( Season 1) Early Spring - Chapter 1

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"Who are you in particular?" Says Eric. "I'm much more then you think". Says Ang.

Chapter 1- Winter has ended

~ACT 1~

December 12, 2017

It was an early morning in sunshine valley town. Mostly everyone was getting up and getting their coffee to start off there fresh day at Sunshine Valley.
"Hey, hey Sazzy! Get your body up!" "It's the last day before winter break!" Says Kawaii in a hurry. Sazzy barley gets up. "What now kawaii?" Sazzy says while rubbing her eyes. "Get up Sazzy, It's 6:45 Am, if you don't get up, you're going to miss the bus," Kawaii says while walking out of the bedroom.

"Sigh" Sazzy says to herself. "Well I mean it can't be that bad can it?" "It's the last day of school after all." Sazzy slowly gets her clothes and gets dress in the bathroom so her parents won't wake up. "Psst Kawaii," she says quietly, "What's your class doing for today?" Sazzy says while eating her breakfast "Umm watch movies?" Kawaii says while laughing. "Sazzy it's the last day before winter break, what else do you expect from school?" She says. "Umm do work all day, any day just like my class" Sazzy snaps back to her.

The clock hits 7:05 Am
"Well sounds bad Sazzy," Kawaii says while putting her plate in the sink. Sazzy didn't look too happy at that point. "Listen, sister, you may be having a blast today in your classroom probably watching every favorite movie you like and guess what? I have to do this hard, endless work all day cause my mean teachers don't like fun. Do you know how bad that feels?" Sazzy says with anger. "Yes, Sazzy I do know how it feels." "Ok if it makes you feel better, I'll bring you a slice of cake, what do you say?" Kawaii says. "F-Fine! But don't expect me to enjoy it" Say Sazzy walking out the door.

Meanwhile. "Sazzy you walk ahead, I'm going to pick up Khriz," Kawaii says while walking off. Sazzy kicks a rock. "This crummy day doesn't get worse". She says. Kawaii knocks on Khriz door. "Oh hi, Kawaii". Khriz says while packing up his books on the floor. "Hiya Khriz!" "You ready?" Khriz gets up. "Ya kawaii I'm ready." He says. "Great!" "Let's go!" Khriz yells from the room "Bye mom!".

A few minutes later. "Is Sazzy ok?" "She doesn't look herself today," Khriz says. "Meh she's fine kinda, she's kinda disappointed cause all of us are going to have a blast while she doing work on this awesome last day before winter break. "Awww sounds bad, well I hope she feels better after school over," Khriz says. "Thanks, Khriz, you're a great friend to her," Kawaii says. "Anytime, I just don't like seeing my friends upset," Khriz says.

"It looks like Khriz and Kawaii are having a great time chatting," Sazzy says. "Why does this day have to go so rough." The bus comes from a corner. "Welp here comes the bus," Khriz says. "Usually I'll hate to get on the bus but this time I'm happy to get on the bus lmao." Says kawaii. "Aren't we all?" says Khriz. They all get on the bus but Sazzy sits all the way in the back seats on the bus. "Hmm, that's wired." "Sazzy usually sits next to me every day but I guess not today," Kawaii says while looking at her. The bus driver picks up everyone and heads off to there school.

Khriz stops by Sazzy locker. "Hi Sazzy, is everything ok?" Sazzy slams her locker. "YES... Khriz... I'm fine." She takes her books and leaves. "Well, that went awfully bad." Kawaii pats Khriz. "It's all fine Khriz, she's just overreacting." "C'mon Khriz!" She jumps up and down. "Don't let her ruined your last day of fun!" "Be happy and cheerful!" "Besides I'm bringing her cake and all that kind of junk food." She says "Well I guess you're right about that." Khriz says.

The bell rings at sharp point. "Well Kawaii, time to get to class." Khriz and kawaii rush into class.
8; 00 Am. Kawaii sings. "Oh god, I forgot to ask Ang for the art contest thingy." "I'll be right back," Kawaii says as she leaves the room. "Ok class," the teacher says. "Now I know today is a fun day cause it's the last day before winter break but remember, we're still in school and everyone still needs to follow the rules." That's all." She gets back to her paperwork. "Psst Eric!" Khriz says softly. "What do you want?" "I'm working on my art project," Eric says while painting. "Umm sorry to interrupt Eric but I'm wondering how long have you been painting/drawing?" Khriz says. "Umm 3 years?" "Why?" Eric stares. "Eh sorry to ask." Eric gets back to work.

