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Revised version of The Decision

The Introduction
General Fox was resting in his command chair, monitoring the controllers who were reading screens, pulling levers, and pushing buttons. Suddenly, a buzzer rang from the radar station. Everyone in the command center directed their attention at the radar station, then to General Fox, waiting for instructions.


“What is it?” General Fox demanded.


“A large amount of unidentified ships have emerged out of dark-speed at quadrant B-11. They are not responding to the passcode,” the controller stated.


There was some muffled whispering in the command center, then General Fox rose from his chair and strode to the radar station. He got in the seat and studied the screen for a moment. Then, he got in the chair at the camera station and accessed the camera at quadrant B-11.


Numerous alien ships, in their usual organized formation, were popping up.


“Soldiers, it appears that there is an assault targeted on us by the aliens. Move B6-GTs to Sect-” another buzzer from the radar station cut him off.


“More ships are emerging at quadrant Y-03, general,” the same controller said.


Suddenly, dozens of buzzers were ringing at the radar stations.


“They’re coming at us from all sides, what do we do?” a controller complained.


“Uh oh,” a controller murmured.


The general went back to his command center, sat down in it, and thought.


This command center controlled a giant fortress that is situated on an island, named F-16 Island due to its location. It has a large tunnel which leads to the underwater cities that make up the Red Republic. Many, smaller tunnels lead to the cities from the mainland, but F-16 island is a key defence location. If it were to fall, then enemies would use the tunnel to destroy the cities, including the capitol.


As you can see, General Fox’s job is very important in this situation. If he and his forces were to retreat into the tunnel, then the aliens would take F-16 island and launch attacks from there. There would be a large amount of casualties if this happened. The Tunnel would be devastated.


But, if he and and his troops stayed and fought, they would be a small chance of winning, but with a large amount of deaths. General Fox pondered the dilemma. All eyes were on him.


“Okay, we are staying and fighting. Mobilize troops at the coast line, and keep tanks, walkers, and other similar vehicles with them. Position troops on the inside, since they can send paratroopers. Use the ruins as temporary bases if necessary.” General Fox finally said.


A controller ran to a red button and pressed it. An alarm sounded and the General and the controllers heard commotion outside, hearing officers giving subcommands to soldiers, and other alien allies running to their fighters to pilot them. Battle robots rushed outside, and medical robots went to infarmys to take care of the wounded. Walker pilots ran to hangars to get into their walkers and then walk to their battle positions. Ground crew members led starfighters with light sticks as they flew out of the hangar to battle the oncoming threat.


He continued. “Move commando group Rex to Outpost Fox. Sector J-02 forces will surround the forest if paratroopers land there.”


General Fox’s long line of commands continued. Controllers were typing, contacting, and listening for more orders.


After those orders, General Fox’s last command was “And, contact any allies in the area, the Spike Republic, the navy, other starships, or any that can help out.”


And with that, he suited up, and dashed out the door to help out his soldiers on the battlefield.

Chapter 1: The Invisible Raiders

Already, the battle had sprung off to a good start. Heavily-armed troops and armored B6-GTs were holding off the Alien forces as their ships dropped off dozens upon dozens of walkers on them. General Fox got into his dinky LAV and drove off to the temporary subcommand center in one of the ruins of a Green Republic dreadnought. As he drove past the ruins of gigantic ships, he saw the fighting. Some Green Republic snipers were picking off Alien soldiers from a crashed Red Republic cruiser. An B6-GT was holding its own against a horde of Aliens, its machine guns taking down many as it fell to the ground, defeated.


Suddenly, an Alien corvette crashed in front of him. Debris flew into the air as General Fox was barely able to stop his LAV from crashing into the burning wreak. The battle in the skies had kicked off. Many Red Republic, Green Republic, Pcpc, and Giant ships had appeared in the sky and started creaming Alien ships that came too close to the island. A looming shadow appeared over General Fox, and was not surprised to see the Conqueror, his master’s Dominator-class Dreadnought. About 16 kilometers in length, it dwarfed Alien ships in front of it. An influx of command ships came out of the Conqueror's hangars, and started helping out the gigantic dreadnought take down other ships around it.


Meanwhile, General Fox drove into the hangar of the Green Republic dreadnought that had the subcommand center. He drove through hallways and repair stations, walkers sitting where they would never be tended to. Crashed starfighters that had pierced through the roof, joining the tanks and walkers alike in a vehicle storage area, which the LAV drove by, the sounds of battle muffled by the steel that separated the relatively peaceful atmosphere of the dreadnought from the chaos outside. As the LAV got closer to the command center, the Dreadnought looked less and less empty. In an old replair station, a B6-GT was being worked on, and guards roamed about. He arrived at a checkpoint, where he showed a Red Republic soldier his card. Green Republic soldiers tested in barracks and robots were salvaging parts of a cruiser that had was lying in a hangar area as General Fox’s LAV drove into another hallway.


Fox finally arrived at the subcommand center at a destroyed Green Republic dreadnought. Another general, General Banura was accessing some radar stations.


“General Fox. Good to see you.” he said. “Their forces are humongous. Are you sure we can hold out?” General Banura continued.


“With some help, we can hold on to the island.” General Fox replied. “Otherwise, they’ll destroy us from the inside.”


“I better go help those troops.” General Fox said.


“I’ll go with you. As they say, the more, the merrier.” General Bacura replied


The two generals were long time friends. Back when they were only lieutenants, they were tasked with taking care of rebels in the Offensive in the Oparra Territory, they quickly teamed up to snuff out the threat. As they rose through the ranks of the Red Republic, they’re friendship got closer, and they often helped each other out. The Master quickly saw the two as extraordinary generals, and rose them to the rank of general. Both often fought by each-other’s side, winning battle after battle. Even when it seemed hopeless, being a strategist, General Bacura could always think of something with Fox’s help.


