MyHaters: ~Chapter 5~ The Backstory

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~1 Month ago, with razzle~
Aypifox: "Ughhhh, why do we have to do this????"
Razzle: "Dont you want money??"
Elania: "How much?"
Razzle: "1,000 each"
Elania: "I deserve more than that?"
Razzle: "OH, YOUR SAYING THATS NOT ENOUGH!!"
Elania: "I can hack kendra's phone and I didn't tell you I was a suicide bomber"
Mysterious Guy: "Where are we going?"
*He says it in a dark voice*
Razzle: "Kendra's house"
Mysterious Guy: "Sure, I found her coordinates, her house is 2 blocks away from here"
Razzle: "Okay, LET'S MOVE!!"
Elania: "Why are we targeting just a few people anyways?"
Razzle: "Well, they were my friends back in highschool but"
*Aypifox Interrupts*
Aypifox: "Lets just go, we're wasting time!!!"
Razzle: "Ok, let's go!!"
~At Kendra's House~
*Elania plants a bomb setting for 36 hours and tip toes slowly to the backdoor*
*Razzle pulls out a gun and grins*
Razzle: "Oh, hello ex-boyfriend!"
*Her earphone vibrates*
Aypifox In Her Earphone: "RAZZLE GET OUT OF THERE NOW, FOR THE POLICE ARE COMING, THEY SAW YOU ON THE SURVEILLANCE CAMERA*
Edwjusti: "YOU ONLY DATED ME BECAUSE I WAS RICH!!"
*Razzle trys to be confident*
Razzle: "HAHAHAHAHHAHAHA"
Aypifox: "UGHH, I'LL JUST"
*Kendra's dog bites razzle's leg as razzle accidentally shoots mooney*
Manwee: "NOOOOOOO!!!"
*Kendra shoves razzle as she kicks Kendra and makes a run out*
Razzle: "GUYS, IM SORRY, I NEED HELP!!! I THINK THERE CALLING THE POLICE"
Aypifox In Her Earphone: "Ok, Go to the north avenue and run right"
Aypifox In Her Earphone: "You have to wait for 3 hours on a abandoned building next to a restaurant called "I Like Eating", Ignore the name"
Razzle: "WHY THERE FOR 3 HOURS?"
Aypifox In Her Earphone: "BECAUSE THE POLICE WILL SURROUND THE ARE FOR 10 MILES AND YOU CANT RUN THAT FAR BEFORE THEY'LL GET THERE"
Razzle: "Fine, I'm gonna break into the glass"
Aypifox: "Also, elania will come with you in a second, she has some food"
Aypifox In Her Earphone: "Also, I'm gonna leave you for now, bye!!"
*Elania comes through the shattered glass that razzle broke*
Elania: "Hey razzle, brought ya some food"
*Razzle takes some french fries she bought from McDonalds*
Razzle: "Also, how did you sneak in there without getting caught?"
Elania: "When I touch other people with this anti-matter*
*Razzle interrupts*
Razzle: "Just, explain it quickly"
Elania: "When I touch people, I become them and then I can turn back into myself"
Razzle: "Why can't we use that to get out????"
Elania: "It only works with one person"
Razzle: "Ohhh..."
~2 Hours Later~
Razzle: "Are you bored??"
Elania: "I think let's just make a run, we already outrunned the police a bunch of times"
*Razzle opens the door*
Razzle: "You can open the door from the inside!!! Cmon, transform into someone else"
*A Police Officer sees them*
Police Officer: "THERE THEY ARE"
*Elania throws out dozens of gray-looking grenades*
Razzle: "RUN!!!"
Elania: "Dont worry, those just make gray clouds"
Razzle: "Since, you threw a lot doesn't that mean its gonna rain??"
Elania: "THAT ISNT IMPORTANT RIGHT NOW"
Aypifox In Her Earphone: "The wind is moving south, so obviously it's not gonna rain"
Elania: "Look, is that St. Louis hospital??"
Razzle: "Mooney must be in there, I'll finally get revenge on her after what she had done to me in highschool"
~Back At The Base~
Aypifox: "I'll just wait here, until they come back"
*Someone opens the back door*
Aypifox: "Your already back??"
Manwee: "YOUUUUUU!!"
*Manwee pulls out a knife*
*Aypi presses a red-dark button, suddenly a pit opens up beneath manwee*
Aypifox: "Bye bye.."
*Aypi looks down the pit and doesn't see him*
Aypifox: "Where is he???"
 
I called the title Myhaters because it's base off the other enemies ._.
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Also, im not tagging anyone because im too lazy ._.
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~1 Month ago, with razzle~
Aypifox: "Ughhhh, why do we have to do this????"
Razzle: "Dont you want money??"
Elania: "How much?"
Razzle: "1,000 each"
Elania: "I deserve more than that?"
Razzle: "OH, YOUR SAYING THATS NOT ENOUGH!!"
Elania: "I can hack kendra's phone and I didn't tell you I was a suicide bomber"
Mysterious Guy: "Where are we going?"
