PvZ Map (Mob Wars) - UPDATE

[James Austin]

Map Name: PvZ Map
Built by: MostJames1235
Game Type: Mob Wars

Improved:
✓ The team islands are now rounded

New:
✓ Mini Islands are added. Each mini islands have a plant from Plants vs. Zombies (PvZ)

Screenshots:
1. TEAM ISLANDS
Red Team

Yellow Team

Blue Team

Green Team

Top View

2. FOUR CORNERS

3. THE MIDDLE

4. THE MINI ISLANDS (NEW)

 

[JustynishMC]

VERY NICE UPDATE!!!

Wish this gets added!

Nice work!

I will tag someone:
@DarkTdmPlays @ZoeyLynne @AllyMac_ @Diavent

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[dist]

Ooo this was a plants vs zombies map got it

Maybe make the bottom of the middle and the teams base have detail like the small islands and also make the small islands have detail too

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[James Austin]

VERY NICE UPDATE!!!

Wish this gets added!

Nice work!

I will tag someone:
@DarkTdmPlays @ZoeyLynne @AllyMac_ @Diavent

Thank You

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[AllyMac_]

Cute mini islands! I would make the cars four different colors instead of all brown/yellow. To me the wood log fences on team islands are too fat- either change to regular fence or do something different there. Definitely make underside of all islands detailed like your corner islands are. On the mini islands you could add some stone/gravel and maybe some vines underneath for texture.

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[SlayCC]

The trees still look really bad. Try improving the tree design. Other than that, well done!

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[Reco_]

i dont understand what the theme is , so I cant give u information on what to add for the theme , but like dist said , add more details on the teams islands , like on the Bottom , and how can u do it for the Diamonds island and not for the Middle and for the spawn islands hmmm...? and the walls why are they dirt ? and I agree whit Slay , the Trees looks extremely terrible , some of them looks different and made and some looks like its a Normal tree , and im confused about the concrete path , it doesn't match the house , and the mini islands they look cute and nice bt I don't think it matches whit everything u build. the cars should have more colors , im Sorry but if u want your map to be on The Brokenlens server u : have to come up whit a Good theme , make your builds realistic , make your island in a good shape . If I was the Team Captain like @Diavent I would not include the map on the server , I rate it 1/10 im sorry , I hope u understand

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[Strel]

i dont understand what the theme is , so I cant give u information on what to add for the theme , but like dist said , add more details on the teams islands , like on the Bottom , and how can u do it for the Diamonds island and not for the Middle and for the spawn islands hmmm...? and the walls why are they dirt ? and I agree whit Slay , the Trees looks extremely terrible , some of them looks different and made and some looks like its a Normal tree , and im confused about the concrete path , it doesn't match the house , and the mini islands they look cute and nice bt I don't think it matches whit everything u build. the cars should have more colors , im Sorry but if u want your map to be on The Brokenlens server u : have to come up whit a Good theme , make your builds realistic , make your island in a good shape . If I was the Team Captain like @Diavent I would not include the map on the server , I rate it 1/10 im sorry , I hope u understand

The theme is Plants Vs. Zombies

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[_Ian2Chill]

i dont understand what the theme is , so I cant give u information on what to add for the theme , but like dist said , add more details on the teams islands , like on the Bottom , and how can u do it for the Diamonds island and not for the Middle and for the spawn islands hmmm...? and the walls why are they dirt ? and I agree whit Slay , the Trees looks extremely terrible , some of them looks different and made and some looks like its a Normal tree , and im confused about the concrete path , it doesn't match the house , and the mini islands they look cute and nice bt I don't think it matches whit everything u build. the cars should have more colors , im Sorry but if u want your map to be on The Brokenlens server u : have to come up whit a Good theme , make your builds realistic , make your island in a good shape . If I was the Team Captain like @Diavent I would not include the map on the server , I rate it 1/10 im sorry , I hope u understand

You didn't have to be rude about it

I like your map improvement! I agree with Ally and have no further suggestions. Good job!

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[Reco_]

You didn't have to be rude about it

I like your map improvement! I agree with Ally and have no further suggestions. Good job!

it was not being rude @_Ian2Chill im just telling him the truth , I don't wanna lie. , im even telling him to what add or remove

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[Diavent]

i dont understand what the theme is

He literally stated that it was based off of the popular mobile game Plants vs Zombies (PvZ for short). Additionally, not all builds have to be realistic. It’s just a building preference. Some things are meant to be unrealistic, so you can’t necessarily tell someone to make it more “realistic.” Especially if it’s based off of something such as a game or movie or if it’s not even real in the first place.

it was not being rude @_Ian2Chill im just telling him the truth , I don't wanna lie. , im even telling him to what add or remove

You can give your opinion in a more polite manner. Such as, “I think you should do ____ instead of ____ because of ____.” You don’t have to lie, you just have to be polite.

Map Name: PvZ Map
Built by: MostJames1235
Game Type: Mob Wars

Improved:
✓ The team islands are now rounded

New:
✓ Mini Islands are added. Each mini islands have a plant from Plants vs. Zombies (PvZ)

Screenshots:
1. TEAM ISLANDS
Red Team
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Yellow TeamView attachment 171540 View attachment 171541
Blue TeamView attachment 171542 View attachment 171543

Green TeamView attachment 171544 View attachment 171545
Top View
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2. FOUR CORNERS
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3. THE MIDDLE
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4. THE MINI ISLANDS (NEW)
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It looks good! ^^ Few things I would suggest is to possibly look at redoing the trees a little bit as Slay had suggested. They don’t look too bad, but some improvement could definitely be done. Additionally, try making the tiny islands a little bit smaller and more rounded. Other than that, it looks good! Great job!

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[James Austin]

The trees still look really bad. Try improving the tree design. Other than that, well done!

About those suggestions, there's still no changes on the trees since in "PvZ Map (Mob Wars) - IMPROVED. I'm so confused on what I will change again. Also you said to the other thread that it is a huge improvement and your only suggestion is about the chimney, and the matter is, you didn't say about the trees.
It looks like rude that you didn't say it to the thread before (PvZ Map (Mob Wars) - IMPROVED).

I'm only a NEW in making a map and this is the first map that I made. I accept any all suggestion to my work because I'm only New on this. But, make all suggestions complete because, many times that I edit my map.
I'm sorry that I said it impolitely to you.

i dont understand what the theme is , so I cant give u information on what to add for the theme , but like dist said , add more details on the teams islands , like on the Bottom , and how can u do it for the Diamonds island and not for the Middle and for the spawn islands hmmm...? and the walls why are they dirt ? and I agree whit Slay , the Trees looks extremely terrible , some of them looks different and made and some looks like its a Normal tree , and im confused about the concrete path , it doesn't match the house , and the mini islands they look cute and nice bt I don't think it matches whit everything u build. the cars should have more colors , im Sorry but if u want your map to be on The Brokenlens server u : have to come up whit a Good theme , make your builds realistic , make your island in a good shape . If I was the Team Captain like @Diavent I would not include the map on the server , I rate it 1/10 im sorry , I hope u understand

I'm sorry and I understand. As a captain, leader, or etc. like what you said who's responsible for this, should let the beginners to grow in the manner of good teachings with respect. If you know that he/she has a bad ratings for you, instead of saying the actual rating, you should not say the ratings. Also, if ratings is not needed, you should not say it as a sign of respect.

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When you've said that you used a "polite words" for me, it seems still is an insult, impolite or rude. That's how I feel about it. It wasn't nice.

But, by the way, I'm not say this for having a fight.
And again, I accept any suggestions but it should need complete.

I'm sorry and Thank You.

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