Micro Wars - The Hut

[Yuxxa]

Name: The Hut [UPDATED After Some Critics]
Server: Micro Battles
Built by: @Yuxxa @ALFAREZAGAMINK
Duration: around 1 Week
Download:
https://www.mediafire.com/file/wtog6o7n7jcxu4h/HutV.2update.zip/file
Image:

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@dhaysie @_TrenzK_ @KhrizKGM @zVenus_ @AllyMac_ @Alienn_ @Alfarizi
@lucas1901



Bruh, i typed Micro Wars |:/

 

[_TrenzK_]

Looks decent. I'm not good at suggesting medieval themed builds so @lucas1901

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[Selp]

Looks good But I think the trees need a little work on the leaves placement it kinda looks odd to me. Well idk that's just me you can listen to me if u want am not good at building

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[attackonava]

Hm I agree with Selp!
I really like the look of this map- it looks pretty practical for gameplay and I like the details on the ground

Maybe a little more texture/detail on the huts? But that’s just my preference, so it’s just small things really!
Apart from that, great job!

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[Yuxxa]

Im suck at costume tree ;-;







Later i'll fix it



And someone gimme one sample please for leaves

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[SplashingPaint836]

I actually think the tree’s leaves look good but it could have little spots where you can see the through it! It’s where the stump that is a bit bothersome. It looks like the pyramids of Egypt so make it skinnier. The blocks that make the path are a bit random and don’t really match at all especially with the sand! I also think it would look better if you made colored flags on the top of the hut to represent which color is each land piece instead of making a color line around the perimeter! But it looks good overall so nice work!

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[Yuxxa]

I actually think the tree’s leaves look good but it could have little spots where you can see the through it! It’s where the stump that is a bit bothersome. It looks like the pyramids of Egypt so make it skinnier. The blocks that make the path are a bit random and don’t really match at all especially with the sand! I also think it would look better if you made colored flags on the top of the hut to represent which color is each land piece instead of making a color line around the perimeter! But it looks good overall so nice work!

Looked helped. Thx for the ideas

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[Yuxxa]

Updated
Tree fix, Street Design fix, and Flag

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[lucas1901]

Updated
Tree fix, Street Design fix, and Flag

Can you post some screenshots of the changes please?

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[Yuxxa]

Can you post some screenshots of the changes please?

Before Update

After Update

Here

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[lucas1901]

Before Update
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After Update
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Here

Oh sorry I didn't realise you edited the new screenshots into your other post xD
I suggest you move the melons somewhere else because it might get in the way of pvp. You should also add some air in the tree, here's a video that might help you

Spoiler: the video

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[BopI]

Name: The Hut [UPDATED After Some Critics]
Server: Micro Battles
Built by: @Yuxxa @ALFAREZAGAMINK
Duration: around 1 Week
Download:
https://www.mediafire.com/file/wtog6o7n7jcxu4h/HutV.2update.zip/file
Image:
View attachment 236126 View attachment 236127 View attachment 236128

Tags
@dhaysie @_TrenzK_ @KhrizKGM @zVenus_ @AllyMac_ @Alienn_ @Alfarizi
@lucas1901



Bruh, i typed Micro Wars |:/

Ok dude, I have several big problems with this map.

1. The ground needs terraforming. Yes, it has green clay and all, but maybe make a hill where the huts are.
   
2. The huts. The huts are nothing but squares with roofs. Maybe try adding a flower garden on the side, or a tool shed?
3. The roofs. The roofs can definitely be improved, maybe try using some stairs, and maybe install some windows.
4. The trees: are the trees just saplings who you used bonemeal on them? Becuase they look like that. Actually take the time to create a trunk and put leaves around, maybe mixing in several diffrent types of leaves.

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[Yuxxa]

Oh sorry I didn't realise you edited the new screenshots into your other post xD
I suggest you move the melons somewhere else because it might get in the way of pvp. You should also add some air in the tree, here's a video that might help you

Spoiler: the video

Ok dude, I have several big problems with this map.

1. The ground needs terraforming. Yes, it has green clay and all, but maybe make a hill where the huts are.
   
2. The huts. The huts are nothing but squares with roofs. Maybe try adding a flower garden on the side, or a tool shed?
3. The roofs. The roofs can definitely be improved, maybe try using some stairs, and maybe install some windows.
4. The trees: are the trees just saplings who you used bonemeal on them? Becuase they look like that. Actually take the time to create a trunk and put leaves around, maybe mixing in several diffrent types of leaves.

Okey. still fixing it

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