Murder Mystery Map:Home Sweet Home

[DaveExe]

Map Name:Home Sweet Home
Built By:Me (DaveExe)
That's the first time i submited a map.Well it's not the best but I tried.

 

[SlayCC]

Its too small and plain. Its not really a good mm map. Make a bigger house and a nicer environment like terraforming. And please dont use trees from sappling, it looks bad

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[DaveExe]

Its too small and plain. Its not really a good mm map. Make a bigger house and a nicer environment like terraforming. And please dont use trees from sappling, it looks bad

Well ok...

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[karmatic]

Its too small and plain. Its not really a good mm map. Make a bigger house and a nicer environment like terraforming. And please dont use trees from sappling, it looks bad

Hmm I agree with Slay.
Decorate the house with colour and make it look like there is something going on in it.
@Diavent

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[Diavent]

It’s simple, but charming. If that makes sense xD

Now, I’m not going to say this is a bad MM map. I’ve seen worse, if I have to be honest. *cough* Aquarium is kinda ugly *cough*

However, as with everything, improvements can certainly be made.
First off, I’d like to say to expand your block palette with the house... or the brick one, at least. You can keep the original brick, but spice it up a little with some other blocks such as cobblestone, stone brick, and quartz.
Second of all, in the hallways and staircase, I suggest adding in some furniture to fill in those empty gaps. As of now, they’re a bit bland. Maybe add in some wall designs, too?
Next, I feel like it can be expanded a bit. Maybe 30 blocks on all sides? Also, rather than great walls, perhaps just make a small wall to act as a barrier (preferably made of glass, so you can see...) between the playable area and the enviornment. By this, I mean expand the building area but not the map. Does that make sense? xD

Also, additional note, this is just a personal preference, but the map would look so cool with custom trees!

Anywho, for your first map submission, I think you did pretty good! If you submit more maps, I’m sure you’ll start to get the hang of things. Good job! It’s cute and charming!

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[DaveExe]

It’s simple, but charming. If that makes sense xD

Now, I’m not going to say this is a bad MM map. I’ve seen worse, if I have to be honest. *cough* Aquarium is kinda ugly *cough*

However, as with everything, improvements can certainly be made.
First off, I’d like to say to expand your block palette with the house... or the brick one, at least. You can keep the original brick, but spice it up a little with some other blocks such as cobblestone, stone brick, and quartz.
Second of all, in the hallways and staircase, I suggest adding in some furniture to fill in those empty gaps. As of now, they’re a bit bland. Maybe add in some wall designs, too?
Next, I feel like it can be expanded a bit. Maybe 30 blocks on all sides? Also, rather than great walls, perhaps just make a small wall to act as a barrier (preferably made of glass, so you can see...) between the playable area and the enviornment. By this, I mean expand the building area but not the map. Does that make sense? xD

Also, additional note, this is just a personal preference, but the map would look so cool with custom trees!

Anywho, for your first map submission, I think you did pretty good! If you submit more maps, I’m sure you’ll start to get the hang of things. Good job! It’s cute and charming!

Wow thanks i think I'll try it on another day.

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[B3N]

I agree with @Diavent because it looks amazing but it is very empty.

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