Fox and Bacura both got into their LAVs and drove off to the front line exiting the hagar with gunships and troop carriers following. Two dozen Mark II Mega Raptors were providing artillery fire, and B4-GTs blasted away at Alien Walkers. Some patrol robots were firing away at Alien Heavys, and regular troops emptied their energy cartridges at the Aliens, who’s numbers never seemed to go down. Tents with medical robots and medics were caring to the wounded. Green Republic Snipers were taking advantage of several crashed Alien fighters and were taking cover behind them. All forces that had answered General Fox’s call to action had been summoned. The Green Republic coming from the North, the Pcpcs from the west, the Spike Republic and empires from the east, and even the sentient dragon species, Kidons, had come from the south along with other animals. They tore apart Alien soldiers with their teeth, and numerous mosasaur species brought down ALien ships that stayed too near to the surface of the water.


General Fox leaped out of his LAV and blasted away at the Aliens. One brave soldier attempted to punch him, but General Fox whacked it with his gun. He pinned it to the ground and shot it in the head. General Bacura joined him with a minigun. Behind them, some TLAVs brought in reinforcements. A volley of rockets from a rocket walker destroyed several Alien walkers. An Alien punched a rifle out of a soldier’s hands, but he took out a pistol and shot the ALien in the face.


As General Fox and General Bacura held the line, Commander Coyote contacted them.


As an unconventional commander, Coyote was one to be feared. His corps fought on the roughest, most harshest terrain ever seen by the Aquanonians, and viewed the other corps as inferior. As such, they’re armor was somewhat more advanced for fighting in the weirdest worlds where other troops would suffer. To add onto Commander Coyote’s achievements, his legion had completed many “impossible” missions, which has led to fame among the Red Republic Armed Forces.


“General Fox. General Bacura. Me and my shadow troops need help in the forests. There are just way too many Aliens.” Coyote said over the intercom. He sounded worried.


“Okay. We’ll be there, and I’ll send some of my experimental robots.” General Fox replied.


As the generals got back into their LAVs, General Bacura told General Fox, “Well, that was unusual. TOugh COmmander Coyote asking for help. YOu don't see everyday.” He then asked “what about those experimental robots of yours too?”. “I figured Coyote was in serious trouble, so we should get the best of my creations. You’ll see, in time.” General Fox replied.


By the time they got back to base, the sky was full of ships, blasting away at each other. The two generals headed down a hidden stairwell to find a workshop, filled with weird, wolflike, robots. There was also a freighter being worked on by a robot.


“Greetings General Fox. And I assume this is the other general, Bacura?” the robot said.


“Yes, I am General Bacura. What is this place?” Bacura asked.


“This is my workshop, and this guy here is Pebbles. He helps me repair and make creations that could turn the tide of the war.” General Fox said.


One of the wolf-like robots went up to Commander Fox, and rubbed itself against his calf.


“These robots here are equipped with cloaking devices.” Commander Fox said as the robot suddenly disappeared. “There are also some modified B6-CTs equipped with better armament and cloaking devices in those garages.” Commander Fox continued.


An explosion rocked the base. “We should be headed on our way” General Bacura said. They hopped into the B6-CTs as Pebbles returned to working on the freighter. The robots followed the walkers to a large elevator, which got them to ground level. The cloaking devices were activated, and the generals, their elite troops on the walkers, and the robots were well on their way.


General Bacura received a hologram from Commander Coyote. “Where are you? We don’t see you. If you don’t come soon with reinforcements, we might be wiped out!” he literally shouted.


“Calm down. I assure you, we are here and waiting for the enemy’s next wave.” General Bacura said


“Let me guess. You have cloaking devices.” Commander Coyote replied.


“More than that, Coyote.” General Fox butted in.


From his well-designed treehouse/fort, Commander Coyote and some of his troops heard a yelp. They saw an Alien soldier get tackled, but there was nothing tackling the soldier. Whatever was there ripped the Alien soldier apart like cloth. More yelps arose around the forest. Other Alien soldiers ran to their comarades’s aid, but to no avail. They also got attacked b these invisible forces. Then, a strange sound, almost like a wolf howling broke the air.


“What the hell is going on?” one of his sergeants said.


“I think that’s our rescue. Troops, down from the trees and ambush the Aliens!” Commander Coyote yelled.


“For Aquanonia!” his troops replied as they jumped down from their sniping places, well hidden in the dense foliage of the trees.


An Alien walker bore down on the troops. Suddenly, a B4-CT appeared out of nowhere are rammed the walker into a tree. A hangar on the AT-CT opened up, and General Fox’s troops emerged to join the battle. Another B4-CT, General Bacura’s decloaked, deployed troops, and laid down mines.


Some of Commander Coyote’s snipers stayed in the trees, taking down aliens one by one. The Aliens could not cope with the guerrilla tactics Commander Coyote used, and could not fight against the robots, cloaked and ready to destroy another alien. They retreated, and victory was theirs.


They all headed up to the tree forts and rested. Commander Coyote and the generals discussed battle plans.


“They will come back, stronger than before.” General Bacura said to the others.


“My robots can hold those Alien bastards for a while, but not for too long. It may be enough time to evacuate.” General Fox offered.


“Are you saying that we should retreat? My troops will stay and take them down. They will do whatever it takes to achieve victory in our hands.” Coyote replied


“And throw the troopers something that may be too much for them? If we are to hold our ground, here, then we need a lot more soldiers, and vehicles, for sure.” General Fox said, as one of his robots jumped into the treehouse and promptly fell asleep in General Fox’s lap.


