Skywars map submission

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Name of the map: Boedecken garden
By: OG Mint
Skywars/TeamSkywars
https://www.mediafire.com/download/flbl318e0xtzoua

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This is the first time I make a map for a server, let's see how this goes. :P
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TheDiamondKey said:
Name of the map: Boedecken garden
By: OG Mint
Skywars/TeamSkywars
https://www.mediafire.com/download/flbl318e0xtzoua

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maybe at the bottom at the island add more textures it looks like a big fat ball and make the islands a bit bigger , the middle at the bottom make it look like a floating island it looks too simple and on top maybe add a bit of textures on the patterns , for example don't just use concrete mix it whit wool , concrete powder etc. Make the islands exactly the same height as the middle , making the Middle islands on top and the middle at the bottom is a bit weird . and finally the bird , im not sure if u can make this but it would be good if u can make a huge bird . thats all i can say 5/10 Well done :thumbsup:

EDIT : i looked at it again and i forgot to mention to mix the stone whit diffrent type of stones ( just so it can have some details :) )
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Not bad for a first map! I see you go for a garden theme but i dont see any trees. Try adding hand made trees and plants to make it look nicer. As for the Spawn islands, i think its way too small and the shape looks very odd. I suggest making it more circular and coned like shape. Maybe some trees there too. Also please dont put all mid chests in a cage like that. One is okay but not all.
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The middle should actually have chests and not just the cages imo and starter islands are really short
But I see where you went and I kind of like it 7.5/10
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great job but made islands little bigger :) and more classic not basic this so basic :)
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