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Hi guys this is my 2nd map submission that i made for BL , the map is called Oasis , if i'm gonna be honest this is probably one of the best maps ive made in a while and im really happy how it turned out , i literally smiled while making this map its so unique and clean , also i made this map yesterday and finished it today and it took like 7/ 8 hours to make so yea it wasn't easy , anyways enough talk

Map Name : Oasis
Created By : Reco ( Myself )
Duration : 7 to 8 hours
Coordinates : 0 64 0

How i Made the Map : For the Main islands and middle island i used WorldEdit , i also used WorldEdit to paste the islands around the map , for the roof used //sphere 251:1 10 and cut it in half and for the middle one i used //cyl 251:1 15 and everything else was made by hand

Screenshots :

Full View :
Screenshot (37).png


Middle :
Screenshot (32).png


Islands :
Screenshot (36).png

Screenshot (35).png

Screenshot (34).png


idk what else to take a screenshot of lol

Download Link : https://www.mediafire.com/file/ibp15598givysuf/§lBL+§aSky§eWars+-+§fOa§6sis.mcworld/file

Tags : @_TrenzK_ @KhrizKGM @Voniblynn @calmly @Eyow189 @_PineappleDeath_ @Angi_MSG @lucas1901 @Alfarizi @AllyMac_ @Dz81 @eccedxntesiilast @SoftwareSlicer @Penquin @Pufflin

Thank u and i hope u guys enjoy
 
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Eriell said:
Hi guys this is my 2nd map submission that i made for BL , the map is called Oasis , if i'm gonna be honest this is probably one of the best maps ive made in a while and im really happy how it turned out , i literally smiled while making this map its so unique and clean , also i made this map yesterday and finished it today and it took like 7/ 8 hours to make so yea it wasn't easy , anyways enough talk

Map Name : Oasis
Created By : Eriell ( Myself )
Duration : 7 to 8 hours
Coordinates : 0 64 0

How i Made the Map : For the Main islands and middle island i used WorldEdit , i also used WorldEdit to paste the islands around the map , for the roof used //cyl 251:110 and cut it in half and for the middle one i used //cyl 251:1 15 and everything else was made by hand

Screenshots :

Full View :
View attachment 280044

Middle :
View attachment 280037

Islands :
View attachment 280042
View attachment 280041
View attachment 280040

idk what else to take a screenshot of lol

Download Link : https://www.mediafire.com/file/ibp15598givysuf/§lBL+§aSky§eWars+-+§fOa§6sis.mcworld/file

Tags : @_TrenzK_ @KhrizKGM @Voniblynn @calmly @Eyow189 @_PineappleDeath_ @Angi_MSG @lucas1901 @Alfarizi @AllyMac_ @Dz81 @eccedxntesiilast @SoftwareSlicer @Penquin @Pufflin

Thank u and i hope u guys enjoy
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UH-MAZING!!!
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Eriell said:
Hi guys this is my 2nd map submission that i made for BL , the map is called Oasis , if i'm gonna be honest this is probably one of the best maps ive made in a while and im really happy how it turned out , i literally smiled while making this map its so unique and clean , also i made this map yesterday and finished it today and it took like 7/ 8 hours to make so yea it wasn't easy , anyways enough talk

Map Name : Oasis
Created By : Eriell ( Myself )
Duration : 7 to 8 hours
Coordinates : 0 64 0

How i Made the Map : For the Main islands and middle island i used WorldEdit , i also used WorldEdit to paste the islands around the map , for the roof used //cyl 251:110 and cut it in half and for the middle one i used //cyl 251:1 15 and everything else was made by hand

Screenshots :

Full View :
View attachment 280044

Middle :
View attachment 280037

Islands :
View attachment 280042
View attachment 280041
View attachment 280040

idk what else to take a screenshot of lol

Download Link : https://www.mediafire.com/file/ibp15598givysuf/§lBL+§aSky§eWars+-+§fOa§6sis.mcworld/file

Tags : @_TrenzK_ @KhrizKGM @Voniblynn @calmly @Eyow189 @_PineappleDeath_ @Angi_MSG @lucas1901 @Alfarizi @AllyMac_ @Dz81 @eccedxntesiilast @SoftwareSlicer @Penquin @Pufflin

Thank u and i hope u guys enjoy
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Wow this really is built neat and nicely. I love the island itself and trees, it's so cute and the gradient. The buildings is also cool but the domes could use more details. But good jobb :D
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Idk, your spawn islands position are like in a shape of a diamond. I think 4 of the island should be put closer or push it a bit back to add connecting islands.
I will send a screenshot of which 4 of the spawn islands that should be moved forward. or if add connecting island, back.
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ok I edited your screenshots to know what I mean with the island positions!


ok, so if you don't add connecting islands, I think the islands circled in black should be a few blocks closer! Like a little forward than the middle of the 2 islands next to it!
DomesNoConnecting.png




This image shows what you could do if you add the connecting islands. So if you want to add the connecting islands, push back the islands that have darker shaded circles, and add the connecting island where the yellow circle is!
DomesYesConnecting.png