Suddenly, a controller ran into the room, out of breath saying, “Sorry to interrupt, but a corvette crashed nearby.”


“So? Tons of corvettes are crashing at this moment.” Commander Coyote replied.


“That corvette is the crew of Dragon Squad.” the controller said “They are being surrounded by enemy troops.” he continued.


General Bacura whistled.


Dragon Squad was specifically picked by The Master to be a special operations team. They did everything, from sabotaging enemy lines, to taking down the enemy on the front line. But they lacked numbers, and they would be slaughtered in the forest if they didn’t get help, and soon.


“Okay. We are going and helping them. Dragon Squad’s skills and soldiers are valuable to the Red Republic, and we will not let them die or be captured by the ALiens to be used in experiments.” General Fox stated.


“Woah woah woah. My troops are exhausted, so if you’re doing some saving, then it’s you and your robots.” Commander Coyote said


“I’ll come and help.” General Bacura said.


General Fox glared at Commander Coyote.


“Okay. All I care about is my troops. They need this rest. To add on, another wave of Aliens is coming, so it is especially important that they get this rest.” Commander Coyote said.


“Okay, I do see your point.” General Fox said.


The two generals exited the room.


The two generals hopped into their B6-CTs, as well as some of their troops. They activated their cloaking devices. The robots followed them.


Up ahead, they saw an Alien walker. It had no idea what was coming. General Fox piloted the B6-CT right at the walker and rammed it into another. Supposedly, General Bacara and the robots would make a run for the corvette while the rest of the Aliens were distracted by General Fox. The B6-CT, still cloaked, stomped on Aliens, shot at walkers, and made the distraction Bacura needed. Right then, he contacted General Fox, saying that they got to the corvette. Now, it was General Fox’s turn to make the run to the corvette, just that all the Aliens would be focused on him.


Unfortunately, a few Alien walkers were blocking his way. He shot at the base of a nearby tree, and it toppled over, crushing the walkers. He jumped over the walkers, and was about to make it, when an Alien walker rammed him into another tree. General Fox’s B6-CT got up but the ram had damaged the cloaking device. He quickly disposed of the walker, smashing it’s cockpit with the B6-CT’s leg. He ran once again. Suddenly, the corvette’s hangar appeared in front of him, and he crashed into General Bacura’s B6-CT, which was parked inside.


He and his troops got out of the B6-CT, and started to hold off Aliens invading the hangar, along with General Bacura, his troops, the robots, and the elite team who belonged to the corvette, Dragon Squad.


“Commander Dragon. Nice to meet you.” General Fox said.


“Good to meet you,” Commander Dragon replied.


An explosion rung in the hangar. “Want to join the battle?” Commander Dragon asked.


“Sure!” the generals replied.


Suddenly, a whole bunch of B6-HAWs emerged out of the trees, accompanied by B6-CTs, and opened fire on the aliens.


“What? I thought Commander Coyote left us!” General Bacura exclaimed. Sure enough, those walkers had Commander Coyote’s symbols on them. The Generals and Dragon Squad charged at the infantry, the generals killing any Alien that stood in their way.


As they ran, General Fox glimpsed an Alien command center. He jumped in, kicked an Alien in the face, and shot another in the head. The Alien commander turned around with a gun to his head. But the commander was ready. He ducked and kicked General Fox in the shins. He got his gun and prepared to shoot General Fox. But he was also ready. He narrowly dodged the shot, punched the commander in the face, and whacked him with his gun multiple times. The commander fought back with several punches. General Fox doged them and started choking the helpless commander. The Alien controllers, working at the commands while the commander and General Fox were fighting, realized what was happening. One grabbed a gun, but General Fox shot it out of the controller’s hands, whacking the other in the face. He kicked the controller out the window and shot the other in the head.


General fox threw the commander out the hatch as he emerged. All eyes were on him as he shot the commander in the head.

There was a great silence over the battlefield as General Fox’s gun smoked.


Then the battle resumed as the others approached him, now joined by Commander Coyote. General Bacura sliced off the commander’s head off with his katana, for good measure.


A new B5-HAW appeared and ended the battle, crushing unlucky Alien walkers under its giant legs.


They took a Mark IV Tank back to the base. Commander Coyote stayed at the battlefield while 4 dropships hauled Dragon Squad’s corvette back to the base for repairs. The two generals thought they had enough ground fighting for the day. THey hopped into two Viper-fighters that were ready for them, and took off.


Chapter 2: The One-Man Raid

“Okay, what’s the situation?” General Fox asked General Banura on the comms.


“So Green Republic, Spike Republic, and other countries have come to our aid and have sent forces. Our ships in the skies are in a deadly struggle, but nobody seems to be taking any advantages. The ground battle has mainly moved to The Beach, as we have regained control of the Jungle, thanks to General Coyote and the Fortress is too dangerous for the Aliens to attack. Our ships on the water are pointing their artillery guns at the rear of the Alien Army and Alien reinforcements waiting for orders. This battle may determine how the war on Aquanonia may come out.” General Banura replied.


“So, what now?” General Banura asked.


Suddenly, they received all distress calls all at once, but one stood out. It was their master, on the Conquerer. His fleet was doing fine, but he was asking for some backup, which was unusual for him. Both generals contacted their second-in-commands, and called for them to bring their fleets in. The two fighters disappeared among the clouds as they joined the real fight.


