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I wanted to know how this sounded.

Prologue
By Typifox


Most kids are regular kids. Most kids live regular life, they have regular sun. Most kids aren’t like me.



I am a ten year old kid, named Jaklyn. If you ever see, you may not to able to tell that I’m different. But I am. It’s not my face, body or anything else that you can see. I am allergic to something that really does something to me.

Most kids have regular allergies, like bee stings or one of the major ones, milk. I do pity them, I don’t exactly pity myself, it’s more of a regular everyday thing. I guess I got used to it.

Before I say about my allergy, let me describe myself.

I have dark brown hair, brown eyes, and big black rimmed glasses. I have a mom, dad and brother, Nathan. Nathan is like my best friend, but that doesn’t say much because I’m home schooled and I don’t have much time to meet other kids.

Nathan is three years older then me and totally different not like me at all. He was adopted by my parents when I was eight and I started begging for a sibling. When we took him from the adoption center, I didn’t like him.

But after a while, he seemed to be more like my brother and way nicer. I also felt that my allergy didn’t affect him in any way. In fact, he never mentioned it.

Even the night my parents told. I listened to the entire conversation outside the door. I knew I wasn’t supposed to do that, but it was just my thing, to eavesdrop.

The conversation started off with my mom talking in a soft voice. I didn’t hear what she said, but I could make out a few words, sister, allergy and tell. I’m guessing she said something like this;

“Nathan, we have something to tell you about your sister, she has an allergy to-” I’ll get to that in a minute. Anyway, Nathan nodded, shaking his head up and down. He does this when he’s nervous and I hate it.

It makes me want to grab his head and stop it from moving. He probably did know about my allergy though. It’s obvious, I guess.

But at that time, he was acting like he didn’t.




Anyway, I should really tell you what I’m allergic too. It’s not a secret, and it never will be. I give you permission to tell your friends, or maybe you have none. If so, tell your lovely schoolteacher reading this book to you right now.

I am allergic to what most people live off, what people depend on. I have never known anyone like me, but I hope there are people like me. I don’t want to be alone in this, but if I am forced to be alone, I will be.

Anyway, again, let me just tell you. I am allergic to water.
 
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Allergic to water? Horrible ;-;
Poor xd
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I wanted to know how this sounded.

Prologue
By Typifox


Most kids are regular kids. Most kids live regular life, they have regular sun. Most kids aren’t like me.



I am a ten year old kid, named Jaklyn. If you ever see, you may not to able to tell that I’m different. But I am. It’s not my face, body or anything else that you can see. I am allergic to something that really does something to me.

Most kids have regular allergies, like bee stings or one of the major ones, milk. I do pity them, I don’t exactly pity myself, it’s more of a regular everyday thing. I guess I got used to it.

Before I say about my allergy, let me describe myself.

I have dark brown hair, brown eyes, and big black rimmed glasses. I have a mom, dad and brother, Nathan. Nathan is like my best friend, but that doesn’t say much because I’m home schooled and I don’t have much time to meet other kids.

Nathan is three years older then me and totally different then me. He was adopted by my parents when I was eight and I started begging for a sibling. When we took him from the adoption center, I didn’t like him.

But after a while, he seemed to be more like my brother and way nicer. I also felt that my allergy didn’t affect him in any way. In fact, he never mentioned it.

Even the night my parents told. I listened to the entire conversation outside the door. I knew I wasn’t supposed to do that, but it was just my thing, to eavesdrop.

The conversation started off with my mom talking in a soft voice. I didn’t hear what she said, but I could make out a few words, sister, allergy and tell. I’m guessing she said something like this;

“Nathan, we have something to tell you about your sister, she has an allergy to-” I’ll get to that in a minute. Anyway, Nathan nodded, shaking his head up and down. He does this when he’s nervous and I hate it.

It makes me want to grab his head and stop it from moving. He probably did know about my allergy though. It’s obvious, I guess.

But at that time, he was acting like he didn’t.




Anyway, I should really tell you what I’m allergic too. It’s not a secret, and it never will be. I give you permission to tell your friends, or maybe you have none. If so, tell your lovely schoolteacher reading this book to you right now.

I am allergic to what most people live off, what people depend on. I have never known anyone like me, but I hope there are people like me. I don’t want to be alone in this, but if I am forced to be alone, I will be.

Anyway, again, let me just tell you. I am allergic to water.
You asked in convo for my opinion ._. I put in your grammar errors (the usual) >;D put you already posted it :confused:
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allergic to water... that sux ;-;


I love it!
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It's actually a thing to be allergic to water, a 21 year old in the UK is allergic to water and it makes her skin red, or it hurts.
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It's actually a thing to be allergic to water, a 21 year old in the UK is allergic to water and it makes her skin red, or it hurts.
That sounds like the water is acid for the 21 year old :0 Cause she allergic to the water which is her skin turn red and hurts.
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Wow.. that's sad. I feel really bad for you Typi.
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What? How? Typi isn't the one allergic to water ._. xD
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Anyway, I should really tell you what I’m allergic too. It’s not a secret, and it never will be. I give you permission to tell your friends, or maybe you have none. If so, tell your lovely schoolteacher reading this book to you right now.

I am allergic to what most people live off, what people depend on. I have never known anyone like me, but I hope there are people like me. I don’t want to be alone in this, but if I am forced to be alone, I will be.

Anyway, again, let me just tell you. I am allergic to water.[/QUOTE]
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Re-read this part:
Anyway, I should really tell you what I’m allergic too. It’s not a secret, and it never will be. I give you permission to tell your friends, or maybe you have none. If so, tell your lovely schoolteacher reading this book to you right now.

I am allergic to what most people live off, what people depend on. I have never known anyone like me, but I hope there are people like me. I don’t want to be alone in this, but if I am forced to be alone, I will be.

Anyway, again, let me just tell you. I am allergic to water.
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I thought Jacklyn was the one who was allergic to water? Not Typi?
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Re-read this part:
Anyway, I should really tell you what I’m allergic too. It’s not a secret, and it never will be. I give you permission to tell your friends, or maybe you have none. If so, tell your lovely schoolteacher reading this book to you right now.

I am allergic to what most people live off, what people depend on. I have never known anyone like me, but I hope there are people like me. I don’t want to be alone in this, but if I am forced to be alone, I will be.

Anyway, again, let me just tell you. I am allergic to water.
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Waiitttt Jaklyn is Typi?
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Waiitttt Jaklyn is Typi?[/QUOTE]
I don't know, but she seemed like she was describing herself when she was describing Jaklyn, but at the bottom she really said that she allergic and missed a few more lines, which might mean she was talking about something else, about her, her allergy in real life.
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I'm not Jacklyn .-. My name is different and this is a story, not a summary of my life
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Anyway, how do you like the story? .-.
Waiitttt Jaklyn is Typi?
I don't know, but she seemed like she was describing herself when she was describing Jaklyn, but at the bottom she really said that she allergic and missed a few more lines, which might mean she was talking about something else, about her, her allergy in real life.[/QUOTE]
I just like to describe myself in books when it's not me XD
Also I'm 9 not 10
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Coolll! :o
And while I didn't expect the being allergic to water, ik it exists. ._.
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