( Season 1) Early Spring - Chapter 2

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"Awww man, It's snowing" Sweety complains. "C'mon Sweety, have some fun!" Says Mos.

Chapter 2- Spring is far

December 15, 2017

It was 1 am sharp at the time. Everyone was asleep... Well almost everyone. There was one particular person that was up at the time. "Yawn," Says Strelitzia as she repeats it. She opens the window and to her surprise, it was snowing outside. "Wow," She says, rubbing her eyes. The clock ticked behind her as she takes a step outside her balcony. But to her surprise, she hears footsteps coming from the hallways and she knew if her parents knew she was awake at 1:00 Am, she'll be in big trouble.

She quickly grabs her blanket and got on the couch. She felt someone taking her blanket and she knew if she made one sound, she was done for. But to her surprised someone put ice behind her back and she couldn't hold the coldness, making her get up and scream. She heard laughing and she knew, it wasn't her parents but it was cinder. "CINDER!" She says. Cinder laughs and laughs so hard that her face turns red has a red popsicle. "You should've seen your face" laughs Cinder. But Strelitzia didn't find it funny at all. "Cinder! You gave me a heart attack!" She repeats.

"Why?" "Cause you thought it was mom and dad," Cinder says while constantly laughing. "Umm well. ya, I guess." She says. "Aww well sorry Strelitzia, I didn't really mean to make you mad, I just wanted to make a joke but It went wrong I guess." She says sadly. Strelitzia rethinks on what she said a couple minutes ago. "Aww.. well I guess I can forgive you for that Cinder, I didn't mean to hurt your feelings." Cinder doesn't say anything. "What about a hug?" Cinder gives Strelitzia a hug. "I forgive you." Says Cinder. "Yay, now let's go to bed before Mos wakes up and tells on us cause that's him." "Sure." And from there they went to bed.

3:30 Am
Sazzy wakes up from a terrible dream she had. "Hmmm, I smell cake." She says. It was dark in her room so she couldn't see where the smell was coming from. She grabs a flashlight. "Oh, cake, wonder who left this here." Then she remembered who did. She felt silence. "My sister Kawaii actually brought cake for me while I ignore her." She felt bad at that point. She didn't want to eat the cake cause she'll feel guilty. She walks into the kitchen slowly. She looks out the window. "Ohh Kawaii was also right, it was snowing outside.. well I guess I can ask my friends to go sledding tomorrow and to make up the things I did to my sister. She grabs a glass of water and went back to sleep.

4:00 Am.
"Ugh, it's snowing" Sweety complains. "What's so wrong about snow?" Says Qwe. "It's too bright and it hurts my eyes," Sweety says back. "C'mon Sweety, go to sleep, I don't want to complain right now. I'm too tired." Qwe says. Qwe goes to sleep but sweety stays awake. "Qwe doesn't understand how much I hate snow." She says. Qwe was sound asleep so she can't make any sound. "Burrrrrr, It's so cold outside." "I don't know who will like that." Says Sweety. She heard the clock ticking behind her. "Well, I guess it's 4 am." "3 more hours before the neighbors wake up." "I should get some rest and worried about this later.

Everyone was sound asleep. Cozy in their bed has the snow starts falling outside.

3 hours later. Mos yawns have he wakes up. "Cinder!" "Strelitzia!" Wake up! "It snowed!" Mos said. The both looked at each other and rethink what they did when he was asleep. "Umm ya, it snows. Yaaay." Says Cinder. Mos went into the kitchen to get some toast to eat. Once Mos left, Cinder and Strelitzia giggled. "Shhhh Cinder, don't tell Mom what we did last night." Winked Strelitzia. "Trust me, Our secret is safe with me." She smiles. Mos, Cinder, and Strelitzia ate toast before they went outside to play. After the 3 were done eating, they grab their sleds and went off. "Hey guys, I'm going to see if Bell and Qwe want to come with us." "Is that ok with you guys?" Says Strelitzia. "Of course!" "The more, the better!" Mos says. So from there, Mos and Cinder went to the big hill while Strelitzia went to get her friends.

Meanwhile. "Mom!" "Mom!" Bell says. Her mom doesn't answer back. "Ugh, guess mom still asleep." Say bell. "C'mon bell." Says qwe. "You're big enough to make your own breakfast." "You should know better." Says qwe. "Qwe, don't tell me what to do, ok?" "I know what to do thank you very much," Bell repeats. "Fine, but I'm just telling you the truth," Qwe says back. Bell already had stressed up her blood but she decided to keep quiet. Qwe grabs toast a spread jelly on it and pour milk into a glass. Bell didn't feel like eating so she lay on the couch.

