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[ MobWars ] - Castle

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Map Name : Castle
Created by Darkeyy ( recoulored ) - Specials thanks to my friend xFlorida for Making the trees
Game : MobWars
Duration : 3 days

Description : this map was 95% made by me and my friend only made the trees and I pasted them around , she didn't really wanted credit so I accepted it . Usually there aren't much MobWars Maps in the server so I decided to make one , it took me 3 days to make this map and Today I spend 6 hours trying to finish , please don't reply any bad things about it and give me some support :)

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Diamond Generators :


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Middle :
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I bet you 50000$ the builders will suggest me to mix the stones blocks whit different kind of stones and Make the flag better at middle :p
You would be correct.
Also, make it so there isn’t such a harsh line when the stone and dirt meet. You know like icing dripping? Like how it’s kinda random and at different lengths?? Uhh that’s kinda how you want to make it so it looks more “natural”.

For the Team Islands, the birch walls seem very bland. So maybe adding shelves or detail around the windows could help improve that.
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You would be correct.
Also, make it so there isn’t such a harsh line when the stone and dirt meet. You know like icing dripping? Like how it’s kinda random and at different lengths?? Uhh that’s kinda how you want to make it so it looks more “natural”.

For the Team Islands, the birch walls seem very bland. So maybe adding shelves or detail around the windows could help improve that.
stone and dirt meet? im confused... and can u describe shelves please , because ive added chests and stuff :p
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stone and dirt meet? im confused... and can u describe shelves please , because ive added chests and stuff :p
Don’t mind my *great* drawing skillz here. The orange is the dirt, instead of a harsh line, it “feeds” into the stone
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And with the shelves, just simply an Upside down stair case on both ends with a slab in the middle. You can place flower pots or mob heads there for some decoration
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I agree with zoey's suggestions. I also feel that the castle at mid could be improved. It might just be me but it doesn't give me a "castle" vibe. Reminds me more of a base. And maybe you can replace the birch in the houses with spruce and the spruce with dark wood so that the houses can fit better with the map. Good job though:thumbsup:
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Only Vertx can accept maps not bl builders or captain builder...





























































































But , it is SUPER COOL AND AWESOME MAP....
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I bet you 50000$ the builders will suggest me to mix the stones blocks whit different kind of stones and Make the flag better at middle :p


:rolleyes:This makes me wonder why you don't just build it that way to begin with so you don't have to listen to us say it. :confused: I 100% agree with everything Zoey and Ian said. Good map- needs randomizing throughout. The "castle" does feel more like a base or a fort. Probably because it doesn't have much height
I bet you $50000 that you will say you disagree with us. :hilarious: Nice work!
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Don’t mind my *great* drawing skillz here. The orange is the dirt, instead of a harsh line, it “feeds” into the stone
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And with the shelves, just simply an Upside down stair case on both ends with a slab in the middle. You can place flower pots or mob heads there for some decoration
Its called naturalizing
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:rolleyes:This makes me wonder why you don't just build it that way to begin with so you don't have to listen to us say it. :confused: I 100% agree with everything Zoey and Ian said. Good map- needs randomizing throughout. The "castle" does feel more like a base or a fort. Probably because it doesn't have much height
I bet you $50000 that you will say you disagree with us. :hilarious: Nice work!
I dont xd now gimmeeee
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:rolleyes:This makes me wonder why you don't just build it that way to begin with so you don't have to listen to us say it. :confused: I 100% agree with everything Zoey and Ian said. Good map- needs randomizing throughout. The "castle" does feel more like a base or a fort. Probably because it doesn't have much height
I bet you $50000 that you will say you disagree with us. :hilarious: Nice work!
I could try making a medieval Huge castle
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