My story ♡ part 1

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Recently I've been writing a book about my life.. these are the first pages:

[Warning: Ages 9+ (Swear warning)]
Important: The curse words are Cencored

Come here- Jeeeahh look at this!! What the Fu- Put that back! HEY- how about tha- COME ON- look out! The sounds swirl round and around, like a storm of never ending voices. Sounds.. it never stops. BOOM! Louise bumps into me."Sorry! I got pushed and-" 'its fine' I awnser, trying to calm her down. 'Come, we have a pause'. Walking trough the croud, we manage to find a silent place. "lets sit here, next to dutch". She sais to me. I agree, and sit down on an empty chair.

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talk to me, awnser!!" I stare at the angry face of Livv. Together with the other BISCUITS. I think: //I don 't have time for this..\\. "What for book are you reading?!". I sigh, and awnser: 'Warrior cats'. "Awww.. how sweet, you're reading about kitties??". She stared at me with a smug face. At this moment, I would love to say: 'FUDGE OFF BISCUIT!!!'. But I knew better then that, how, stupid this pig was in english.. she probally knew these words all to Good. So I said: 'Could you please leave my sight, before I have to vomit of that nasty face of yours?!". Her face was speechless, but a heartbeat later she awnsered: Cool! You speak english.. should we call you english piece of SHIRT now?!!".

Louise pokes me, "Could you test me for dutch please??". "I haven't studied yet... I really don 't want a D. Please..?". Louise was the smartest kid of the class, but dutch?! She was terrible at that. She speaks english, just like me.. But she also speaks French. 'Sure I'le help you, ok.. so.. To find the he/she/it, you use..? "Uuhh.. idk :(". Rick and Larry where already walking down the hall. They sat down. I push a chair back, so Rick could sit down with his crutches. Louise whas still taking a close look at the book, with a starteld face. The school halls where already filling up with students. More kids ran the hallway in, into a crouded mess. I watch as my class jumps in the hall to. The door opens, and everyone storms the class in like wild animals. .. except us 4... waiting for Rick, helping him to stand up. Stumbling, we enter the class room. With Larry carrying his heavy bag. "Okay class, let's start!" The teacher handed the tests out. I fill in my name: Esther Birdstein. Class: B2A. Date: Thursday 15 November 2018.

Thoughts come back to September 2010... Laughing childeren running over the playground. First i stand still, but already join in. Hide and seek! I'm great at this game! Running around the soft field, trying to hide behind a tree..

Page 1.
To be continued...
(Names are different) (translated from dutch to english)
 
Mistakes on your story, I'll fix it!

Come here- Jeeeahh look at this!! What the Fu- Put that back! HEY- how about tha- COME ON- look out! The sound swirl round and around, like a storm of never ending voices. Sounds.. it never stopped. BOOM! Louise bumps into me."Sorry! I got pushed and-" 'its fine' I awnsered, trying to calm her down. 'Come, we have a pause'. Walking through the croud, we managed to find a quiet place. "Lets sit here, next to dutch". She said to me. I agreed, and sat down on a chair.

"Talk to me, awnser!!" I stared at the angry face of Livv. Together with the other BISCUITS. I think: //I don't have time for this..\\. "What kind of book are you reading?!". I sigh, and awnser: 'Warrior cats'. "Awww.. how sweet, you're reading about kitties??". She stared at me with a smug face. At this moment, I would love to say: 'FUDGE OFF BISCUIT!!!'. But I knew better then that, how, stupid this pig was in english.. she probally knew all these words to Good. So I said: 'Could you please leave me from my side, before I have to vomit of that weird face of yours?!". Her face was speechless, but a heartbeat later she awnsered: Cool! You speak english.. should we call you english piece of SHIRT now?!!".

