Typifox
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My mom was never the kind of mom to go and leave me and my sister (five to be exact and very annoying), Rose, home alone. But this morning she did. She had announced it before. I knew dad was at work. But something was going on. Something had reached the limits of my life. Well I didn't know what that was but... Something was happening. I had this feeling has I entered my middle school. I had walked Rose to her school before going here but I still felt the same feeling.
"There you are, Limey." A girl who I would know as the fashion queen of the school said to me as she staggered away from a "dork." Thanks, name. My name was always something I was bullied for. The fact that it was Lime was plain horrible. I knew a name like that would never get famous. Especially, someone with the name like Lime Likeywirly. It was an out of this world name. I did an attempt to roll my eyes at her. Instead, I looked more like I was looking at her with a dreamy glance. I had no intention of that. But she was faster then me to know what was happening. She whipped out her phone and took a picture. I was kind of shocked but she talked again so I didn't have to say anything.
"Great, Limey! You made me the photographer of the year for all of my followers on FaceBook!" I decided not to try rolling my eyes at her but instead staggered away dumbly.
"Lime? Did you just get totally bullied by Zana?! I'm so sorry I wasn't able to help you! I watched the whole thing over a live on FaceBook." I wanted to roll under the street and disappear but the floor never opened.
"Yes, maybe I was." I said quietly. Just as I said that a kid walked over. It was an obvious member of Zana's gang.
"Made a new idol, eh? So childish!" She laughed. I ignored her but Luince didn't. Oh, and Luince is my best friend here at Tesla Middle.
"Don't you go around saying that-" I cut her off mid-sentence. I knew this trick. Zana's game always did it. They had everyone getting into a yelling fight and pretending they didn't care at all. It was really annoying and I knew she was going to do that.
"Luince! Stop. It's ok." This got the girl going again.
"Scared? Scared that you will be so bullied?"
"No, I'm not." I said firmly. She looked taken back by my answer. It was the coldest thing I had ever said to anything. She took a step back. Then she ran off screaming.
"Isn't there a rule no screaming..." Luince asked. I shrugged. It didn't matter. There was a rule for no bullying and she was breaking that.
After school I finally told Luince what I was feeling. When she heard it first she didn't believe me. But my feeling got more evidence. And it got it fast. It all happened when Lime arrived home. She was with her sister, of course. Her mom had claimed to be back by 3:30. Thirty minutes before Lime and Rose got out of school. But she wasn't there. They were home alone again.
"Where's mommy?" Rose asked innocently. Lime didn't want to answer this. She didn't know where her mom was. If her mom was gone how should she know? She didn't want to tell herself that her mom was gone. And she didn't want to tell Rose. But she answered.
"I don't know... We have to search the whole house. Stay together." Lime said sounding like a police officer. So Lime and Rose slowly searched the house. But they found nothing. They finally only had one last room to enter. The kitchen. Lime and Rose didn't walk in scared like they did in the other rooms. They only did that assuming that nothing would happen to the kitchen ether. They were so close to the conclusion that their mom was in traffic somewhere. For her job was far away. But Rose and Lime should have walked in scared.
Standing in front of Rose and Lime Likeywirly was a 12 foot, gold octopus. Now as you may think octopus were not scary. What was scary about this was that it was reaching for Rose. Lime stood shocked. She knew she had to do something before her baby sister was completely gone. Rose was screaming unstoppably.
"Lime! Lime!" She yelled. Lime herself might have been having a mental breakdown if she hadn't saw the rest of the kitchen. Well it was normal not saying the fact how it was covered in slime. But behind the octopus was glowing green light. It was purplish a little too. Lime grabbed Rose without and thinking jumping onto the table. When she was there her next action came fast to her. Jumping off the tablet Rose holding her tighter then ever she stepped on the octopus's eye, leaving it in pain. Standing on his head it was a clear 5 feet jump to the green light. She jumped carrying Rose now. Then they went inside the light.
