Presenting my map for TNT Tag

[VikCheRRy]

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This is a map for TNT Tag, I built it for 3 days in my girlfriend (nickname: SadMoonCherry). Sorry for short and minor errors in my map. Well, the main thing is:
Name: Spaces;
Game Type: TNT Tag;
Builders: Viktorovich (on the VikCheRRy forum), SadMoonCherry.
Nuuuuu ... It seems to be all while

 

[Shadow_Gamer_EXP]

Wow! Awesome build...!

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[_Kxndness_]

Totally lack of details.
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First, i don't like the tree. You need to make a bit shape to the leaves so it will look nice. And, i don't like the blocks that you used on the tree like placing gold instead of leaves? It's kinda a bad idea to do that.
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The quarts, a bit nice but you need to make a textute to it like using stairs so it will look like it's missing a piece. But i prefer using grass instead of this blocks
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The wall, just dont make a diagonal shape it's kinda annoying to see. Try making it a box shape or a random sphere of glass (half). You can add some texture to it by mixing some blocks to it so it will look a bit more nicer to see.
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The sun is nice.
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If you fixed this, probably it will turn out better. Goodluck!

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[Legend warrior]

awesome map i love it
but every thing is almost white it looks more pretty if you make it some more colour full

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[_Kxndness_]

awesome map i love it
but every thing is almost white it looks more pretty if you make it some more colour full

And, needs more detail.

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[_TrenzK_]

It's a fine map! I will tell you all my suggestions below this, but it's all up to you if you want to change it or not xD

1. Maybe the trees ( especially the leaves ) needs more shape, detail, and natural looking instead just like a boxy shape, and it would be better if you use another blocks for the leaves, like using yellow concrete blocks, yellow clay blocks, yellow wools, or any blocks that fits the colour.

2. The quartz floor, you can try using the snow blocks, white powder, white concrete blocks, white wools, white carpets, or any white blocks that mixed together so the floor doesn't looks too plain to see.

3. The sky, you may try using another light blue blocks or add some clouds for it.

But other than that, it's pretty nice, so Good Job

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[HannahZard]

Not bad but try your best to edit the map from Trenz's suggestions, best of luck boy!

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[VikCheRRy]

and what if I build an angel tree instead?

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[_Kxndness_]

and what if I build an angel tree instead?

Just make it detailed and you'll be fine.

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[VikCheRRy]

[QUOTE = "_ Kxndness_, post: 619963, участник: 35699"] Просто сделайте это подробным, и все будет хорошо. [/ QUOTE]
Это сложно, но FUNNY!!!

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