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[Murder Mystery] Japanese Villa (Official Submission)

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Map Name: Japanese Villa
Built By: InnocentTopHat
Game Type: Murder Mystery
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This looks really good! :eek:
I suggest adding details to the ground outside by mixing it with other green blocks. I think the trees could look more fluffy and more detailed aswell. Try mixing the pink leaves with other pink blocks. You can also remove some on the top of the terrain walls
And finally, the flooring inside can be improved to look less disorganized.
You did a very great job!;)
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This is incredible!!!! I hope it gets accepted!!!
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Screenshot_2019-06-28-07-51-51_kindlephoto-116399438.png

Great job- looks amazing! I agree with what Ian said about the trees. I hope noone gets offended when I add pics- randomize tree pinks and floof up your trees.
Like this or similar:
Screenshot_2019-06-28-00-25-17_kindlephoto-89440056.png

Sorry- crappy texture pack for window panes.
I also agree with Ian- less trees atop border walls
Other than trees I love this map.
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I took a lot of the suggestions into account and I have added them into the map. I have attached a new version of the map that includes my changes.
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Amazing!
I really like how professional the building itself looks, and I'm sure the trees look more detailed in your current version. If I could say anything constructive, (its kind of silly), but in the future, maybe progress on to different bed designs (without the regular beds).
I hope you know how to do the world download, and I hope your map gets accepted.
Lastly, I made a Mansion N map recently, and the thread is somewhere on forums, but I deleted the world recently (I don't really know why I said that). Have a blessed summer!
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If anyone is interested, the place of inspiration I had to tackle this project is the segment from Grian's video; "Minecraft Build School: Building Different Styles." The specific segment starts at 12:10.
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