Psycho: Day 1

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    Votes: 2 13.3%
  • 2

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • 3

    Votes: 3 20.0%
  • 4

    Votes: 5 33.3%
  • 5

    Votes: 5 33.3%

  • Total voters
    15

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Hopefully, this writing is good.

BTW the teacher is just there as a side character (oof)

-=-=-=-=-=-

“Uugh…”

The charter bus was pulling up to the camp/lodge where the class would be staying for the next 3 weeks. They groaned, only going because their teacher made them.


“What if we get a disease? Or get attacked? Or… murdered??”
“None of that will happen. No matter what, you WILL go.”


They chuckled, remembering trying to convince their teacher to not make everyone go. It was dumb of them to think those things, but y’know, the least expected could happen, right?

-=-=-

As everyone unpacked their belongings and got ready to have dinner, the faint smell of iron filled the air. No one thought much of it and moved on to the outside eating place. The smell got even stronger, and eventually, no one could handle the stench. Someone got up and went to investigate. Soon after, screams were heard, and everyone rushed over to find the corpse of the teacher. Stab wounds showed that they were murdered.

Right next to the teacher, Trenz was laying there, hacking up blood. A person studying to be a doctor quickly came to the rescue and patched up his wounds. Trenz was up and walking again by the next hour.

-=-=-

Because their teacher wasn’t with them anymore, Max and Cake decided to spend the night together. They were a couple, after all. The roommates of Cake left and crashed out at other people’s places so they didn’t have to listen to Cake and Max flirt. As the hours flew by, The 2 became more and more sleepy. Soon, they fell asleep together.

A person slowly opened the window and crept in. They checked to make sure no one else was around except for the 2 sleeping people. They reached out of their fanny pack and got out a hammer. They lifted it above Max’s head...

-=-=-

The bodies of the 3 dead people were laid in the forest the camp was at. No one could leave, as their charter bus had left, and walking back to civilization would be suicide. There was also no service there, and everyone’s phones were taken away so they couldn’t use their hotspots.

“None of this will happen”

It was safe to say that the teacher was very wrong.

-=-=-=-=-=-

Man the twin role equivalent is so cursed it is always one of the first to die
That aside, it's time to vote!

Out of 2 Psychos, 2 remain
Out of 3 Minions, 3 remain
Out of 1 Assassin, 1 remains
Out of 1 Detective, 1 remains
Out of 2 Doctors, 2 remain
Out of 1 Couple (2 people), 0 remain
Out of 17 Survivors, 17 remain

Trenz was saved, so he cannot be a psycho (Possible roles: Survivor, doctor, detective, assassin, minion)


Krissy
Alice
Khriz

[SAVED] Trenz
Addy
Song
Zack
jamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjam
Harold
Jahs
Maegan
Retro
Leona
Lee
Cosmi
Wolf
Sunny
Angi

[DEAD] Cake - Couple
Alexuis
Hoor
Hank
Marc
Icy
Steph
Yuxxa

[DEAD] Max - Couple
Evies

Votes:

Khriz (7)
Icy (1)


Tags: @Cakeyy @JustACake @_TrenzK_ @Smh_hoor @eviepoop

Yes, jamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjam is someone's nickname
 
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Wow I guess I can't predict the future.


3-star-writing -- A few grammar errors and confusing plotlines such as the teacher MAKING them go on the trip, which should have had a permission slip to go along with it.

I vote Khriz, he would want to take care of Trenz first.
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Wow I guess I can't predict the future.


3-star-writing -- A few grammar errors and confusing plotlines such as the teacher MAKING them go on the trip, which should have had a permission slip to go along with it.

I vote Khriz, he would want to take care of Trenz first.
what- no khriz loves his brother XD
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Hopefully, this writing is good.

BTW the teacher is just there as a side character (oof)

-=-=-=-=-=-

“Uugh…”

The charter bus was pulling up to the camp/lodge where the class would be staying for the next 3 weeks. They groaned, only going because their teacher made them.


“What if we get a disease? Or get attacked? Or… murdered??”
“None of that will happen. No matter what, you WILL go.”


They chuckled, remembering trying to convince their teacher to not make everyone go. It was dumb of them to think those things, but y’know, the least expected could happen, right?

-=-=-

As everyone unpacked their belongings and got ready to have dinner, the faint smell of iron filled the air. No one thought much of it and moved on to the outside eating place. The smell got even stronger, and eventually, no one could handle the stench. Someone got up and went to investigate. Soon after, screams were heard, and everyone rushed over to find the corpse of the teacher. Stab wounds showed that they were murdered.

Right next to the teacher, Trenz was laying there, hacking up blood. A person studying to be a doctor quickly came to the rescue and patched up his wounds. Trenz was up and walking again by the next hour.

-=-=-

Because their teacher wasn’t with them anymore, Max and Cake decided to spend the night together. They were a couple, after all. The roommates of Cake left and crashed out at other people’s places so they didn’t have to listen to Cake and Max flirt. As the hours flew by, The 2 became more and more sleepy. Soon, they fell asleep together.

A person slowly opened the window and crept in. They checked to make sure no one else was around except for the 2 sleeping people. They reached out of their fanny pack and got out a hammer. They lifted it above Max’s head...

-=-=-

The bodies of the 3 dead people were laid in the forest the camp was at. No one could leave, as their charter bus had left, and walking back to civilization would be suicide. There was also no service there, and everyone’s phones were taken away so they couldn’t use their hotspots.

“None of this will happen”

It was safe to say that the teacher was very wrong.

-=-=-=-=-=-

Man the twin role equivalent is so cursed it is always one of the first to die
That aside, it's time to vote!

Out of 2 Psychos, 2 remain
Out of 3 Minions, 3 remain
Out of 1 Assassin, 1 remains
Out of 1 Detective, 1 remains
Out of 2 Doctors, 2 remain
Out of 1 Couple (2 people), 0 remain
Out of 17 Survivors, 17 remain

Trenz was saved, so he cannot be a psycho (Possible roles: Survivor, doctor, detective, assassin, minion)


Krissy
Alice
Khriz

[SAVED] Trenz
Addy
Song
Zack
jamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjam
Harold
Jahs
Maegan
Retro
Leona
Lee
Cosmi
Wolf
Sunny
Angi

[DEAD] Cake - Couple
Alexuis
Hoor
Hank
Marc
Icy
Steph
Yuxxa

[DEAD] Max - Couple
Evies

Votes:
NONE


Tags: @Cakeyy @JustACake @_TrenzK_ @Smh_hoor @eviepoop

Yes, jamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjamjam is someone's nickname
Not just " someone's nickname " My NickName.
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