8:45 Am. Meanwhile. "Ang? You busy?" Kawaii says. "I was, do you need anything?" Ang says. "Oh sorry Ang, I was just wondering if you can make me a spring background painting if you had time," Kawaii says. "Oh ya sure later." "I'm just busy with my art project." She says. "Oh ok, I understand." "Good luck!" Kawaii says. "Thanks." She says. Kawaii walks back to her classroom.

9:20 Am. "Hey Khriz, I'm back," Kawaii says. "Ok lol." 10 minutes past. The bell rings. "Welp time to get this party started!" They both say with excitement. Time past as they were having fun, meanwhile in Sazzy side.
1:00 Pm. "Ugh sounds like my sister and friends are having a blast while I'm stuck here in this boring classroom," she says with a puff. The clock ticks and ticks, every second there is to go. Sazzy looks at the clock, hoping it's somewhere near the end of class. "Ugh, 20 Minutes left." Has she repeats. "I really wish I stayed home instead of being in this crummy class." An hour later.

2:00 Pm. Eric walks into Ang working room. "HmMmm UMm hi Ang.." Eric says while eating cake. "What now Eric?" She says has Eric was a puppet. "Aren't you going to join in the fun?" "It's not like every day we have this much fun." He says. "Eric, I don't have time for that." "I'm busy working on my art project and you should be doing the same tbh." Eric stays in silence. Has the air conditioner blows air from above. "Fine Ang I see." "But you should be doing that at home, just saying". He says walking out of the room.
"He just doesn't understand how important this means to be unlike him." She replies

Has time past, the clock hit the mark of 3 o'clock and before they knew it, it was time to head home. "Khriz!" Kawaii says. "This day was amazing!" She replies. "I couldn't agree more with you kawaii." "But I can't hope the same to Sazzy," Khriz says in the bus. "Nah it's fine, I brought her cake either she likes it or not." She says. "Hm sounds good." The bus was very loud today, people were excited to get home and start there winter break. Sazzy puts her face on her hand. "Well at least this day is over I supposed." She complains. Meanwhile, Eric or Ang don't talk during the ride home at all.

5:00 Pm. Kawaii comes in Sazzy room. "Um, Sazzy I brought cake if you wanted some." Sazzy doesn't say anything. "Well, I'll leave this slice of cake here if you want." She leaves the vanilla cake and leaves. Sazzy stares at the ceiling. "Why oh way."

9:00 Pm. They get in bed. "Sazzy if you were just wondering, it's going to snow tomorrow if you were wondering." Sazzy hums. "Okie then good night." "I'm just a person that wanted someone," Sazzy says. "What?"

The winter break will end soon...

Early Spring

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Characters in the chapter:

@~Ang~
@KhrizKGM
@Anmo
@SazDaMarshmallow
@KaWaiIeH_Ao

Who am I? A person with bad grammar lol.

Chapter 2 will come out in a few days.

This story is meh but ok lol.

Don't judge please, I'm tried my best :3
 
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ONE DAMN MILLION TO TEN
lol this reminds me of when i was hanging out with mah anime club and i was writing a cleaning song, a screaming song, a "Ima kill all da titans even tho i am one" song, and a "shut up, Eren song"
Long story there ^
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I forgot did I ask you to refer to me as Eric?
I got confused furing half of the entire story xD
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"Who are you in particular?" Says Eric. "I'm much more then you think". Says Ang.

Chapter 1- Winter has ended

~ACT 1~

December 12, 2017

It was a early morning in sunshine valley town. Mostly everyone were getting up and getting there coffee to start off there fresh day at Sunshine Valley.
"Hey, hey Sazzy! Get your body up!" "It's the last day before winter break!" Says Kawaii in a hurry. Sazzy barley gets up. "What now kawaii?" Sazzy says while rubbing her eyes. "Get up Sazzy, It's 6:45Am, if you don't get up, you're going to miss the bus." Kawaii says while walking out of the bedroom.

"Sigh" Sazzy says to herself. "Well I mean it can't be that bad can it?" "It's the last day of school after all." Sazzy slowly gets her cloths and gets dress in the bathroom so her parents won't wake up. "Psst Kawaii" she says quietly, "What's your class doing for today?" Sazzy says while eating her breakfast "Umm watch movies?" Kawaii say while laughing. "Sazzy it's the last day before winter break, what else do you expect from school?" She says. "Umm do work all day, any day just like my class" Sazzy snaps back to her.