She heard a knock on the door. She open it and to her look, it was Strelitzia. "Hi, Strelitzia." "Do you need anything from me?" She says. "Hello, Bell" "Hello qwe!" She says. Qwe wave back but bell stay silent. "I was just wondering if you guys wanted to come a sled with us." Bell immediately respond back. "No Thanks." But before she can closed the door, week stop her. "Hey!" "Just because you don't want to go sledding doesn't mean I can't go." Says qwe. "Qwe you're not going." Says bell. "I done care bell, I'm telling Mom." Qwe comes back 2 minutes later. "Mom says you have to go bell." Bell rolls her eyes. "Great!" "I'll meat shu guys at the big hill up ahead." Says Strelitzia as she leaves.

"C'mon Qwe!" She says. "I didn't want to go." "Bell you can't be here all day doing nothing while all your friends are out there having a blast," Qwe says. "I rather stay home, alone." She says. "Well that's not happening now get your boots on, I'll be with the others," Qwe says while closing the door. "Ugh, why does my life have to be like this."

10:30 Am
"Oh, hay bell!" "Hey, Qwe!" Says Cinder and Mos. "Ey, you guess made it?" Says Strelitzia. "You bet I did!" Says Qwe. "Umm hi." Bell says. "Hey" Mos says. They spent a hour and half sledding up the mountain while the snow falls on them bit by bit. "Well, I'm having the time of my life!" Says Cinder. "Couldn't agree more with you." Says Mos and Strelitzia. "C'mon Bell!" Says Qwe. "At least sled a few time instead of sitting on this rock." "No Thanks." She says. "Fine, suit yourself," Qwe says. "Hmm," Strelitzia says. "Is everything alright?" Says Cinder. "Ya... Can I text Kawaii if Sazzy and her want to come?" "Sure!" "Why not." Cinder says.

Strelitzia text Kawaii to see if she want to come and sled.

12:20 Pm.
"Wow," Kawaii says with joy. "I'm so bad at Drawing." Laugh's Kawaii. "C'mon sister, it's might be hard but it's also funny seeing your drawing." Laugh Sazzy. But then Kawaii phone goes off. "Ooo, I got an alert." She reads it. Sazzy plays with the dices that were on the floor. "Strelitzia texted me if we wanted to go sledding." "Sure!" "Why not!" So the both of them got their sledding cloths on and left the house in a snap.

1:00 pm

"Awww man, It's snowing" Sweety complains. "C'mon Sweety, have some fun!" Says Mos. "Can't make me." Sweety talks back. Mos makes a mad face to her. "Hey, Sazzy!" "Hey, Kawaii!" Strelitzia says happily. "Glad you guys can make it!" "Ikr!" Giggles Sazzy. "I'm kinda getting tired Qwe and Cinder says. "Aww but come on!" Says Strelitzia. "The but the party is just getting started!" "Mos don't be a party pooper!" "C'mon!" "Or else I'll tickle you." Smile Kawaii. "Fine fine I'll come." Laughs Mos. After that, they all had a blast, well almost everyone.

8:00 pm

"Wasn't that fun?" Says Qwe. "No.. I mean yes I guess?" Says Bell. "Well I'll take that has an answer, now go to sleep," Qwe says has turned off the lights. "This day was bleh." Says bell as she gets into bed.
"Aaaaaaaaaaaa," Says Strelitzia. "Today was a fantastic day!" "You know what?" "Today was a fantastic day!" Says Mos. "It was the best!" Repeats Cinder. "Well good night guys!" Says Strelitzia. "Same to you, says Mos and Cinder.
"I loved when I put snow behind your back Sazzy" laughs Kawaii. "Ya ya blah blah blah very funny." Giggled Sazzy. "Welp good night Sister." She says. "Same to you."

The cold wind blows throughout the Valley has time past. Then the clouds turn dark for a second and then leaves...

Winter.

Season 1

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Characters In the story:

@Strelitzia
@SazDaMarshmallow
@CinderPuppyEyes
@Qwe15
@SwettyBell98
@mosquito1244210
@KaWaiIeH_Ao

I tried, sorry lol.

My spelling and grammar is off but meh I'm working on it
 
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Soooooo what’s the point of the story



Tbh, it’s pretty great, but a story should either have a plot and tension, with a problem, while a more laid back story should have more humor






pls don’t hurt me I’m just giving criticism D:
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Never asked if I was to edit... btw am I meant to be introduced in the story sometime?
Idek if I entered
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"Awww man, It's snowing" Sweety complains. "C'mon Sweety, have some fun!" Says Mos.