When they emerged, they saw chaos. The Conqueror was surrounded by 3 gigantic Alien ships, all about the same size. The vessel was holding its own, but the Conqueror was doomed. One of the Conqueror' escorts exploded, then started its descent down. Several Alien fighters came at the two viper fighters, but the viper fighters dodged left and right, then their machine guns blazed. The two Alien starfighters went down as the viper fighters headed off to one of the Alien command ships.


“That thing is humongous!” General Fox said


“What's the plan?” General Banura replied.


The two fighters sped right at the hangar. Some Alien crew jumped out of the way as the viper fighters slowed down, and started blasting their way through the hangar. They sped out as the hangar exploded, damaging the ship’s main reactor.


On the Conquerer, their master watched as the hangar on the ship exploded.


“Divert all firepower to that ship.” he said as the few controllers left switched levers and put on intercoms.


“The two generals must be here.” the master muttered to himself.


As that was going on. The two viper fighter dodged their way up, as one shot from an Alien turbolaser narrowly missed one of them. They saw the unmistakable window of the command bridge, and shot their missile magazine into it. The Alien admiral was blown back as an explosion rocked the whole ship. One of the Alien cruisers had crashed into the ship. They both exploded as the viper fighters flew off.


The 5th fleet, General Banura’s fleet emerged out of the clouds got to the battle first. The ships were mostly intact, as they had been kept in reserve for most of the battle. Consisting of one U-Command ship, 2 pincer-class battlecruisers, 10 command ships, 20 ANT ships, 10 superlaser destroyers, and 30 Cargo Haulers, they were a force to deal with. One of the large Alien ships was swept by the wave of Red Republic Ships, while the Conqueror broadsided the other one. Bothe were doomed. One crashed into the sea, while the other crashed into the desert sands of the Junkyard, pushing a crashed Green Republic cruiser from the First Battle of F-16 Island.


The Conqueror, it’s remaining escorts, and the 5th Fleet headed to where General Fox’s Fleet, the 4th Fleet, was pinned down by Alien reinforcements. The 5th Fleet peeled off to the side, while the Conquer and the other ships headed straight at the Aliens.


One of the Alien Admirals watched as a gigantic bulk of a ship headed straight forward into the Alien ranks. 2 corvettes were taken down, and starfighters streamed out of it’s hangars like bees out of a honeycomb. A squadron of I-80 Suppressors rocked the bridge as the Alien Admiral called for reinforcements.


Back on the ground, Commander Coyote got rid of the Alien task force and received orders to head towards the junkyard. There, the battle was chaos. Alien forces pinned down Red Republic squads on the streets while Green Republic and Spike Republic starfighters held off bombers. Snipers on the crashed starships from both sides took down forces in the “streets” while generals directed forces from command posts.


General Coyote’s forces swept the battlefield, taking back crashed ships, nicknamed “landmarks”. The B6-HAWs would lead the charge, while troops would follow close behind with small task forces securing the tops of starships as their snipers took aim.


One squad on top of the roof noticed the battle overhead. One aimed at an Alien starfighter headed for one of the Viper fighters and fired. The rocket auto-targeted and hit the starfighter straight in the engine.


General Fox was preparing when one of the alerts started beeping, which he studied. Then he realized what was happening. He used his trident to break the fighter’s glass, then jumped out just as the Alien Starfighter crashes straight into his fighter. He pulled out his trident and stabbed it into the Alien starfighter’s hull, where he set his feet on it. Both starfighters were spiraling down to the ground very quickly. He noticed General Banura’s fighter getting farther away, which means he did not realize what had happened to his comrade. He looked around for something to get to, and noticed they were going to crash onto one of the alien ships. He used his trident to slowly direct the crashed fighters towards one of the hangars. Alien crews jumped out of the way as the hunk of metal screeched onto the flight deck.


General Fox slowly lifted the trident off of the metal as the Alien crews stared at him. Then, some brought out pistols and shot at him while the unarmed ones ran for the alarms. General Fox brought out his own pistol and fired back, deflecting shots from his trident. Several hit the Aliens running to the alarms, but one managed to get there and press the button.


Outside, General Banura was circling outside the ship, wondering where General Fox was and what all of the alarms in the Alien ship were about.


Soon, the Aliens in the hangar were dead. General Fox knew that reinforcements would be on their way. He noticed support beams on the ceiling of the hangar, which he jetpacked to. Just after that, one of the broken doors he had sabotaged exploded, and Alien soldiers rushed into the hangar while General Fox made his way into the duct system.


He quickly made his way to the bridge, breaking through ducts and looking down grilles to see what was under him. He found what looked like a command center. An extremely large room that had a force field separating it from the outside. A raised platform had some Aliens working on some panels. Crates and railings were scattered all over, and auto-turrets or mounted machine guns topped some of them. A head on-attack by an one-man-team would probably fail, even for one of the Red Republic’s most skilled generals. He clambered over to a grille right over a support beam above the platform, with an admiral of sorts giving orders. He got out and perched on the beam itself. He scanned the area for any threats, then got out a muffler for his pistol, then took aim at the admiral.


But then, he sensed something behind him and turned around. A creature, which looked like a regular Alien soldier was looming over him. But this was no ordinary Alien. It was enormous, and had long-spindly arms. Strapped on it’s back was an auto turret which aimed at him. One of its hands swiped at him, but he jumped back onto another railing. The creature turned at him, then the autocannon re-aimed. If it fired, all the Aliens would know he was here.


General Fox threw an EMP grenade at the creature. It slightly electrocuted the creature, but the autocannon hung limp form it’s shoulder. As the thing tried to figure out what happened, General Fox took aim at the creature, then fired. The muzzle prevented any sound, but then the creature roared in pain. The Aliens below looked up to see what happened, but General Fox fired into the creature several more times. It slowly fell off the support beam and on top of the admiral. The soldiers started blindly shooting at the support beams. The general spied a control panel in the control center that had “lights” printed on it. He fired and the whole room went dark.


