happy-ish! Nothing can for wrong or so they thought hehe.

The End!
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Welp, that's it!

I hoped you enjoyed the story! Took a while to write Chapter 1, 2, 3, 4 until 5 but it feels good! :D

Took to write: 5 hours
Total words/characters: 20,347

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@EricTheWriter

Oof, This was fun writing
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HAHHAHAHA THE SANDWICH LMAO

You did a great job on this story it was great! 10/10 amazing!
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I Love The Hard Work You Did For Us With Entertainment. =)
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Ahh! I Loved this so mich! Eric you did an fantastic job I can you're getting better by every story :) keep it up friend:laugh:
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Eric, you done it again while I will say is tysm for writing theses chapters after all I do enjoyed your writing as your ability to make it like amazing character in your personality while I like everything you do and when I read it makes me feel glad that I look at a story to make feel like me everyday in my Summer time as always. ;) Thx, Eric for this and you’re great writer and I hope you will be a writer for your own books in the near future as while when I believe in you on that. ~ Fiona
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