Chapter 2- Spring is far

December 15, 2017

It was 1 am sharp on the time. Everyone was asleep... Well almost everyone. There was one particular person that was up at the time. "Yawn" Says Strelitzia as she repeats it. She opens the window and to her surprised, it was snowing outside. "Wow" She says, rubbing her eyes. The clock ticked behind her has she takes a step outside her balcony. But to her surprised, she hears footsteps coming from the hallways and she knew if her parents knew she was awake at 1:00Am, she'll be in big trouble.

She quickly grab her blanket and got into the couch. She felt someone taking her blanket and she knew if she made one sound, she was done for. But to her surprised someone put ice behind her back and she couldn't hold the coldness, making her get up and scream. She heard laughing and she knew, it wasn't her parents but it was cinder. "CINDER!" She says. Cinder laughs and laugh so hard that her face turns red has a red popsicle. "You should've seen your face" laughs Cinder. But Strelitzia didn't find it funny at all. "Cinder! You gave me a heart attack!" She repeats.

"Why?" "Cause you thought it was mom and dad" Cinder says while constantly laughing. "Umm well.. ya I guess." She says. "Aww well sorry Strelitzia, I didn't really mean to make you mad, I just wanted to make a joke but It went wrong I guess." She says sadly. Strelitzia rethinks on what she said a couple minutes ago. "Aww.. well I guess I can forgive you for that Cinder, I didn't mean to hurt your feelings." Cinder doesn't say anything. "What about a hug?" Cinder gives Strelitzia a hug. "I forgive you." Says Cinder. "Yay, now let's go to bed before Mos wakes up and tells on us cause that's him." "Sure." And from there they went to bed.

3:30Am
Sazzy wakes up from a terrible dream she had. "Hmmm, I smell cake." She says. It was dark in her room so she couldn't see were the smell was coming from. She grab a flashlight. "Oh cake, wonder who left this here." Then she remembered who did. She felt silence. "My sister Kawaii actually brought cake for me while I ignore her." She felt bad at that point. She didn't want to eat the cake cause she'll feel guilty. She walk into the kitchen slowly. She looks out the window. "Ohh Kawaii was also right, it was snowing outside.. well I guess I can ask my friends to go sledding tommorow and to make up the things I did to my sister. She grab a glass of water and went back to sleep.

4:00Am.
"Ugh, it's snowing" Sweety complains. "What's so wrong about snow?" Says Qwe. "It's to bright and it hurts my eyes." Sweety says back. "C'mon Sweety, go to sleep, I don't want to complain right now. I'm to tired." Qwe says. Qwe goes to sleep but sweety stays awake. "Qwe doesn't understand how much I hate snow." She says. Qwe was sound asleep so she can't make any sound. "Burrrrrr, It's so cold outside." "I don't know who will like that." Says Sweety. She heard the clock ticking behind her. "Well I guess it's 4 am." "3 more hours before the neighbors wake up." "I should get some rest and worried about this later.

Everyone was sound asleep. Cozy in there bed has the snow starting falling outside.

3 hours later. Mos yawns has he wakes up. "Cinder!" "Strelitzia!" Wake up! "It snowed!" Mos said. The both looked at each other and rethink what they did when he was asleep. "Umm ya it snow. Yaaay." Says Cinder. Mos went into the kitchen to get some toast to eat. Once Mos left, Cinder and Strelitzia giggled. "Shhhh Cinder, don't tell Mom what we did last night." Winked Strelitzia. "Trust me, Our secret is safe with me." She smile. Mos, Cinder and Strelitzia ate toast before they went outside to play. After the 3 were done eating, they grab there sleds and went off. "Hey guys, I'm going to see if Bell and Qwe want to come with us." "Is that ok by you guys?" Says Strelitzia. "Of course!" "The more, the better!" Mos says. So from there, Mos and Cinder went to the big hill while Strelitzia went to get her friends.

Meanwhile. "Mom!" "Mom!" Bell says. Her mom doesn't answer back. "Ugh, guess mom still asleep." Say bell. "C'mon bell." Says qwe. "You're big enough to make your own breakfast." "You should know better." Says qwe. "Qwe, don't tell me what to do, ok?" "I know what to do thank you very much." Bell repeats. "Fine, but I'm just telling you the truth." Qwe says back. Bell already had stressed up her blood but she decided to keep quite. Qwe grab toast a spread jelly on it and pour milk in a glass. Bell didn't feel like eating so she lay on the couch.