The soldiers looked around to see what happened while General Fox activated night vision on his helmet. He took a look at the admiral trapped underneath the dead creature. His hand was waving around, looking for something to grab hold. General Fox reached for a regular grenade, but realized that the rest had fallen off except for the EMP grenades when the fighter crashed. He jumped down and took out a soldier. Another noticed and started firing at him. He used the other one’s dead body as a shield and advance towards the soldier, who was retreating. General Fox threw the body at him, then fired. Other soldiers were heading to him. He took cover behind a crate, then looked out. About 20 soldiers, armed with swords and guns, were headed in his direction. As if he was at a bowling alley, he rolled an EMP grenade towards the group. It exploded and the guns fizzled and crackled. Some of the soldiers shoot their guns, or hit them with their hands to get them to work. In the confusion, General Fox emerged and fired his dual TX-P10 pistols. Several of the aliens went down, and the others raised their arms. By the time reinforcements came, to rescue the dead admiral, all the aliens in the room had been killed and General Fox had escaped through another duct.
 
Chapter 3: Destroying the Ship
General Fox was making his way through the duct system. He was trying to figure out how to disable the core reactors while also being able to escape the (supposedly) exploding ship. He passed by an armory, and dropped down a grenade he had looted off the dead Alien soldiers in the command center. Bad idea. Some grenades in there also exploded and the floor underneath him collapsed. He fell into the ruined armory, amongst destroyed guns and broken computers. Aliens rushed in and looked for the source of the destruction. General Fox tackled one out of the smoke and shot its head. The others turned around to see what happened, then fired their weapons when they realized there was an intruder. General Fox dodged many of the shots, firing his own at their ranks. Several went down, and the others ran for the door. He activated his grapple hook on his wrist and aimed at the doorway. He zipped there before they could and shot them. He pulled the harpoon out of the metal, then shot at the ruined duct. He climbed back in and kept on going.


By that time, General Bacura had intercepted many transmissions by the Aliens that there was an intruder in the ship. He knew it had to be General Fox: no other Aquanonian Soldier could survive for that long inside an enemy ship. He called for several of his special forces dropships to come in and circle the ship. Then, he intercepted another transmission. General Fox had attacked an amory near the center of the ship. He was attacking the core! General Bacura thought of what to do. If his dropships barged into the core, then they could risk blowing it up, killing them and General Fox. They would have to get into the ship somewhere else. He spotted a weak point near the core, and ordered the dropship pilots to destroy it. The missiles made a hole large enough for a dropship to come through. The viper fighter and the two dropships lowered themselves down into the very bowels of the ship.


Finally, General Fox found the main reactor core. A giant sphere, crackling with energy, sat in the middle of the gigantic room, supported by pillars. Platforms with bridges connecting each other had guards patrolling it. General Fox scanned the ceiling for anything. About 10 of those Alien creatures sat there, looking down for any threats. If General Fox dared to get out of the duct system and onto one of those platforms, the creatures would drop down and kill him instantly with their claws. He decided to just call them Alien assassins. General Fox decided just to use the duct system to creep up to the ceiling, then take out the assassins.


General Bacura and his special forces soldiers made their way through the ship. Any alien soldiers standing in their way were killed. One of General Bacura’s trackers found General Fox in a duct system using a compact radar system. He was already in the core. The group ran a little faster.


Suddenly, an alarm rang in the core.

“All Alien personnel, intercept a Red Republic task force is making their way to the core. I repeat, intercept a Red Republic task force near the core.” Both the Alien guards and the assassins exited through the doors.


General Fox tried his comms to contact General Bacura. “Fox! We’ve been trying to contact you the time you got on the ship! What happened?”


“Okay, long story short, I killed the admiral and destroyed an armory. I’m going to destroy the core. Also, just a heads up, not only are Alien guards headed for you, but they have these creatures with them too. I would call them Alien Assassins. Sharp claws, auto turrets on their shoulders, and also pretty tall. Watch out Bacura.” General Fox replied.


“Thanks for the heads up. I’ll make sure to take out these “Alien Assassins.” General Bacura said, then the line went dead. Probably directing orders to his troops. General Fox looked outside, saw no one, then forced the duct door open and jetpacked down to one of the platforms. He started making his way to the core, until he heard a bang. He turned around to see the largest assassin squeezing his way out of the duct, then jump to the ground. General Fox guessed it to be about 9 feet tall, with 6 spindly arms and a ravenous mouth concealed by a helmet It roared, then charged at him. He sidestepped but the assassin was ready. One of its arms lugged behind it and hit General Fox in the back of the head. He slipped and got ready for another attack. The auto turrets on its back charged up, then fired rapid fire shots. General Fox took cover behind a crate as it barraged the crate with shots.


General Bacura was advancing down a hallway with his team, when he received a bleep on his radar. They zipped onto the ceiling as Aliens came rushing down the hallway, accompanied by a tall, spindly, humanoid beings with multiple arms.


His troopers did not know what to make of the things. General Bacura got out his pistols and started firing at the things. They roared, and charged at him. His other troopers started firing as General Bacura dodged the Alien Assassins. He got out his trident and stabbed one. It screamed, and another jumped to get on Bacura. He backflipped off the assassin’s back as the second one body-slammed into the first one. Bacura jumped, then stabbed the sandwiched assassins in the back. An assassin was about to lift Bacura in the air, but he stabbed it with his trident and kicked it, making it stagger back. Bacura got out his sniper rifle and shot it in the head.