The clock hits 7:05Am
"Well sounds bad Sazzy" Kawaii says while putting her plate in the sink. Sazzy didn't look too happy at that point. "Listen sister, you may be having a blast today in your classroom probably watching every favorite movie you like and guess what? I have to do this hard, endless work all day cause my mean teachers doesn't like fun. Do you know how bad that feels?" Sazzy says with anger. "Yes Sazzy I do know how it feels." "Ok if it make you feel better, I'll bring you a slice of cake, what do you say?" Kawaii says. "F-Fine! But don't expect me to enjoy it" Say Sazzy walking out the door.

Meanwhile. "Sazzy you walk ahead, I'm going to pick up Khriz." Kawaii says while walking off. Sazzy kicks a rock. "This crummy day doesn't get worse". She says. Kawaii knocks on Khriz door. "Oh hi Kawaii". Khriz says while packing up his books from the floor. "Hiya Khriz!" "You ready?" Khriz gets up. "Ya kawaii I'm ready." He says. "Great!" "Let's go!" Khriz yells from the room "Bye mom!".

A few minutes later. "Is Sazzy ok?" "She doesn't look herself today." Khriz says. "Meh she's fine kinda, she's kinda disappointed cause all of us are going to have a blast while she doing work on this awesome last day before winter break. "Awww sounds bad, welp I hope she feels better after school over." Khriz says. "Thanks Khriz, you're a great friend to her." Kawaii says. "Anytime, I just don't like seeing my friends upset." Khriz says.

"It looks like Khriz and Kawaii are having a great time chatting." Sazzy says. "Why does this day have to go so rough." The bus come from a corner. "Welp here comes the bus." Khriz says. "Usually I'll hate to get on the bus but this time i'm happy to get on the bus lmao." Says kawaii. "Aren't we all?" "Lol" says Khriz. They all get on the bus but Sazzy sits all the way in the back seats on the bus. "Hmm, that's wired." "Sazzy usually sits next to me everyday but I guess not today." Kawaii says while looking at her. The bus driver picks up everyone and heads off to there school.

Khriz stops by Sazzy locker. "Hi Sazzy, is everything ok?" Sazzy slam her locker. "YES.... Khriz.... I'm fine." She takes her books and leaves. "Well that went awfully bad." Kawaii pats Khriz. "It's all fine Khriz, she's just over reacting." "C'mon Khriz!" She jumps up and down. "Don't let her ruined your last day of fun!" "Be happy and cheerful!" "Beside I'm bringing her cake and all that kind of junk food." She says "Well I guess you're right about that." Khriz says.

The bell rings at sharp point. "Well Kawaii, time to get to class." Khriz and kawaii rush into class.
8;00Am. Kawaii sings. "Oh god, I forgot to ask Ang for the art contest thingy." "I'll be right back." Kawaii says has she leaves the room. "Ok class" the teacher says. "Now I know today is a fun day cause it's the last day before winter break but remember, we're still in school and everyone still needs to follow the rules." That's all." She gets back to her paper work. "Psst Eric!" Khriz says softly. "What do you want?" "I'm working on my art project." Eric says while painting. "Umm sorry to interrupt Eric but I'm wondering how long have you been painting/drawing?" Khriz says. "Umm 3 years?" "Why?" Eric stares. "Eh idk sorry to ask." Eric gets back to work.

8:45Am. Meanwhile. "Ang? You busy?" Kawaii says. "I was, do you need anything?" Ang says. "Oh sorry Ang, I was just wondering if you can make me a spring background painting if you had time." Kawaii says. "Oh ya sure later." "I'm just busy on my art project." She says. "Oh ok I understand." "Good luck!" Kawaii says. "Thanks." She says. Kawaii walks back to her classroom.

9:20Am. "Hey Khriz, I'm back." Kawaii says. "Ok lol." 10 minutes past. The bell rings. "Welp time to get this party started!" They both say with excitement. Time past has they were having fun, meanwhile in Sazzy side.
1:00Pm. "Ugh sounds like my sister and friends are having a blast while I'm stuck here in this boring classroom" she says with a puff. The clock ticks and ticks, every second there is to go. Sazzy looks at the clock, hoping it's somewhere near the end of class. "Ugh, 20 Minutes left." Has she repeats. "I really wish I stayed home instead of being in this crummy class." And hour later.

