My Own Story (Continued) Part three

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He ran through forests and jumped over holes. He was really breathing heavily, and starting to slow down. He look behind him and-
Sami wakes up.
"AAAAHHHHH!!!!!" Sami screams, scaring the absolute hell out of everyone in the room.
A few seconds later.
"What the hell just happened?" Asks Dr. S.
"Stupid dreams..." Sami mutters.
After Sami, Cinder, and Ginger ate food, Saz came in.
"Would you like some marshmallows??" She asks.
"Uuuhhhh." Sami says.
"Ima give you some anyway." As she gives him some marshmallows.
Now I want marshmallows. Hey, can I have some?
"No eating while narrating." Says replies.
Ok fine.


King, Len, Ron, Drab, Eric, and Aypi all planned out to visit Sami. They took along Retro, Icy, Pineapple, Elk, TrumpetChan, Pandee, and Soda. vertx was still updating Brlns.
"Let's gooooooooo!" Says Retro, already walking towards the hospital.
"Sure!" Says Lucas, joining in.
As they were all walking, a random stranger decided to just come along with them. No idea why, they just did. Barksket just decided he wanted to? I don't know everything.
After a few minutes of what seemed like hours of walking, they all finally reached the hospital, got to Sami, and all crammed into the room.
"Jeez guys, you didn't all have to come see me." Says Sami
"It's what friends do." Says Lucas.
"But I just came here cuz I was bored." Says Barksket.
"Oh." Says Len.
"So, is this the only reason why you all came to see me?" Asks Sami.
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Thank you guys for reading this. It isn't as good as the others, but I think I may have to take a lot more time on these.


People in this:
@RetroDragon
@L.E.N.
@Sami
@~GingerbreadSwirl~
@Strelitzia
@CinderPuppyEyes
@KingOfBroken1
@Icy_Hatake
@EricTheWriter
@Aypi
@_PineappleDeath_
@vertx
@Elkears
@Ronvier
@TrumpetChan
@DrabQuasar
@PandeeDEATH
@SodaTheDutchAD
@LucasTheDutchAD
@barksketoez
@SazDaMarshmallow
 
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You need more fourth wall breaks
like a fourth wall break inside a fourth wall break
it'll be like sixteen walls
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A after Sami, Cinder, and Ginger ate food, Saz came in.
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