General Fox had no choice. He jumped from his hiding place and charged the thing. It fired at him, but he activated his ray shield and kept on the charge. The giant thing then charged at him. General Fox activated his jetpack, which certainly confused the assassin. He flew over the assassin and turned back, then fired several shots at one of the auto turrets. It exploded, making the assassin scream in pain. Apparently, that was a war cry, because 5 more regular alien assassins jumped out of the ducts and made a defensive circle around the mega assassin. General Fox charged them anyways. 2 of the assassins stepped up to attack, but General Fox jumped and kicked both in the face. They fell to the platform as 2 others moved in to intercept . He slid under one’s legs, then shot the back of it’s head. It roared, and General Fox jumped up to stab it in the head, when a meaty arm whacked him out of the air. He landed on a platform as the mega assassin looked at him. The two he had kicked got back on their feet.


Then, all of their auto turrets fired at the support beams of the support beams on General Fox’s platform. It crumble as General Fox leapt at the walkway. He activated his wrist grappling hook, which flew forward and embedded itself in the metal. Then, he used his jetpack to get back on the walkway as the auto turrets aimed at him again. He brought out both of his swords so quick, that none of the lasers reached him in time. He deflected the shots right back at one of the Alien Assassins. It fell back, as it’s comrades kept up the barrage. Another one of their brothers went down, and they realized that shooting the tiny Aquanonian would not work. One used a grappling hook to swing at General Fox, while 2 others jumped. One barely hung onto the platform with its claws as the other made it on the walkway. It swiped at General Fox, and he dodged. The other Alien Assassin on the grappling hook swung to kick at General Fox, but he backflipped back, and the assassin kicked the other Alien Assassin instead, who was advancing at General Fox. It spiraled off the platform, never to be seen again. By that time, the other Alien Assassins had reached General Fox’s position. General Fox randomly shot a button on a panel, and the bottom of the gigantic room opened up to show the whole battle happening below them. An Alien fighter being pursued by a trio of Trident-fighters passed by as an ANT-class Attack ship broadsided an Alien cruiser. The ground could be seen below them, with the crashed ships and little dots of W6-GTs firing on Alien troops.


Suddenly, the ground below started to fall as the platforms lost stability due to all of the Alien Assassins on the platform. General Fox stabbed one with his swords as he ran for the core, which was the only thing not falling, as that it was secured to the ceiling along with several platforms. He shot his grappling hook at one of those platforms and launched himself towards it, but felt a hand grab his leg. It was the Mega Assassin, as the other assassins grabbed hold of its leg. The platform they were on fell and crashed onto the ANT ship, exploding. General Fox tried to shake them off, but it wouldn’t work. His grappling hook was slipping, and General Fox prepared for his inevitable death, when a shot from an Aquanonian sniper rifle hit the Mega Alien Assassin. It screamed as it lost its grip on General Fox’s leg, and fell, along with it’s minions. Fox looked up to see who shot it. On one of the doorways, stood General Bacura with his special forces troops, holding a sniper rifle.


“You okay over there?” General Bacura yelled over the ferocious wind.


“Might need a little help making this ship go boom-boom!” General Fox replied, then chuckled.


General Bacura summoned the one gunship that was left after the other was shot down. It hovered up the core shaft, where everyone got on. The last trooper who got on said that Alien troops were headed for them, so General Bacura told the pilot to hide behind the Core. By the time the Aliens reached the only entrance to the Core, the gunship was out of sight. The aliens disregarded the room, supposed everyone get killed by falling to their death, then left, while the troopers planted bombs on the core. The gunship lowered itself down out of the shaft as Bacura’s demolition troopers remotely detonated their bombs. The whole room exploded behind the gunship as it flew to the Conqueror, as the giant bulk of the ship finished off an Alien Dreadnought.


Chapter 4: The Battle Down Below
The master told the two generals that Alien forces were overpowering their forces on the ground. They two general went to their own ships, gathered their reinforcements, and got in their viper fighters to lead their gunships down to the ground.


A landing area had been cleared on a crashed Green Republic dreadnought from the First Battle of F-16 Island for the two commanders. The viper fighters told the command centers that they would fight with their troops, and flew by the downed dreadnought. On a clearing, where 10 W6-GTs, and 2 platoons holding their own on the Aliens, the gunships landed, deploying their troops, with war cries and guns at the ready. General Fox set his fighter to auto-pilot, then jumped out. He activated his jetpack, then flew to the front lines. He tackled an Alien soldier, then shot another in the face. An Alien Assassin turned to face it, but one of his robots form before tackled it, and proceeded to chomp it up into tiny pieces.


General Fox’s special forces troops took over the battlefield like a wave. The ALien soldiers unprepared for the threat were shot and Alien Assassins were run over by the invisible robots. Rocket troopers shot down any starfighters that even attempted to take out the walker transports as they landed W10-GTs and other support walkers. The Aliens landed their own walkers as they cleared a path for other troops. W10-AWs sent down they're stabilizer legs and shot several shots at the Alien forces. W6-LAWs advanced and took their positions, while the somewhat unorganized Alien forces regrouped and charged again at the Allied defense. The Green Republic’s expert snipers picked off Alien warriors straying from the army, while the Spike Republic’s heavy artillery barrage the giant Alien walkers.


