Story - Mafia (based on Ice & Thomas’ Mafia game)

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WARNING: Slightly graphic depictions of murder. Don’t say I didn’t tell you!


Prologue
Melanie Kurez POV

My eyes were beginning to falter, as I stayed up later into the night. Surrounded by only darkness and shadows, I focused on my computer screen. Now’s not the time to scare the crap out of yourself, Mel.

Slithering over my keyboard went my fingers, typing as fast as they could. Slowly, I was starting to develop a headache from looking at my computer’s screen for so long, at the glaring blue light. Yet, I kept typing. This report needed to be done by tomorrow, or else I might as well say goodbye to my job.

There was a sound of the wheels of an office chair screeching across the floor. It didn’t go far, but it happened, and that was enough for me to start taking deep breaths and telling myself that it wasn’t real.

How wrong I was.

My eyes flickered from my computer screen to the left and right of my vision every so often. My skin was crawling with terror and anticipation. As fast as a cheetah, I finished up the report and clicked on, “send”.

Then, my vision darkened, as my breathing was blocked by a knife being shoved right in and out the other side of my throat. My neck felt like it wanted to just snap, and have my head roll across the ground; it felt too heavy. However, it didn’t, and my attacker pulled out the knife. My eyes were already shut by now, a lack of energy and oxygen starting to tug at my soul.

I felt the person push me off the chair, face first onto the ground. For what I assume was simply good measure, they stabbed my back repeatedly. Red liquid poured out, and stained my clothing, the ground, and the stupid knife.

I turned to my side, and although the darkness prevented me from seeing my attacker’s face, I got see their long, brown curls surround their face.

I recognised them immediately.

My eyes went wide. My soul tried to stay in my body, for just a bit more, and I tried to scream.

Instead, I choked on my own blood.

Then, everything faded to black, and I was no longer Melanie Kurez of Cameo town, the cheerful accountant at the front desk to help people with financial problems. In lieu, I was now the soul of a deceased woman.

Darkness was what surrounded me during my death. Now, it will surround be for eternity.

➳​

Chapter 1 * A Sudden Death
Anthony Fustian’s POV

Sheldon Haze’s screams were ear piercing. Quickly, as soon as I was out the elevator, I ran to where he was. I checked for a pulse, and thankfully there was one. Then I looked around, searching for what had shaken him up to the point of screaming and fainting.

My eyes were quick to spot it - a dead body. I could recognise who it was almost immediately, thanks to the red flames of hair that curled around her face and neck. Only one person had red hair in the whole of the Cameo Insurance Bankers company - Melanie Kurez. I gulped back a shriek, and took out my phone. Visibly, I was shaking. It took me nearly a whole minute just to dial 911.

“Hello? This is Cameo Town local police. How may I help you?” an officer answered.

“T-there’s been a murder…” I mumbled. Stumbling over my words, I tried to give my location to the officer, but they came as rushed and unclear statements. I had to repeat it.

“Okay. Stay calm, and whatever you do, do not under any circumstances touch or disturb the victim’s body. Police will be there in approximately 3 minutes. Stay calm,” the officer told me solemnly. Stupidly, I nodded, before realising they couldn’t see me.

“Y-yes ma’am…” I swallowed the bile that had risen up from my stomach to my throat. I felt unsettled, and sick. Very sick. I wanted to go to the bathroom, vomit until my body was left with nothing inside, but I didn’t. The police were coming, they would need me to show them where the body was, ask me questions…

“Hello? Sir? Are you still there? The police are at the building, they are coming up,” the police officer said. Slowly, I took 3 deep breaths, just as the officers came from the elevator.

“Um..hi,” I say. “Th-there…” I point toward Melanie Kurez’s lifeless body, and the police rush to it. One, a female with dashing midnight black hair and sparkling emerald green eyes, comes toward me.

“Detective Gusto. Who is this, and are they alive? What is the victim’s name? What is yours?” The questions spilled from her mouth quickly, like a drink that was toppled over accidentally.

