Micro Wars - The Hut

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Name: The Hut [UPDATED After Some Critics]
Server: Micro Battles
Built by: @Yuxxa @ALFAREZAGAMINK
Duration: around 1 Week
Download:
https://www.mediafire.com/file/wtog6o7n7jcxu4h/HutV.2update.zip/file
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Bruh, i typed Micro Wars |:/
 
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Looks good :thumbsup: But I think the trees need a little work on the leaves placement it kinda looks odd to me. Well idk that's just me you can listen to me if u want am not good at building :hilarious:
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Hm I agree with Selp!
I really like the look of this map- it looks pretty practical for gameplay and I like the details on the ground

Maybe a little more texture/detail on the huts? But that’s just my preference, so it’s just small things really!
Apart from that, great job! :D
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I actually think the tree’s leaves look good but it could have little spots where you can see the through it! It’s where the stump that is a bit bothersome. It looks like the pyramids of Egypt so make it skinnier. The blocks that make the path are a bit random and don’t really match at all especially with the sand! I also think it would look better if you made colored flags on the top of the hut to represent which color is each land piece instead of making a color line around the perimeter! But it looks good overall so nice work! :)
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I actually think the tree’s leaves look good but it could have little spots where you can see the through it! It’s where the stump that is a bit bothersome. It looks like the pyramids of Egypt so make it skinnier. The blocks that make the path are a bit random and don’t really match at all especially with the sand! I also think it would look better if you made colored flags on the top of the hut to represent which color is each land piece instead of making a color line around the perimeter! But it looks good overall so nice work! :)
Looked helped. Thx for the ideas
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Name: The Hut [UPDATED After Some Critics]
Server: Micro Battles
Built by: @Yuxxa @ALFAREZAGAMINK
Duration: around 1 Week
Download:
https://www.mediafire.com/file/wtog6o7n7jcxu4h/HutV.2update.zip/file
Image:
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@dhaysie @_TrenzK_ @KhrizKGM @zVenus_ @AllyMac_ @Alienn_ @Alfarizi
@lucas1901



Bruh, i typed Micro Wars |:/
Ok dude, I have several big problems with this map.
  1. The ground needs terraforming. Yes, it has green clay and all, but maybe make a hill where the huts are.
  2. The huts. The huts are nothing but squares with roofs. Maybe try adding a flower garden on the side, or a tool shed?
  3. The roofs. The roofs can definitely be improved, maybe try using some stairs, and maybe install some windows.
  4. The trees: are the trees just saplings who you used bonemeal on them? Becuase they look like that. Actually take the time to create a trunk and put leaves around, maybe mixing in several diffrent types of leaves.
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Oh sorry I didn't realise you edited the new screenshots into your other post xD
I suggest you move the melons somewhere else because it might get in the way of pvp. You should also add some air in the tree, here's a video that might help you

Ok dude, I have several big problems with this map.
  1. The ground needs terraforming. Yes, it has green clay and all, but maybe make a hill where the huts are.
  2. The huts. The huts are nothing but squares with roofs. Maybe try adding a flower garden on the side, or a tool shed?
  3. The roofs. The roofs can definitely be improved, maybe try using some stairs, and maybe install some windows.
  4. The trees: are the trees just saplings who you used bonemeal on them? Becuase they look like that. Actually take the time to create a trunk and put leaves around, maybe mixing in several diffrent types of leaves.

Okey. still fixing it
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