An Alien pinned off a Green Republic soldier, who was begging for mercy. It was about to shoot the soldier in the head, when it took a shot to the side. The Alien looked up to see who shot him, but several more shots battered it, and it fell to the ground, it’s lifeless body laying still. General Fox pulled the Green Republic trooper up, where some medics rushed over to bring it to the medic bay. AN ALien assassin pinned down several Red Republic troopers, but some of Fox’s special forces troops dropped down from a ledge and took it down. Suddenly, an Alien walker burst out of a ship, but started shooting another one. It finished the other walker off pretty quickly, as the drivers were startled to see one of their own trying to kill them. General Fox spied General Bacura in the cockpit, along with one of his soldiers standing as a co-pilot. He rushed into battle, taking down Alien soldiers left and right with the rogue walker at Fox’s side.

General Fox kicked an Alien down into the ground, and shot it in the head, when he was rammed and pushed into a crashed Trident-fighter. The Alien seemed to be a high-ranking commander, similar to the one Fox had previously fought in the woods. But this one seemed more muscular, and had a gun attached to his shoulder. Two Alien assassins dropped down from nowhere and prepared to finish off General Fox. All of they’re auto-cannons fired, but Fox ducked and returned fore with dual-wield pistols. General Bacura’s rogue walker came in and stomped around, creating dust on the beach battlefield and blocking the view of everyone.


The two Alien Assassins then saw the rogue walker, roared uniously, and charged at the walker. General Bacura and his co-pilot were not aware of this, but by the time they realized death was approaching them, it was too late. And with their sharp claws, the ALien Assassins shattered the glass of the cockpit of the walker. The co pilot was grabbed by one of the assassins, and was flung into the sand. General Bacura narrowly dodged another hand. He brought out a pistol and started fending off the assassins as he backed into the bowels of the walker.


Meanwhile, General Fox activated his heat-vision on his helmet and searched for the Alien commander in the debris. It stood up, not knowing where the crafty Fox was due to the dust. General FOx brought out his MX-S15C sniper rifle and took aim. But the commander's auto turret was faster. It fired a flurry of shots, one striking General Fox in the shoulder. He changed his gun to automatic mode, and started shooting back at the commander. It backflipped and dodged most of the shots, several striking it in many places.


General Bacura rushed at the ALien Assassins. THey were not prepared, and he jumped onto one’s face, stabbing it with his trident until it was dead. The other turned to shoot the tiny general, but he used his jetpack to jump onto that one as well. The pilot from before got up, and with his pistol, started firing high powered shots at the assassin. It turned to face him, roared, but was cut off by General Bacura landing on its back and stabbed it in the throat. It thumped to the ground as General Bacura jumped off of the dead body. The pilot and the general then ran to help out the one and only General Fox.


General FOx rushed at the commander, throwing his gun at the daunting figure of the Alien commander. He easily dodged the gun, but was not prepared for the oncoming FOx. Both rolled onto the ground, and the commander ratchet to pull out a wickedly sharp blade. He thrust it at General FOx, who was barely able to pull out his trident to deflect it in time. The commander sensed something behind him, and deflected General Bacura’s trident. The pilot, who was reluctant to come along, fired his pistol at the commander. His aim was true and some shot struck the commander in the head. The two generals teamed up against the commander, occasionally spinning off shots at the commander with pistols, or throwing each other tridents to one another, one using two tridents while the other one pulled off shots at the commander. But once, General Bacura went for the kill, charging at the commander while he was preoccupied with Fox. But the commander spun around and kicked Bacura back. He went flying, and fell into the sand. But the commander leapt up and stabbed General Bacura in the chest.


“No!” General Fox yelled, then charged as General Bacura went limp. The commander turned to face the distraught general as the two fought. The pilot, being a special forces soldier, contained some medical knowledge. He called a medic, and proceeded to carry Bacura to the nearest medic station.


One of the medic troopers was tending to a Green Republic trooper with a twisted ankle when he saw the pilot carrying General Bacura.


“What? How?” he said as the pilot set General Bacura onto a stretcher.


“There is no time. Help him now.” the pilot said, then ran off to help General Fox take down the devious commander.


General Fox was determined to take down the commander. The commander launched every tip and technique he knew at Fox, but nothing worked. His kicks seemed to simply bounce off the general, and he activated his shield whenever he shot at the commander with his auto turret. The pilot lunged at the commander, and took him to the ground. Then, the commander activated his sonic wave at General Fox, making him fly backward into a crashed ship.


“I’ve killed one of your precious general, and now, I’ll kill you and destroy you’re puny allies” the Commander muttered, then stabbed the pilot in the chest.


“Not before I’ve killed you first.” the pilot muttered with his last breaths, holding a bomb in his hand. The commander realized was was happening, and hopped backwards to avoid the blast. But General Fox lunged at the commander, bringing him down, took the bomb from the pilot’s hands, and threw it at the confused commander. THen he activated his personal shield around himself and the pilot as the bomb exploded.
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Chapter 5: The Finale

The battle comes to a close

Part I: The End
With the near-death experience of General Bakura and the deaths of 2 ALien leaders, the allied troops were filled with morale. They rushed past the bodies of General Fox, the pilot, and the shreds of the commander, medics taking them to the medical bay with General Bakura. The medics and they are droids did their best to keep the trio alive, while the battle raged on around the medic tent.


On the ground, reinforcements from Aquanonia charged into battle, with Aquanonian juggernauts crushing Aliens around them, and new models of walkers fighting with their predecessors, side to side. Pcpcs manning they're artillery cannons shot large balls of slime, stopping whole Alien walkers in their tracks. Kidons swooped in, grabbing unlucky ALien soldiers and flinging them into the air, or chopping them into bits and pieces.


