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um I'm really bad at poems and my homework is a poem about a evil knight it can be as long as I want it it's due into tomorrow I need help T.T @XxLiazaliaxX
 
I HAVE SAME BUT IN FRENCH FRENCH POEMES ARE DA WORST WITH VICTOR HUGO LAMARTINE DE NOAILLE ;-;
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Manwee said:
I HAVE SAME BUT IN FRENCH FRENCH POEMES ARE DA WORST WITH VICTOR HUGO LAMARTINE DE NOAILLE ;-;
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We need lia T,T she gives us poems u trans to French and I do mine like it is
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Sorry,but I don't think I can help. ._. I haven't written a poem ever since I was 10. xD And that was for school work,but maybe a year ago I did try....xDD
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xXphoenixXx said:
um I'm really bad at poems and my homework is a poem about a evil knight it can be as long as I want it it's due into tomorrow I need help T.T @XxLiazaliaxX
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1. Get a plotline
2. Use the structure of your poem to help portray certain moments
3. Choose your vocabulary carefully
4. Use interesting imagery
6. The character's feelings also need to be portrayed through language and structure techniques

I'll see if I can write an example poem. Either you copy that (-_- Don't.) or use it as inspiration.
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XxLiazaliaxX said:
1. Get a plotline
2. Use the structure of your poem to help portray certain moments
3. Choose your vocabulary carefully
4. Use interesting imagery
6. The character's feelings also need to be portrayed through language and structure techniques

I'll see if I can write an example poem. Either you copy that (-_- Don't.) or use it as inspiration.
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Yay ty >.< I'll use those tips later and it's in third person view I believe
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Btw it should be in off topic and support
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Well, I would help but that would be cheating. I would never cheat because then the teachers won't know how good/bad I am, and they won't know what I do or don't know.
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XxLiazaliaxX said:
1. Get a plotline
2. Use the structure of your poem to help portray certain moments
3. Choose your vocabulary carefully
4. Use interesting imagery
6. The character's feelings also need to be portrayed through language and structure techniques

I'll see if I can write an example poem. Either you copy that (-_- Don't.) or use it as inspiration.
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I'll use it as both
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I did it because of @XxLiazaliaxX help but can chu check iT


Darker and deeper the Knights hope turned to despair
Air turned in breathable as he walked passed forest, cities, kingdoms
Racing past time to reclaim his hope he had lost
Knights That were former kings serve and worship him

Knowledge of hope became afar more he chased it
Nobody has able to defeat him nor felt his amount of despair
Igniting his hope again, he thought it was impossible
Growing his insanity each hour minute and minute
His hope slowly regained within him when he saw true friend ship
Torture he once did became no more and he ought to love everything


If anyone wants to improve words or fixed my grammar please do so
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xXphoenixXx said:
I did it because of @XxLiazaliaxX help but can chu check iT


Darker and deeper the Knights hope turned to despair
Air turned in breathable as he walked passed forest, cities, kingdoms
Racing past time to reclaim his hope he had lost
Knights That were former kings serve and worship him

Knowledge of hope became afar more he chased it
Nobody has able to defeat him nor felt his amount of despair
Igniting his hope again, he thought it was impossible
Growing his insanity each hour minute and minute
His hope slowly regained within him when he saw true friend sh
Torture he once did became no more and he ought to love everythinj

If anyone wants to improve words or fixed my grammar please do so
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Idk if I should say this.But...
Darker,and deeper,the Knights hope turned into despair,
Air turned in breathable,as he walk passed forests,cities,and kingdoms.
Racing past time,to reclaim his hope he had lost.
Knights that were forumer Kings,served,and worship him.

Knowledge of hope,became afair,more he chased it.
Nobody has been able to defeat him,nor felt his amount of despair.
Igniting his hope again,he thought he was impossible.
Growing his insanity,each hour,and minute.
His hope,slowly regained within him,when he saw true friend ship.
Torture,he did become, no more,and he ought to love everything.
-------------------------------------------------------------------U did brilliant,Phoenix! :D Just two speaking mistakes,and u didn't use commas,where they were needed...
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Roses are red
Violets are blue
I'm a night
And will kill you
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Laura_Aria said:
Idk if I should say this.But...
Darker,and deeper,the knight's hope turned into despair,
Air turned in breathable,as he walk passed forests,cities,and kingdoms.
Racing past time,to reclaim his hope he had lost.
Knights that were forumer Kings,serve,and worship him.

Knowledge of hope,became afair,more he chased it.
Nobody has been able to defeat him,nor felt his amount of despair.
Igniting his hope again,he thought he was impossible.
Growing his insanity,each hour,and minute.
His hope slowly regained within him,when he saw true friend ship.
Torture,he did become, no more,and he ought to love everything.
-------------------------------------------------------------------U did brilliant,Phoenix! :D Just two speaking mistakes,and u didn't use commas,where they were needed...
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No in the actual thing I put commas and I'm improving volcab for eg instead of defeated I used pulverised
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swaggydxd said:
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I'm a night
And will kill you
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Actually roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Learn to spell with me
You shall know
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xXphoenixXx said:
No in the actual thing I put commas and I'm improving volcab for eg instead of defeated I used pulverised
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Oohh,ok.Then I put effort to put in commas for nothing....xD Well,that's ok,it was fun to correct,anyway.
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  • Roses are red
    tulips are black.
    You’d look great
    with a knife in your back.

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swaggydxd said:
  • Roses are red
    tulips are black.
    You’d look great
    with a knife in your back.
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Roses are red
Violets are blue
My middle finger is a gift for u




Sorry and have fun
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  • Roses are Red
    Violets are blue
    If I had a brick
    I’d throw it at you.

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