She heard a knock on the door. She open it and to her look, it was Strelitzia. "Hi Strelitzia." "Do you need anything from me?" She says. "Hello Bell" "Hello qwe!" She says. Qwe wave back but bell stay silent. "I was just wondering if you guys wanted to come a sled with us." Bell immediately respond back. "No Thanks." But before she can closed the door, week stop her. "Hey!" "Just because you don't want to go sledding doesn't mean I can't go." Says qwe. "Qwe your not going." Says bell. "I done care bell, I'm telling Mom." Qwe comes back 2 minutes later. "Mom says you have to go bell." Bell rolls her eyes. "Great!" "I'll meat shu guys at the big hill up ahead." Says Strelitzia as she leaves.

"C'mon Qwe!" She says. "I didn't want to go." "Bell you can't be here all day doing nothing while all your friends are out there having a blast." Qwe says. "I rather stay home, alone." She says. "Well that's not happening now get your boots on, I'll be with the others." Qwe says while closing the door. "Ugh, why does my life have to be like this."

10:30Am
"Oh hay bell!" "Hey Qwe!" Says Cinder and Mos. "Ey, you guess made it?" Says Strelitzia. "You bet I did!" Says Qwe. "Umm hi." Bell says. "Hey" Mos says. They spent a hour and half sledding up the mountain while the snow falls on them bit by bit. "Well I'm having the time of my life!" Says Cinder. "Couldn't agree more with you." Says Mos and Strelitzia. "C'mon Bell!" Says Qwe. "At least sled a few time instead of sitting on this rock." "No Thanks." She says. "Fine, suit yourself." Qwe says. "Hmm" Strelitzia says. "Is everything alright?" Says Cinder. "Ya... Can I text Kawaii if Sazzy and her want to come?" "Sure!" "Why not." Cinder says.

Strelitzia text Kawaii to see if she want to come and sled.

12:20Pm.
"Wow" Kawaii says with joy. "I'm so bad at Drawling." Laugh's Kawaii. "C'mon sister, it's might be hard but it's also funny seeing your drawing." Laugh Sazzy. But then Kawaii phone goes off. "Ooo, I got an alert." She reads it. Sazzy plays with the dices that were on the floor. "Strelitzia texted me if we wanted to go sledding." "Sure!" "Why not!" So the both of them got there sledding cloths on and left the house in a snap.

1:00Pm

"Awww man, It's snowing" Sweety complains. "C'mon Sweety, have some fun!" Says Mos. "Can't make me." Sweety talks back. Mos makes a mad face to her. "Hey Sazzy!" "Hey Kawaii!" Strelitzia says happily. "Glad you guys can make it!" "Ikr!" Giggles Sazzy. "I'm kinda getting tired Qwe and Cinder says. "Aww but come on!" Says Strelitzia. "The but the party is just getting started!" "Mos don't be a party pooper!" "C'mon!" "Or else I'll tickle you." Smile Kawaii. "Fine fine I'll come." Laughs Mos. After that they all had a blast, well almost everyone.

8:00Pm

"Wasn't that fun?" Says Qwe. "No.. I mean yes I guess?" Says Bell. "Well I'll take that has an answer, now go to sleep." Qwe says has turning off the lights. "This day was bleh." Says bell as she gets into bed.
"Aaaaaaaaaaaa" Says Strelitzia. "Today was a fantastic day!" "You know what?" "Today was a fantastic day!" Says Mos. "It was the best!" Repeats Cinder. "Well good night guys!" Says Strelitzia. "Same to you, says Mos and Cinder.
"I loved when I put snow behind your back Sazzy" laughs Kawaii. "Ya ya blah blah blah very funny." Giggled Sazzy. "Welp good night Sister." She says. "Same to you."

The cold wind blows throughout the Valley has time past. Then the clouds turn dark for a second and then leaves....

Winter..

Season 1

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Characters In the story:

@Strelitzia
@SazDaMarshmallow
@CinderPuppyEyes
@Qwe15
@SwettyBell98
@mosquito1244210
@KaWaiIeH_Ao

I tried, sorry lol.

My spelling and grammar is off but meh I'm working on it
Oml I'm soooo like that ,_, But it was awesome
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I wonder how my mad face would be xD
Is this your mad face?
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Soooooo what’s the point of the story



Tbh, it’s pretty great, but a story should either have a plot and tension, with a problem, while a more laid back story should have more humor






pls don’t hurt me I’m just giving criticism D:
Thanks lol

I'm just introducing all the people into the story for now. There will be a plot with problems later in the story .3.

Never asked if I was to edit... btw am I meant to be introduced to the story sometime?
Idek if I entered
Yes, you did enter. I'm introducing characters chapter by chapter.
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