My first map!!! by xsama eli..

[lovebyexsamaeli]

Please give me critical feedback and tell me also which gamemode this should go into... (P.s Its not guaranteed for it to go in the official broken lens game.

Please tell me what I should fix a

 

[BopI]

Please give me critical feedback and tell me also which gamemode this should go into... (P.s Its not guaranteed for it to go in the official broken lens game.

Please tell me what I should fix a

ok this is cool and all but there's no pictures

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[lovebyexsamaeli]

Please give me critical feedback and tell me also which gamemode this should go into... (P.s Its not guaranteed for it to go in the official broken lens game.

Please tell me what I should fix a

ok this is cool and all but there's no pictures

it should be fixed now

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[BopI]

yes
ok
1 you can see outside of the map
2 the map is way too small for any game
3 the bridge in the first pic can defninitely be improved

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[lovebyexsamaeli]

yes
ok
1 you can see outside of the map
2 the map is way too small for any game
3 the bridge in the first pic can defninitely be improved

Okay, thank you for the feed

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[BopI]

Okay, thank you for the feed

maybe make the walls higher? or add more buildings too

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[lovebyexsamaeli]

maybe make the walls higher? or add more buildings too

ok i will do that

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[owobabe]

You have to put more details but so far so good, keep it up.

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[SplashingPaint836]

Yea I agree with bop it’s pretty small but I think it can suit MM i you added hiding places or maybe hide and seek...?

To me the beach/water park doesn’t seem to have a good transition. It’s kinda just like I cross the street and BOOM beach/water park!

Is there a theme? If so tell us so we can better understand what your are trying to build! Once you tell us the theme I think we can all give some helpful and constructive criticism to guide and better your builds!

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[lovebyexsamaeli]

You have to put more details but so far so good, keep it up.

thank you so much for the detail stay tuned for the next map.

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[lovebyexsamaeli]

Yea I agree with bop it’s pretty small but I think it can suit MM i you added hiding places or maybe hide and seek...?

To me the beach/water park doesn’t seem to have a good transition. It’s kinda just like I cross the street and BOOM beach/water park!

Is there a theme? If so tell us so we can better understand what your are trying to build! Once you tell us the theme I think we can all give some helpful and constructive criticism to guide and better your builds!

When i thought of the water slides, I thought I was doing a little to much. Thx for the info

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[SplashingPaint836]

When i thought of the water slides, I thought I was doing a little to much. Thx for the info

If your theme is like a water park resort of some sort then it’s pretty clear that you’ll have to expand your map. I suggest that if your going for that sort of theme you first should build the park itself and the add the extra buildings and details!

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[lovebyexsamaeli]

If your theme is like a water park resort of some sort then it’s pretty clear that you’ll have to expand your map. I suggest that if your going for that sort of theme you first should build the park itself and the add the extra buildings and details!

Okay.

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[SlayCC]

You definitely know how to build but it seems to me you kinda got lost. I'm not really sure what you are making, it seems like a water park but it's just waaaay too small to be one, and if it's a city then it definitely needs more building

https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/how-to-create-a-good-map.101645/

Here's a thread that would probably help you out in creating a Map. You are pretty good at building but it seems that you didn't know how to start and how to plan it out. But very nice map! With a few fixes it could definitely be really cool!

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[lovebyexsamaeli]

I understand when I first started I really didn’t know if it was going to fit into the map since there is a street right next to it.

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[DarkTdmPlays]

You definitely know how to build but it seems to me you kinda got lost. I'm not really sure what you are making, it seems like a water park but it's just waaaay too small to be one, and if it's a city then it definitely needs more building

https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/how-to-create-a-good-map.101645/

Here's a thread that would probably help you out in creating a Map. You are pretty good at building but it seems that you didn't know how to start and how to plan it out. But very nice map! With a few fixes it could definitely be really cool!

Yeah it looks a like a water park mixed with the tbb lobby xD

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[qndreii]

Please give me critical feedback and tell me also which gamemode this should go into... (P.s Its not guaranteed for it to go in the official broken lens game.

Please tell me what I should fix a

Awesome! I like the city that you build, it must've took a long time to build. xD Nice work !

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