Now, it's your choice to do what you want, this is all just a suggestion!
In my own opinion, I think larger spawn islands should have connecting islands or else all the spawn islands would get to close to each other! I think smaller spawn islands can get away with no connecting island, and your spawn islands is a bit tough because it's between large and small, so either one would probably work!
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So far so good... I agree with eyow but i want to suggest more... Maybe try adding stained glasses on the side of the spawn to look like water (the map's name is oasis so it would look better with that touch) and make small chunks on sand or stone on the mid... It looks better if you ask me and makes the pvp more challenging with some blocks blocking the way or just stand on them when pvp-ing (i got the highground!)
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Dominicshortbow said:
ok I edited your screenshots to know what I mean with the island positions!


ok, so if you don't add connecting islands, I think the islands circled in black should be a few blocks closer! Like a little forward than the middle of the 2 islands next to it!
View attachment 280051



This image shows what you could do if you add the connecting islands. So if you want to add the connecting islands, push back the islands that have darker shaded circles, and add the connecting island where the yellow circle is!
View attachment 280050



Now, it's your choice to do what you want, this is all just a suggestion!
In my own opinion, I think larger spawn islands should have connecting islands or else all the spawn islands would get to close to each other! I think smaller spawn islands can get away with no connecting island, and your spawn islands is a bit tough because it's between large and small, so either one would probably work!
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i get where you're coming from and i already tried putting it right right next to eachother and its only like 24/18 blocks away from middle , i want to make the map playable for people and some people don't like it when they get rushed of spawn so i tried to distance the islands from each other
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Flikxtah05 said:
So far so good... I agree with eyow but i want to suggest more... Maybe try adding stained glasses on the side of the spawn to look like water (the map's name is oasis so it would look better with that touch) and make small chunks on sand or stone on the mid... It looks better if you ask me and makes the pvp more challenging with some blocks blocking the way or just stand on them when pvp-ing (i got the highground!)
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wdym add stain glass on the side of the spawn? like on the floor?
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Eriell said:
Hi guys this is my 2nd map submission that i made for BL , the map is called Oasis , if i'm gonna be honest this is probably one of the best maps ive made in a while and im really happy how it turned out , i literally smiled while making this map its so unique and clean , also i made this map yesterday and finished it today and it took like 7/ 8 hours to make so yea it wasn't easy , anyways enough talk

Map Name : Oasis
Created By : Eriell ( Myself )
Duration : 7 to 8 hours
Coordinates : 0 64 0

How i Made the Map : For the Main islands and middle island i used WorldEdit , i also used WorldEdit to paste the islands around the map , for the roof used //cyl 251:110 and cut it in half and for the middle one i used //cyl 251:1 15 and everything else was made by hand

Screenshots :

Full View :
View attachment 280044

Middle :
View attachment 280037

Islands :
View attachment 280042
View attachment 280041
View attachment 280040

idk what else to take a screenshot of lol

Download Link : https://www.mediafire.com/file/ibp15598givysuf/§lBL+§aSky§eWars+-+§fOa§6sis.mcworld/file

Tags : @_TrenzK_ @KhrizKGM @Voniblynn @calmly @Eyow189 @_PineappleDeath_ @Angi_MSG @lucas1901 @Alfarizi @AllyMac_ @Dz81 @eccedxntesiilast @SoftwareSlicer @Penquin @Pufflin

Thank u and i hope u guys enjoy
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PROOOOOOOOOOO ADD THIS RNNN:arghh::arghh::pleading:
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Eriell said:
Hi guys this is my 2nd map submission that i made for BL , the map is called Oasis , if i'm gonna be honest this is probably one of the best maps ive made in a while and im really happy how it turned out , i literally smiled while making this map its so unique and clean , also i made this map yesterday and finished it today and it took like 7/ 8 hours to make so yea it wasn't easy , anyways enough talk

Map Name : Oasis
Created By : Eriell ( Myself )
Duration : 7 to 8 hours
Coordinates : 0 64 0

How i Made the Map : For the Main islands and middle island i used WorldEdit , i also used WorldEdit to paste the islands around the map , for the roof used //cyl 251:110 and cut it in half and for the middle one i used //cyl 251:1 15 and everything else was made by hand

Screenshots :

Full View :
View attachment 280044

Middle :
View attachment 280037

Islands :
View attachment 280042
View attachment 280041
View attachment 280040

idk what else to take a screenshot of lol

Download Link : https://www.mediafire.com/file/ibp15598givysuf/§lBL+§aSky§eWars+-+§fOa§6sis.mcworld/file

Tags : @_TrenzK_ @KhrizKGM @Voniblynn @calmly @Eyow189 @_PineappleDeath_ @Angi_MSG @lucas1901 @Alfarizi @AllyMac_ @Dz81 @eccedxntesiilast @SoftwareSlicer @Penquin @Pufflin

Thank u and i hope u guys enjoy
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i love it
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