Second MAP by xsama.eli

[lovebyexsamaeli]

I just want to start off with all the people that gave me feedback in the last post. I learned from a couple comments. Thx to all the people

This theme is Giant House. I tryed my best to stick with the theme and not go all out. Simple and nice.

I hope all of you enjoy this post,

PLEASE GIVE ME CRITICAL FEEDBACK ON WHAT I SHOULD FIX IN MY NEXT MAP. BE HONEST

 

[SplashingPaint836]

Nice work! I suggest you build a roof kind of weird to see the sky in a room/house. Some walls are a bit empty try adding shelves or paintings. I feel like their could be more things added to the floor but idk what though.

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[_PineappleDeath_]

Is there a specific image or theme you were going off of? Because if not, you should add way more detail - the walls and floors are plain, you could add electrical outlets, baseboards, lamps, rugs, animal beds, toys, clutter in few areas, cords, picture frames on the walls, basically anything to make the space look fuller or more homey. Oops sorry, this’ll be long but let’s just say I have experience with these sort of maps xD

those windows are also in a really.. odd place? It should go up more and be in the center, (if they’re closer to the ground because the people are tiny then the walls probably shouldn’t be so high) you could add more windows as well just to make the walls less plain. Add curtains, blinds, you could make the windows closed / open. That couch could use a tad.. more detail, shading or just different shades of white to make it look more realistic / lined in the necessary places (if that makes sense) the pillows could be fluffier too. Those tiny humans look extremely adorable but very sticky and unrealistic.. that plant pot could be a tad smaller too and mixed with different browns (or whichever block you’re using) you could always add lamp shades to you know.. the lamps just to make them look a bit cleaner as well qwq

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[lovebyexsamaeli]

I just want to start off with all the people that gave me feedback in the last post. I learned from a couple comments. Thx to all the people

This theme is Giant House. I tryed my best to stick with the theme and not go all out. Simple and nice.

I hope all of you enjoy this post,

PLEASE GIVE ME CRITICAL FEEDBACK ON WHAT I SHOULD FIX IN MY NEXT MAP. BE HONEST

Is there a specific image or theme you were going off of? Because if not, you should add way more detail - the walls and floors are plain, you could add electrical outlets, baseboard, lamps, rugs, animal beds, toys, clutter in few areas, cords, picture frames to the walls, basically anything to make the space look fuller or more homey.

those windows are also in a really.. odd place? It should go up more and be in the center, (if they’re closer to the ground because the people are tiny then the walls probably shouldn’t be so high) you could add more windows as well just to make the walls less plain. Add curtains, blinds, you could make the windows closed / open. That couch could use a tad.. more detail, shading or just different shades of white to make it look more realistic / lined in the necessary places (if that makes sense) the pillows could be fluffier too. Those tiny humans look extremely adorable but very sticky and unrealistic.. that plant pot could be a tad smaller too and mixed with different browns (or tans? Whichever block you’re using) you could always add lamp shades to you know.. the lamps just to make them look a bit cleaner as well qwq

Thx for all the info and ill look into it

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[lovebyexsamaeli]

Nice work! I suggest you build a roof kind of weird to see the sky in a room/house. Some walls are a bit empty try adding shelves or paintings. I feel like their could be more things added to the floor but idk what though.

Okay I see thx too.

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[SplashingPaint836]

Okay I see thx too.

What happen to your other map?

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[DarkTdmPlays]

Is there a specific image or theme you were going off of? Because if not, you should add way more detail - the walls and floors are plain, you could add electrical outlets, baseboard, lamps, rugs, animal beds, toys, clutter in few areas, cords, picture frames to the walls, basically anything to make the space look fuller or more homey.

those windows are also in a really.. odd place? It should go up more and be in the center, (if they’re closer to the ground because the people are tiny then the walls probably shouldn’t be so high) you could add more windows as well just to make the walls less plain. Add curtains, blinds, you could make the windows closed / open. That couch could use a tad.. more detail, shading or just different shades of white to make it look more realistic / lined in the necessary places (if that makes sense) the pillows could be fluffier too. Those tiny humans look extremely adorable but very sticky and unrealistic.. that plant pot could be a tad smaller too and mixed with different browns (or tans? Whichever block you’re using) you could always add lamp shades to you know.. the lamps just to make them look a bit cleaner as well qwq

Yes maddie! Get in on that map critiquing businesses xD

I just want to start off with all the people that gave me feedback in the last post. I learned from a couple comments. Thx to all the people

This theme is Giant House. I tryed my best to stick with the theme and not go all out. Simple and nice.

I hope all of you enjoy this post,

PLEASE GIVE ME CRITICAL FEEDBACK ON WHAT I SHOULD FIX IN MY NEXT MAP. BE HONEST

It does need quite a bit more detail but I think it's a good start.

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[_PineappleDeath_]

Yes maddie! Get in on that map critiquing businesses xD

I love building maps like these, that’s why I decided to comment since it took me quite sometime to figure out where I was going with my own xD sao that’s all

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[DarkTdmPlays]

I love building maps like these, that’s why I decided to comment since it took me quite sometime to figure out where I was going with my own xD sao!

Yes yes the suprises you made in ally's bp lobby are wonderful xD

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[Chealy24]

Well done, definitely the start of something good, I applaud anyone who has the effort to sit and make big builds like them so yeah keep building and make it great

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[lovebyexsamaeli]

Well done, definitely the start of something good, I applaud anyone who has the effort to sit and make big builds like them so yeah keep building and make it great

Thank you so much

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[viniu]

This could be a Draw and Guess map, you could just add an area with White Wool to paint, and you decide where do the players stay. Like in a bed, for example

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[AllyMac_]

This could be a Draw and Guess map, you could just add an area with White Wool to paint, and you decide where do the players stay. Like in a bed, for example

I have a dng map like that coming on the next update xD

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