“I’m Anthony Fustian. This is Sheldon Haze, he screamed and then fainted when he saw Miss Melanie Kurez, the victim. Mr Haze has a slight...fear of blood,” I reply. “I’m the janitor, Mr Haze and Miss Kurez however are accountants.”

Detective Gusto scribbles all I say on a notepad. She then asks me questions, like “Do you know anyone who might’ve wanted to do this?”, “Do you think you can pinpoint a time of death?” and “What motive do you think the murderer could’ve had?”

Answers bubbled in my head, like a cauldron of ideas, about to be used in a witch’s potion. Yet, for some reason, my gut told me not to tell Detective Gusto. She seemed...off. So, I just gave simple answers, like, “I don’t know” or “Maybe between 10 and 12”.

Gusto simply nodded, then gave me her number. She told me to contact her if need be, and also to tell Sheldon to go to the police station for questioning. Once she was gone, I let out a breath he didn’t know he was holding.

Behind me, Sheldon was starting to come to. I offered him a ride home, and Sheldon nodded, his head bobbing up and down fast. I lead him down to the parking lot, where my car was in a secluded corner. Yes, it was old and beat up, but it did the job of getting me around, so to me, it was perfect.

The ride was quiet, and slightly awkward, but mostly it was fine. One good thing was that Sheldon lived next door to me, so I didn’t need to ask for directions. As we get there, Sheldon asks me a question.

“Who do you think did it?” he whispers, as if he was talking to himself, but I knew, somehow, that it was for me.

“Honestly? Well, Kurez broke it off with Lucas recently, he has a high chance of having been the perpetrator,” I reply. Sheldon nods slowly.

“Well, anyway, thanks for the ride. I appreciate it. I guess I’ll see you around,” Sheldon says. He gets out the car, and then I park it and get out too.

I don’t tell Sheldon that Kurez was recently in a fight with Rose, my wife.

➳​

It’s been quiet lately. There have been speculations, about who might’ve killed the lovely Melanie Kurez, who was loved by pretty much everyone. Her cheerful attitude and flaming red hair made a beautiful mix, accompanied by her humour and kindness, it was a recipe for perfection.

The autopsy results had come up with nothing, except that Melanie was stabbed. Which was quite obvious, but they said so anyway. Oh, and estimated time of death was between 11 PM and 1 AM. 111. Huh.

On the day of her funeral, almost half of everyone in town came. Cameo is a small town, surrounded by forest. Our population is barely 5,000. It was sad, to say the least. Kurez’s mom cried a river, but she was still strong enough to say a small speech, about how Kurez had turned out as the best daughter she could’ve ever wished for.

They buried the body near the edge of the cemetery, where a river ran. “The fishes will be great company to her…” the man who was burying her had said.

Work continued still, and as always it was still tiring. The only changes were that I need not clean the table at which Kurez had sat.
 
➳​

The policemen had been investigating for at least 3 weeks now, with no leads, no suspects, nothing. Well, I was the prime suspect, but I denied whatever they blamed me for, and answered all their questions.

Somehow, they still got a warrant to inspect my house. For the most part, I lounged on my couch and watched TV. As they were about to wrap it up, someone’s voice came from the kitchen, which was connected to the laundry room.

“Here! I found something.” The voice was masculine, and two policemen joined the previous policemen. I could hear their voices discussing something. Then, they came out and looked at me.

“Anthony Fustian. You have been arrested for the murder of Melanie Kurez.”

Before I could register this fact, a policeman was already cuffing me then dragging me to the front door. Now I was curious - what evidence had they found to prove my supposed guilt?

“So...what did you find?” I asked, as I ducked into the back of the police car. The policeman buckled my seatbelt for me like the nice man he was, then he closed the door; he went to the front and got into the driver’s seat then buckled himself in.

He turned around so he could look at me in the eye. “Bloody clothes, in the laundry room. Also, wrapped inside was a bloody knife. It was hidden beneath a pile of clothes, but smart policemen always check.”

“Um...I’m sorry but I live with someone,” I said. My face was blank. “Rose Meyri. She could’ve done it, no need to jump to conclusions.”

