Phoe's art post

the FACE is symmetrical, the head shape is not
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xXphoenixXx said:
View attachment 50885 I need to rub out pencil lines - I didn't use bleed proof paper Also - .-. but beside that give meh critism
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First of all, the coloring is very nice. I can’t color to save my life, so I think I can appreciate the coloring. The nose is a bit realistic for this kind of art style. I mean, the nose itself looks nice, but it doesn’t match with the whole drawing. Make the eyes and the ears a bit smaller. If it’s a matter of personal art style, then it looks great! I feel like it would look even better if the face was a bit more realistic, although that’s just my opinion. The mouth could be a bit less saturated, but I’m nit-picking here. Maybe work on the face shape? Overall, this is a solid piece and it’s very nice to look at. The color choices and the general vibe of the drawing is stunning. I feel like it would look more professional on some high-quality paper!

P.S. Please don’t kill me, I’m too young to die ;-;
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TheNeonHamster said:
First of all, the coloring is very nice. I can’t color to save my life, so I think I can appreciate the coloring. The nose is a bit realististic for this kind of art style. I mean, the nose itself looks nice, but it doesn’t match with the whole drawing. Make the eyes and the ears a bit smaller. If it’s a matter of personal art style, then it looks great! I feel like it would look even better if the face was a bit more realistic, although that’s just my opinion. The mouth could be a bit less saturated, but I’m nit-picking here. Maybe work on the face shape? Overall, this is a solid piece and it’s very nice to look at. The color choices and the general vibe of the drawing is stunning. I feel like it would look more professional on some high-quality paper!

P.S. Please don’t kill me, I’m too young to die ;-;
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That just the shading I did for the nose ._.
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xXphoenixXx said:
That just the shading I did for the nose ._.
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It’s still way too realistic. If the art style was more realistic, I wouldn’t mind it as much. The other facial features are outlined in back, but the nose isn’t, creating a more realistic effect.
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TheNeonHamster said:
It’s still way too realistic. If the art style was more realistic, I wouldn’t mind it as much. The other facial features are outlined in back, but the nose isn’t, creating a more realistic effect.
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Eh thats the only nose shape I know how to shade ._.
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TheNeonHamster said:
It’s still way too realistic. If the art style was more realistic, I wouldn’t mind it as much. The other facial features are outlined in back, but the nose isn’t, creating a more realistic effect.
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It was outlined, just because I had to redraw the nose so many times,by the time I did the outline, it ripped
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The ears and mouth look outta place.
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xXphoenixXx said:
What brand? The one I drew on was basically almost card
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Idk, I don’t usually color my drawings and I use a sketchbook. I would probably get bleed-proof paper at the craft store or something similar. I’ve noticed sketchbook paper doesn’t smudge as much, but that’s my friend’s art and not mine. Buy what you think will most improve your art!
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TheNeonHamster said:
Idk, I don’t usually color my drawings and I use a sketchbook. I would probably get bleed-proof paper at the craft store or something similar. I’ve noticed sketchbook paper doesn’t smudge as much, but that’s my friend’s art and not mine. Buy what you think will most improve your art!
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I have 10 bleed proof papers that don't work
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xXphoenixXx said:
View attachment 50885 I need to rub out pencil lines - I didn't use bleed proof paper Also - .-. but beside that give meh critism
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Hahahah itz my chance to give u criticism for once!
Okey let's start-
I think that the tonal areas are really gud, and the way that u've rendered it is quite good as well, but u need to use a finer pen to go over the line art. The line art is also quite messy and you may need to work on the anatomy of the face shape, also JEEZ U SHOULD OF DRAWN THIS ON A CLEAN SHEET OF PAPER!! I'd personally think that u should take ur talent to the next level and try out digital art. :D
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Liloudii said:
Hahahah itz my chance to give u criticism for once!
Okey let's start-
I think that the tonal areas are really gud, and the way that u've rendered it is quite good as well, but u need to use a finer pen to go over the line art. The line art is also quite messy and you may need to work on the anatomy of the face shape, also JEEZ U SHOULD OF DRAWN THIS ON A CLEAN SHEET OF PAPER!! I'd personally think that u should take ur talent to the next level and try out digital art. :D
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That is my fine liner pen .-. I just don't have a steady hand, I'm better at sketching so ye,
The paper was clean xD, I was just rubbing out so much, ALSO HOW DID U KNOW xD I CUT OUT MOST OF THE PAGE
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