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it looks really good! maybe u could go over the outline with a fine liner to add more contrast. 7/10 :^)
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like what @/seacosmos said :3
maybe adding a more bold outline will make it pop out more! and maybe colour it in? so that the colours can also pop out and make the whole drawing look brighter! :3

overall, it’s really nice! keep it up! :3
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The "drawing" itself is really good, I'd give it 7.5 for the detail.
The thing that kinda bothering is just the shading, could've been done more, as You already have the basic colours laid out. It will be rough if You never tried it, but I guess You could improved.

Try to make an illusion by using the shading technique. You know, like the one that can make You think it's 3d.
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It looks good! But the kamemeha wave looks more like a rasengan xD
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Ik
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It looks good, nlg. However, there are some things that need improvement so I'll get into that:

-Try making the lineart more noticable. This can really help the drawing pop out and easier to tell from far distance.
- Practice methods of coloring. Base colors feel a bit messy. Make sure to fill in all those white spots to give it that clean look!
- Add shading! This can give more feeling to the drawing. Either soft shading or cell shading could work, depending on your artstyle. Dont really know much about DragonBallZ, but adding a light source from the kamemeha wave could really make you feel what's going on.
-Work on color blending! The transitions of colors can give the drawing a really good touch!

These are just my opinions, buy overall you did good! 7.5/10 :P!
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