The policeman shakes his head. “Trying to place the blame on your wife, huh, Fustian? The clothes were masculine, no way it was her. Besides, she’s a detective. She would never do such a cruel thing.”

“Right, right…” I grumbled. Sometimes, Rose was simply too troublesome. Although I had proof it was in fact her who committed this crime, I didn’t say. What was the use? They would never believe me anyway.

We’re married. Plus, she’s a detective. She would never, ever, betray her town like that.

Would she?


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AUTHOR NOTE:

  • This is based on @IceTheDutchAD and @XThomasXPlayzX ’s Mafia game (the 2nd one). Shoutout to them for hosting the game, and Ice for allowing me to write a story on it :D
  • Death sequences will be the same.
  • Characters have been renamed so I can secretly ship people ;) However some names are very obvious and if they’re shipped and you are that person I am sorry XD Well...not completely. ;)
  • Feedback and constructive criticism is welcome! However, evil, rude and/or mean comments aren’t! Any suggestions? Comment them below! I will go through every comment and consider everything you’ve said, don’t worry xD
  • This story is copyrighted and is my property completely. (Except the concept and idea lol) NO STEALING!! If any of you take this and post it on some other site I will personally hunt you down. -.- But I guess fanfiction is okay XD Just make sure to credit me thanks
  • I know this is short. Who cares.
  • Also this is an unedited first draft which I spent approximately only 5ish hours on so don’t be too harsh on me okay
  • Thank you for reading :)
  • EDIT — Appearances are not based on anything, it’s all my choices. Mainly because I don’t know what most of your skins look like and therefore I don’t have a reference xD besides it would make guessing who’s who so much easier and I don’t want that happening any time soon ;)
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What a lovely day to read a story about you almost dieing at 11pm when its actually really 11pm(Ikr you warned me but still xD)
Anyways I love how my second name is haze tbh (something personal (And no I am not talking about the drug xD)
Really great writing skills.Well done.May I ask you a favor?
When I die let me die like a man okay? xD
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This is an awesome story! Keep in up :D
Thank youuu :x3:

Nice story lauren i like it
Thank youuu :cool:

niceeeeeeeee . btw dis ish mah skinView attachment 48168 i ish proud of making it xD
Thank youuu :D by the way nice skin, good job.

σωσ ∂єαтн αи∂ мυя∂єя
тнιѕ ωαѕ ѕσ мυ¢н fυи тσ яєα∂
Yep, just your type of story.
Thank youuuuu :giggle:

Nice story! Lol, I’m gonna be the weird person dressed up as a clown xD
Yes. Yes you are. Also I decided your occupation is going to be a circus clown. IT’S PERFECTTT xD

Hm...
Sheldon. Sheldorium.
Anthony, that's obviously mongi.
Rose. Strel.
Melanie Kurez... who was the first person to be killed? I don't remember. The name is useless to me XD



And this is SO GOOD Lauren
It is that obvious XD

Thank youuu :D

lol

How dare you ship me XD

#Lauraffle

GREAT STORY LOTS OF VIOLENCE 10/10
;) XD

Waffles suckkk

Thank you XD

What a lovely day to read a story about you almost dieing at 11pm when its actually really 11pm(Ikr you warned me but still xD)
Anyways I love how my second name is haze tbh (something personal (And no I am not talking about the drug xD)
Really great writing skills.Well done.May I ask you a favor?
When I die let me die like a man okay? xD
Yep! :D XD
Thank youu ;3
...how do you die “like a man” ._. XD but okayy


THANK YOU ALL YOU BEAUTIFUL SOULS
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Thank youuu :x3:


Thank youuu :cool:


Thank youuu :D by the way nice skin, good job.


Yep, just your type of story.
Thank youuuuu :giggle:


Yes. Yes you are. Also I decided your occupation is going to be a circus clown. IT’S PERFECTTT xD


It is that obvious XD

Thank youuu :D


lol


;) XD

Waffles suckkk

Thank you XD


Yep! :D XD
Thank youu ;3
...how do you die “like a man” ._. XD but okayy


THANK YOU ALL YOU BEAUTIFUL SOULS
I dont know that either just let my death be cool okay? xD
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