*He says it in a dark voice*
Razzle: "Kendra's house"
Mysterious Guy: "Sure, I found her coordinates, her house is 2 blocks away from here"
Razzle: "Okay, LET'S MOVE!!"
Elania: "Why are we targeting just a few people anyways?"
Razzle: "Well, they were my friends back in highschool but"
*Aypifox Interrupts*
Aypifox: "Lets just go, we're wasting time!!!"
Razzle: "Ok, let's go!!"
~At Kendra's House~
*Elania plants a bomb setting for 36 hours and tip toes slowly to the backdoor*
*Razzle pulls out a gun and grins*
Razzle: "Oh, hello ex-boyfriend!"
*Her earphone vibrates*
Aypifox In Her Earphone: "RAZZLE GET OUT OF THERE NOW, FOR THE POLICE ARE COMING, THEY SAW YOU ON THE SURVEILLANCE CAMERA*
Edwjusti: "YOU ONLY DATED ME BECAUSE I WAS RICH!!"
*Razzle trys to be confident*
Razzle: "HAHAHAHAHHAHAHA"
Aypifox: "UGHH, I'LL JUST"
*Kendra's dog bites razzle's leg as razzle accidentally shoots mooney*
Manwee: "NOOOOOOO!!!"
*Kendra shoves razzle as she kicks Kendra and makes a run out*
Razzle: "GUYS, IM SORRY, I NEED HELP!!! I THINK THERE CALLING THE POLICE"
Aypifox In Her Earphone: "Ok, Go to the north avenue and run right"
Aypifox In Her Earphone: "You have to wait for 3 hours on a abandoned building next to a restaurant called "I Like Eating", Ignore the name"
Razzle: "WHY THERE FOR 3 HOURS?"
Aypifox In Her Earphone: "BECAUSE THE POLICE WILL SURROUND THE ARE FOR 10 MILES AND YOU CANT RUN THAT FAR BEFORE THEY'LL GET THERE"
Razzle: "Fine, I'm gonna break into the glass"
Aypifox: "Also, elania will come with you in a second, she has some food"
Aypifox In Her Earphone: "Also, I'm gonna leave you for now, bye!!"
*Elania comes through the shattered glass that razzle broke*
Elania: "Hey razzle, brought ya some food"
*Razzle takes some french fries she bought from McDonalds*
Razzle: "Also, how did you sneak in there without getting caught?"
Elania: "When I touch other people with this anti-matter*
*Razzle interrupts*
Razzle: "Just, explain it quickly"
Elania: "When I touch people, I become them and then I can turn back into myself"
Razzle: "Why can't we use that to get out????"
Elania: "It only works with one person"
Razzle: "Ohhh..."
~2 Hours Later~
Razzle: "Are you bored??"
Elania: "I think let's just make a run, we already outrunned the police a bunch of times"
*Razzle opens the door*
Razzle: "You can open the door from the inside!!! Cmon, transform into someone else"
*A Police Officer sees them*
Police Officer: "THERE THEY ARE"
*Elania throws out dozens of gray-looking grenades*
Razzle: "RUN!!!"
Elania: "Dont worry, those just make gray clouds"
Razzle: "Since, you threw a lot doesn't that mean its gonna rain??"
Elania: "THAT ISNT IMPORTANT RIGHT NOW"
Aypifox In Her Earphone: "The wind is moving south, so obviously it's not gonna rain"
Elania: "Look, is that St. Louis hospital??"
Razzle: "Mooney must be in there, I'll finally get revenge on her after what she had done to me in highschool"
~Back At The Base~
Aypifox: "I'll just wait here, until they come back"
*Someone opens the back door*
Aypifox: "Your already back??"
Manwee: "YOUUUUUU!!"
*Manwee pulls out a knife*
*Aypi presses a red-dark button, suddenly a pit opens up beneath manwee*
Aypifox: "Bye bye.."
*Aypi looks down the pit and doesn't see him*
Aypifox: "Where is he???"
That's one of my favourite chapters so far! I like how you made it only about the criminals xD
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Can I somehow come into the story?? SOMEHOW? :P
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My Sniper Riffle is Missing Elania with all these cordinate , wind ,temperature and Distance you can shoot someone in the head if you calculate well. (Yeah I love looking sniper Shooting .-. i want a Sniper Riffle )
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My Sniper Riffle is Missing Elania with all these cordinate , wind ,temperature and Distance you can shoot someone in the head if you calculate well. (Yeah I love looking sniper Shooting .-. i want a Sniper Riffle )
Sniper needs a sniper to be used ._.
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My Sniper Riffle is Missing Elania with all these cordinate , wind ,temperature and Distance you can shoot someone in the head if you calculate well. (Yeah I love looking sniper Shooting .-. i want a Sniper Riffle )
You forgot the corealis effect
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cool :0 also, whenever I look at the name, I feel like it's a rip-off of Aphmau's Mystreet series ._. no offence.
I was like, I don't have a creative name for it, I was thinking of something cringy, but I'm glad it's like this xD
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