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Temple to Herobrine - Work in Progress!

HermioneJG

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So, I've been working on this map I plan to submit for Murder Mystery, and I decided I'd show some work in progress pictures to see what should be changed, removed, or added.
Ah, we have the main room chamber (pic 1), which is the one with the statue of Herobrine and some weird little heads looking up at him, with a ring of red stone blood connected them. Then there's this hallway (pic 2), with a bunch of smaller hallways leading off, and the main hall leads to my nether 'portal,' (pic 3). That's obviously not a real activated portal, just the outline and I'm building a bit of nether stuff on behind it. And there's the Nether chamber (pic 4), I don't know what's going into it yet, but there'll be some hallways leading out, and I'll probably build something resembling the natural Nether with another (aNether :P) statue of Herobrine in it, rising out of lava (but this 'natural Nether' part will likely be more observation than exploration). Then there's this... I don't know, ritual chamber (pic 5)? We got some paintings, stacks of supplies, a potions area, enchantments stuff, floating heads.
Thoughts? Also, I'm wondering if it may be too big. And I haven't really added sources of light - the beacon and enchantment tables provide some in that ritual chamber thing, and some gets in through the part-blocks. That's 'cause I've noticed that since the update, the other maps are lit everywhere, not just where a source of light actually reaches, so that shouldn't be necessary right? And... there was something else - okay, I'm still working on making the walls and floors look broken and old. I think that's it, and I'd like to hear what you think (I'm sorry this was so long)!
 

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Finally! There we go
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So, I've been working on this map I plan to submit for Murder Mystery, and I decided I'd show some work in progress pictures to see what should be changed, removed, or added.
Ah, we have the main room chamber (pic 1), which is the one with the statue of Herobrine and some weird little heads looking up at him, with a ring of red stone blood connected them. Then there's this hallway (pic 2), with a bunch of smaller hallways leading off, and the main hall leads to my nether 'portal,' (pic 3). That's obviously not a real activated portal, just the outline and I'm building a bit of nether stuff on behind it. And there's the Nether chamber (pic 4), I don't know what's going into it yet, but there'll be some hallways leading out, and I'll probably build something resembling the natural Nether with another (aNether :p) statue of Herobrine in it, rising out of lava (but this 'natural Nether' part will likely be more observation than exploration). Then there's this... I don't know, ritual chamber (pic 5)? We got some paintings, stacks of supplies, a potions area, enchantments stuff, floating heads.
Thoughts? Also, I'm wondering if it may be too big. And I haven't really added sources of light - the beacon and enchantment tables provide some in that ritual chamber thing, and some gets in through the part-blocks. That's 'cause I've noticed that since the update, the other maps are lit everywhere, not just where a source of light actually reaches, so that shouldn't be necessary right? And... there was something else - okay, I'm still working on making the walls and floors look broken and old. I think that's it, and I'd like to hear what you think (I'm sorry this was so long)!
o_o dats what herobrines lair will look like in The End Is Nigh!
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Thanks guys, glad you like it so far!
And YES ANOTHER STORY. By the way, looking forward to the next chapter of Survive, Thrive or Die!
THERE WILL BE 3 STORIES AFTER SUTVIVE, THRIVE OR DIE!! YAYYYY. they wilL be called We the Players, Queen of Minecraftia, and The End is Nigh!
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THERE WILL BE 3 STORIES AFTER SUTVIVE, THRIVE OR DIE!! YAYYYY. they wilL be called We the Players, Queen of Minecraftia, and The End is Nigh!
AH YES! I know you've mentioned We the Players before, but not the other two. :D Also, you're planning four stories at once? Wow. Wow. I can hardly come up with a plot for one XD
Wait, are they all separate, or a whole series?
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AH YES! I know you've mentioned We the Players before, but not the other two. :D Also, you're planning four stories at once? Wow. Wow. I can hardly come up with a plot for one XD
Wait, are they all separate, or a whole series?
Whole series ^^ and ur in We The Players. AND SURVIVE, THRIVE OR DIE ENDS TOMORROW
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great map! hope it gets added!

btw this should be moved to Map Submission
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great map! hope it gets added!

btw this should be moved to Map Submission
No, it's not finished yet. This was just to see what people thought so far, and to ask whether it might be a bit big. Also, I accidentally DID put it in Map Submissions first, since that's the forum I'd been looking at, and had it moved here.
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My main concern is the size though. I worry that the map is too big, and that's something people complain about a lot. If it is, I'll block off the Nether part. Here's a picture of the whole thing, as seen from outside, so people can judge. There are still things to be added, a few tunnels and something enclosing the Nether, but it won't get much bigger than this.
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My main concern is the size though. I worry that the map is too big, and that's something people complain about a lot. If it is, I'll block off the Nether part. Here's a picture of the whole thing, as seen from outside, so people can judge. There are still things to be added, a few tunnels and something enclosing the Nether, but it won't get much bigger than this.
the size looks good, since its mostly tunnels/hallways and not open, the size is good
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Hey, this is a terrific map, but I recommend that you start building a little more and make a few more good blocks on your map. Otherwise, a great build! Continue to work! :)
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