Lime expected to have a trick of the eyes and for it to just be a mirror. But it wasn't. Instead, Lime found herself going down. It was roller coaster like where you stomach dropped. Lime expected it to go on but it stopped seconds later. Lime could feel Rose's little hands squeezing Lime's hand, in terror.
"Rose?" Lime asked holding Rose closer. They were still falling.
"Yes?" Rose asked, sounding the most scared she had ever been in her life.
"It's going to be OK." Lime said finally. Then she lifted Rose up and held her. Rose smiled back all sign of terror gone from her face. Lime smiled back. But she was still nervous. As the oldest one there she needed to take care of Rose and figure out what was happening. But before she had any time to think the long whole dropped Rose and I. It brought us to a prison yard. Rose wasn't in handcuffs though like me. She was running free. I didn't know what to do right then and there but I knew something must have been done to us. Then someone walked in. He was holding an axe and looked to Rose.
"Sweet, daughter? Go inside!" He commanded nicely but somehow cold at the same time. Rose must have been sensing something was going on. She winked at me as she went back inside. Then the man lead us all into the prison. My cell was dark and cold.
"Go in there, Em Likeywirly." Wait stop. Did I just hear him right?
Em Likeywirly had been my cousin until she committed a crime that took her to the worst prison ever. My mom and dad never told me what she did but I had no intention of wanting to know. Something must have been in her cell that would help her escape. People called her a husky. That was a little bit weird but it was true. She was a master escape artist. Playing hide and seek with her when she was hiding was impossible. Her speed too. I screeched the whole place but found nothing. I quickly tried to recall if she had escaped from prison. Then it came back. She did escape. But how? Before Lime had more time to think about this someone came up to her prison bar cell.
"Lime? I can save you." Lime looked up and saw a girl in a hood. She looked a bit older then Lime, maybe about 18.
"Who-" The girl cut her off rudely.
"Em Likeywirly."
I did the other part but I wanna know if this part is good?
My mom was never the kind of mom to go and leave me and my sister (five to be exact and very annoying), Rose, home alone. But this morning she did. She had announced it before. I knew dad was at work. But something was going on. Something had reached the limits of my life. Well I didn't know what that was but... Something was happening. I had this feeling has I entered my middle school. I had walked Rose to her school before going here but I still felt the same feeling.
"There you are, Limey." A girl who I would know as the fashion queen of the school said to me as she staggered away from a "dork." Thanks, name. My name was always something I was bullied for. The fact that it was Lime was plain horrible. I knew a name like that would never get famous. Especially, someone with the name like Lime Likeywirly. It was an out of this world name. I did an attempt to roll my eyes at her. Instead, I looked more like I was looking at her with a dreamy glance. I had no intention of that. But she was faster then me to know what was happening. She whipped out her phone and took a picture. I was kind of shocked but she talked again so I didn't have to say anything.
"Great, Limey! You made me the photographer of the year for all of my followers on FaceBook!" I decided not to try rolling my eyes at her but instead staggered away dumbly.
"Lime? Did you just get totally bullied by Zana?! I'm so sorry I wasn't able to help you! I watched the whole thing over a live on FaceBook." I wanted to roll under the street and disappear but the floor never opened.
"Yes, maybe I was." I said quietly. Just as I said that a kid walked over. It was an obvious member of Zana's gang.
"Made a new idol, eh? So childish!" She laughed. I ignored her but Luince didn't. Oh, and Luince is my best friend here at Tesla Middle.
"Don't you go around saying that-" I cut her off mid-sentence. I knew this trick. Zana's game always did it. They had everyone getting into a yelling fight and pretending they didn't care at all. It was really annoying and I knew she was going to do that.
"Luince! Stop. It's ok." This got the girl going again.
"Scared? Scared that you will be so bullied?"
"No, I'm not." I said firmly. She looked taken back by my answer. It was the coldest thing I had ever said to anything. She took a step back. Then she ran off screaming.