2:00Pm. Eric walks into Ang working room. "HmMmm UMm hi Ang.." Eric says while eating cake. "What now Eric?" She says has Eric was a puppet. "Aren't you going to join in the fun?" "It's not like everyday we have this much fun." He says. "Eric, I don't have time for that." "I'm busy working on my art project and you should be doing the same tbh." Eric stays in silence. Has the air conditioner blows air from above. "Fine Ang I see." "But you should be doing that at home, just saying". He says walking out of the room.
"He just doesn't understand how important this means to me unlike him." She replies

Has time past, the clock hit the mark of 3 o'clock and before they knew it, it was time to head home. "Khriz!" Kawaii says. "This day was amazing!" She replies. "I couldn't agree more with you kawaii." "But I can't hope the same to Sazzy." Khriz says in the bus. "Nah it's fine, I brought her cake either she likes it or not." She says. "Hm sounds good." The bus was very loud today, people were excited to get home and start there winter break. Sazzy puts her face on her hand. "Well at least this day is over I supposed." She complains. Meanwhile Eric or Ang don't talk during the ride home at all.

5:00Pm. Kawaii comes in Sazzy room. "Um Sazzy I brought cake if you wanted some." Sazzy doesn't say anything. "Well I'll leave this slice of cake here if you want." She leaves the vanilla cake and leaves. Sazzy stares at the ceiling. "Why oh way."

9:00Pm. They get in bed. "Sazzy if you were just wondering, it's going to snow tomorrow if you were wondering." Sazzy hums. "Okie then good night." "I'm just a person that wanted someone." Sazzy says. "What?"

The winter break will end soon...

Early Spring

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Characters in the chapter:

@~Ang~
@KhrizKGM
@Anmo
@SazDaMarshmallow
@KaWaiIeH_Ao

Who am I? A person with bad grammar lol.

Chapter 2 will come out in a few days.

This story is meh but ok lel.

Don't judge please, I'm tried my best :3
1. bad grammar + spelling
2. also sometimes you didn't capitalise things that should be capitalised ("Sunshine Valley Town")
3. you also capitalised things that don't need capitalising ("[insert text]" He said. 'he' doesn't need to be capitalised)
4. somethings you say make no sense ("Has the air conditioner blows air from above." also, that's a dependent clause, so it makes no sense as a sentence by itself.)
5. people don't usually say "painting/drawing" in real life. they often say "painting and drawing" or just "painting" or "drawing".
6. "She leaves the vanilla cake and leaves" doesn't sound right to me. instead you could say she placed the cake on the table and left. using the same word in one sentence just sounds weird to me lol you can ignore this one piece of feedback if you want.
7. people don't say "lol" irl. they laugh. "lol" is something you'd say through text but not aloud.
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I forgot did I ask you to refer to me as Eric?
I got confused furing half of the entire story xD
Yup lol
I can be your editor if ya want.. next time while you make it just send me small portions and I can try and edit it. (GRAMMAR ONLY!!)
Sure, I'll really need it
1. bad grammar + spelling
2. also sometimes you didn't capitalise things that should be capitalized ("Sunshine Valley Town")
3. you also capitalised things that don't need capitalising ("[insert text]" He said. 'he' doesn't need to be capitalised)
4. somethings you say make no sense ("Has the air conditioner blows air from above." also, that's a dependent clause, so it makes no sense as a sentence by itself.)
5. people don't usually say "painting/drawing" in real life. they often say "painting and drawing" or just "painting" or "drawing".
6. "She leaves the vanilla cake and leaves" doesn't sound right to me. instead you could say she placed the cake on the table and left. using the same word in one sentence just sounds weird to me lol you can ignore this one piece of feedback if you want.
7. people don't say "lol" irl. they laugh. "lol" is something you'd say through text but not aloud.

I like how you didn't get the message around the end but ok ya thanks for saying that. At least I tried.
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Oh wow nice story xD
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That’s was a good story. You’re very good at writing! I don’t care about the grammar to be honest. At least it’s readable.
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then as you can see people are too infatuated with internet language to even laugh like normal human beings !

IKR!!!

YOURE NOT SUPPOSED TO SAY THE ACRONYMS AHAHHAHAH

and some of them arent even shorter than actually saying the words.. like btw is two syllables longer than just saying by the way, yet people still say THE LETTERS

great story though eric!!
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