In the skies, the ALien ships were being pushed out. More ally reinforcements came to the Red Republic’s aid. Spike Republic ships rammed into enemy ships, with expert boarding parties diving into the bowels of ALien ships to destroy the ship. The valiant kidons swooped into, landing on ALien ships and ripping off metal plates, leaving holes where Red Republic Jet troopers swoop in and kill the ALiens inside. Starfighters zoomed by reinforcements, shooting down any alien. The sudden morale boost in the Allied ranks scared the aliens. If they didn’t retreat, the Allied forces would overrun them, so they attempted to retreat. But they didn’t get that far, as that Allied reinforcements came to the island’s aid. Alien ships plummeted to their doom as the forces on the ground were massacred. The battle came to a quick and decisive end.

Part II: The Aftermath
F-16 Island was a mess. Starships of all sizes and shapes lay scattered under the ocean around the island and lay defeated in the numerous forests and beaches. Dead kidon bodies floated at the top of the water. Bodies of every kind of soldier lay on battlefields. Aquanonian troopers, Red Republic troopers, Green Republic commandos, Pcpc flankers, all of the soldiers who helped push back the Aliens. Several of General Fox’s robots lay there, legs splayed out. Walkers burning in the forests, and crashed starships waiting to be scavenged.


A large meeting was held. The twin generals, along with other important Red Republic generals and commanders, were present. The master was there, and he spoke.


“Generals, commanders, we were in a dire situation, and we may be in another soon enough. The Alien navy is enormous, and the fleet that attacked us was only a small portion of it. For sure, the Aliens will attack again, when we are weakened and our allies have headed off. What shall we do?” he said.


The leaders talked among themselves, making up decisions and other ideas. Finally, two generals spoke up.


“Master,” General Bakura said. “General Fox and I thought that, well, as people say, the greatest defense is a quick and decisive offense. So if we can track down where the Aliens dropped their portal, we can attack it and stop Aliens from entering Aquanonia.” General Bakura suggested.


“Heck, we can just take it over and use it against them!” General Fox exclaimed.


“Whoa wait. Are you saying that we can attack their galaxy without having to cross the void between ours and there's?” the master replied.


“Personally, I think that idea is genius.” Commander Coyote said.


The generals and leaders started talking again.


But the master spoke again.


“Generals, this raises a whole bunch of questions. Our home fleet is in no shape to attack anyone or anything. THe portal is sure to be heavily guarded. Even the Conqueror is sitting in an asteroid, being repaired! Then, we somehow capture it, how are we supposed to defend it when our fleet is as weak as an eel? And even if we attack the Aliens through the portal, how are we supposed to conquer 1 planet, let alone, a whole galaxy?” the master ranted.


“Ah. The answer, my friend, is simple. Bakura?” General Fox prompted.


“Help. If we can tell the other countries about this, they would be delighted to help. Even better, the Green Republic has found a way from our galaxy there's. So they can make surprise the Aliens and use guerilla tactics to destroy key Alien outposts, while we attack from the inside. How about that?” Bakura said.


“Okay. I lied. Not so simple after all.” General Fox said.


“I’m in with them. General Brave said.


“Me too!” General Coyote agreed.


“Then, we will send scouts to find weak spots, and General Fox and General Bakura will spearhead an infiltration to destroy the base.

Part III: The Response
In the dark sea, where no seagrass dared to grow, Alien ships hung still in the murky water. THe only light was from numerous Alien ships, their base, and the giant portal. One giant ship emerged out of the swirling red gloop, as the ship trailed some of the liquid with it and into the water. General Fox, General Bakura, and they’re commandos swam to the base, swiftly and silently. THey hide behind a rock, looking at a guard tower with an Alien seatrooper. THe schematics from the scouts were very detailed. 3 giant ships, all about 5 kilometers long, hovered over the portal, guarding it from any possible threats. One of his commandos, extended his gun barrel, attached a muzzle, aimed, adjusted his scope, and fired. THe seatrooper fell to the deck of the guard house, dead. None of his comrades saw their brethren fall, and one noticed. He looked around to see the source of the gunshots, but General Fox leapt down from the roof and sliced the ALien’s head off. THe commandos took over again as an Alien ship passed overhead, searchlights hovering over the guard house.


“We’re busted.” one of General Bakura’s lieutenants said.


“Hey, aren’t you the pilot from F-16? You’re supposed to be in a medic bay!” General Bakura said.


He had been promoted to lieutenant after his almost sacrifice at F-16, killing the commander and living to fight another day. Apparently, he had sneaked out of the medic bay and put on his gear.


THey all rushed in the guard tower, avoiding the ship’s spotlights.


“Go, go, go!” General Fox shouted in his intercom.


The commandos ran to the main control center, with the ship close in tail. It started firing it’s machine gun, which was ineffective against the highly trained-commandos. Some leapt to the side, then catching up, firing their TX-MP-60s at the ship. Lieutenant Rox activated his grapple hook, then shot it at the ship. His aim was true, and he flew away on the ship. He got out his trident, and made a hole in the ship. He jumped down into the cockpit, scaring the death out of the pilots. He shot one in the face, and kicked the other into a wall. He took the controls and told the rest of the commandos he would keep watch until his cover was busted.


Finally, the commandos reached the main command center, and approached the door. They filed up on the sides, then when General Bakura thought it was clear, he opened the door and everyone rushed in. Several ALien guards were quickly taken care of, one having his head sliced off and the other being shot in the chest. The commandos made their way to the command center, stealthy but quickly. They finally barged in, killing the controllers and taking the admiral hostage.

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Not as good as @_IshEric 's Thanksgiving Blood thing but yeah not dun yet :thumbsup:
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Very cool!!!! Looks like it took forever, awesome story! You have my undying respects my fellow author! (I write books aswell, I'm quite good at it)
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Very cool!!!! Looks like it took forever, awesome story! You have my undying respects my fellow author! (I write books aswell, I'm quite good at it)
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