"Isn't there a rule no screaming..." Luince asked. I shrugged. It didn't matter. There was a rule for no bullying and she was breaking that.
After school I finally told Luince what I was feeling. When she heard it first she didn't believe me. But my feeling got more evidence. And it got it fast. It all happened when Lime arrived home. She was with her sister, of course. Her mom had claimed to be back by 3:30. Thirty minutes before Lime and Rose got out of school. But she wasn't there. They were home alone again.
"Where's mommy?" Rose asked innocently. Lime didn't want to answer this. She didn't know where her mom was. If her mom was gone how should she know? She didn't want to tell herself that her mom was gone. And she didn't want to tell Rose. But she answered.
"I don't know... We have to search the whole house. Stay together." Lime said sounding like a police officer. So Lime and Rose slowly searched the house. But they found nothing. They finally only had one last room to enter. The kitchen. Lime and Rose didn't walk in scared like they did in the other rooms. They only did that assuming that nothing would happen to the kitchen ether. They were so close to the conclusion that their mom was in traffic somewhere. For her job was far away. But Rose and Lime should have walked in scared.
Standing in front of Rose and Lime Likeywirly was a 12 foot, gold octopus. Now as you may think octopus were not scary. What was scary about this was that it was reaching for Rose. Lime stood shocked. She knew she had to do something before her baby sister was completely gone. Rose was screaming unstoppably.
"Lime! Lime!" She yelled. Lime herself might have been having a mental breakdown if she hadn't saw the rest of the kitchen. Well it was normal not saying the fact how it was covered in slime. But behind the octopus was glowing green light. It was purplish a little too. Lime grabbed Rose without and thinking jumping onto the table. When she was there her next action came fast to her. Jumping off the tablet Rose holding her tighter then ever she stepped on the octopus's eye, leaving it in pain. Standing on his head it was a clear 5 feet jump to the green light. She jumped carrying Rose now. Then they went inside the light.
Lime expected to have a trick of the eyes and for it to just be a mirror. But it wasn't. Instead, Lime found herself going down. It was roller coaster like where you stomach dropped. Lime expected it to go on but it stopped seconds later. Lime could feel Rose's little hands squeezing Lime's hand, in terror.
"Rose?" Lime asked holding Rose closer. They were still falling.
"Yes?" Rose asked, sounding the most scared she had ever been in her life.
"It's going to be OK." Lime said finally. Then she lifted Rose up and held her. Rose smiled back all sign of terror gone from her face. Lime smiled back. But she was still nervous. As the oldest one there she needed to take care of Rose and figure out what was happening. But before she had any time to think the long whole dropped Rose and I. It brought us to a prison yard. Rose wasn't in handcuffs though like me. She was running free. I didn't know what to do right then and there but I knew something must have been done to us. Then someone walked in. He was holding an axe and looked to Rose.
"Sweet, daughter? Go inside!" He commanded nicely but somehow cold at the same time. Rose must have been sensing something was going on. She winked at me as she went back inside. Then the man lead us all into the prison. My cell was dark and cold.
"Go in there, Em Likeywirly." Wait stop. Did I just hear him right?
Em Likeywirly had been my cousin until she committed a crime that took her to the worst prison ever. My mom and dad never told me what she did but I had no intention of wanting to know. Something must have been in her cell that would help her escape. People called her a husky. That was a little bit weird but it was true. She was a master escape artist. Playing hide and seek with her when she was hiding was impossible. Her speed too. I screeched the whole place but found nothing. I quickly tried to recall if she had escaped from prison. Then it came back. She did escape. But how? Before Lime had more time to think about this someone came up to her prison bar cell.
"Lime? I can save you." Lime looked up and saw a girl in a hood. She looked a bit older then Lime, maybe about 18.
"Who-" The girl cut her off rudely.
"Em Likeywirly."
I did the other part but I wanna know if this part is good?
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