Medieval Mayhem by Dominicshortbow

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@AllyMac_ needed more pictures and I did need to complete the bottom, but now I got it done. Now I need to see what the staff says and if I need to change anything!
@AllyMac_ @_TrenzK_

And I have questions if the previous thread that hasn't been answered yet if you can answer them, thanks! https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/sky-wars-abandoned-castle-nearly-done.132793/#post-1100650
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That's obviously COOL. I like how the buildings and the islands design and size. Big and Large size kinda good idea. GoodJob and hoping this map will be submitted.
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Looks great, I love the fire ball!! But the fires around the island look a little bland in my opinion- but it’s you’re map so if your happy with that ePiC! Anyways looks great :>
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Looks great, I love the fire ball!! But the fires around the island look a little bland in my opinion- but it’s you’re map so if your happy with that ePiC! Anyways looks great :>
idk how it's bland as there's not much fire options, but I do have campfires under some leaves to bring in some smoke! But it is your opinion!
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One problem I think you need to fix asap, is the tree on the connecting island, the trunk looks un-natural as well as the leaves, you need to make it look more airy, and less blocky
Sorry, but I already submitted the map and I'm very terrible with trees. That's the best for a tree you will get from me.
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Maybe @_TrenzK_ know someone to make the tree better?
Lattes, Lucas and Ian are pretty good at building trees, but I don't know any of the community builders that are good at building trees yet :lmao: I like the cherry blossom tree @bubblegums built in her Ryu Tree's MobWars map submission, it's quite realistic and natural
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Lattes, Lucas and Ian are pretty good at building trees, but I don't know any of the community builders that are good at building trees yet :lmao: I like the cherry blossom tree @bubblegums built in her Ryu Tree's MobWars map submission, it's quite realistic and natural
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Maybe @_TrenzK_ know someone to make the tree better?
Now that I look at it it do be looking a bit blocky- maybe space them out and add different blocks like green wool or the green mixed up block or smth like I did! Maybe give the trees more of a curve to make it look a bit more natural, not all trees are straight( unless you purposely grow them in a way they are straight)
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Lattes, Lucas and Ian are pretty good at building trees, but I don't know any of the community builders that are good at building trees yet :lmao: I like the cherry blossom tree @bubblegums built in her Ryu Tree's MobWars map submission, it's quite realistic and natural
Do you think maybe one of them can edit it? You can also give them some credit if the map gets accepted!
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