Louise pokes me, "Could you test me for Dutch language please??". "I haven't studied yet... I really don't want a D. Please..?". Louise was the smartest kid in the class, but Dutch language?! She was terrible at that. She speaks english, just like me.. But she also speaks French. 'Sure I'll help you, ok.. so.. To find the he/she/it, you use..? "Uuhh.. Idk :(". Rick and Larry where already walking down the hall. They sat down. I push the chair back, so Rick could sit down with his crutches. Louise who was still taking a close look at the book, with a starteld face. The school halls where already filling up with students. More students ran the hallway in, into a crowded mess. I watch as my class jumps in the hall to. The door opens, and everyone storms the class in like wild animals. .. except 4 of us... waiting for Rick, helping him to stand up. Stumbling, we entered the class room. With Larry, carrying his heavy bag. "Okay class, let's start!" The teacher handed the tests out. I fill in my name: Esther Birdstein. Class: B2A. Date: Thursday 15 November 2018.

Thoughts come back to September 2010... Laughing childeren running over the playground. First I stood still, but already joined in. Hide and seek! I was great at this game! Running around the soft field, trying to hide behind a tree..

Copy this and edit your story, thanks!
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Mistakes on your story, I'll fix it!

Come here- Jeeeahh look at this!! What the Fu- Put that back! HEY- how about tha- COME ON- look out! The sound swirl round and around, like a storm of never ending voices. Sounds.. it never stopped. BOOM! Louise bumps into me."Sorry! I got pushed and-" 'its fine' I awnsered, trying to calm her down. 'Come, we have a pause'. Walking through the croud, we managed to find a quiet place. "Lets sit here, next to dutch". She said to me. I agreed, and sat down on a chair.

"Talk to me, awnser!!" I stared at the angry face of Livv. Together with the other BISCUITS. I think: //I don't have time for this..\\. "What kind of book are you reading?!". I sigh, and awnser: 'Warrior cats'. "Awww.. how sweet, you're reading about kitties??". She stared at me with a smug face. At this moment, I would love to say: 'FUDGE OFF BISCUIT!!!'. But I knew better then that, how, stupid this pig was in english.. she probally knew all these words to Good. So I said: 'Could you please leave me from my side, before I have to vomit of that weird face of yours?!". Her face was speechless, but a heartbeat later she awnsered: Cool! You speak english.. should we call you english piece of SHIRT now?!!".

Louise pokes me, "Could you test me for Dutch language please??". "I haven't studied yet... I really don't want a D. Please..?". Louise was the smartest kid in the class, but Dutch language?! She was terrible at that. She speaks english, just like me.. But she also speaks French. 'Sure I'll help you, ok.. so.. To find the he/she/it, you use..? "Uuhh.. Idk :(". Rick and Larry where already walking down the hall. They sat down. I push the chair back, so Rick could sit down with his crutches. Louise who was still taking a close look at the book, with a starteld face. The school halls where already filling up with students. More students ran the hallway in, into a crowded mess. I watch as my class jumps in the hall to. The door opens, and everyone storms the class in like wild animals. .. except 4 of us... waiting for Rick, helping him to stand up. Stumbling, we entered the class room. With Larry, carrying his heavy bag. "Okay class, let's start!" The teacher handed the tests out. I fill in my name: Esther Birdstein. Class: B2A. Date: Thursday 15 November 2018.

Thoughts come back to September 2010... Laughing childeren running over the playground. First I stood still, but already joined in. Hide and seek! I was great at this game! Running around the soft field, trying to hide behind a tree..

Copy this and edit your story, thanks!
Thank you so much.. but I"m terrible at computers ._. How do I copy..? Besides, I like my stupid mistakes.. it makes the story a bit more interesting.. but Anyway.. THANK YOUUU ♥︎
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Thank you so much.. but I"m terrible at computers ._. How do I copy..? Besides, I like my stupid mistakes.. it makes the story a bit more interesting.. but Anyway.. THANK YOUUU ♥︎
Hold click at the beginning on the story and pull ( If it isn't work then rip )
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That Liv girl is such a bully
If this story actually happened to u irl, just ignore her and remember that there are people who look out for you :P
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