Medieval Mayhem by Dominicshortbow

[Dominicshortbow]

@AllyMac_ needed more pictures and I did need to complete the bottom, but now I got it done. Now I need to see what the staff says and if I need to change anything!
@AllyMac_ @_TrenzK_

And I have questions if the previous thread that hasn't been answered yet if you can answer them, thanks! https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/sky-wars-abandoned-castle-nearly-done.132793/#post-1100650

 

[Dominicshortbow]

@SecretStash99 gave me a better idea for the name, instead of Abandoned Castle, it will be called Medieval Mayhem!

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[Yuxxa]

That's obviously COOL. I like how the buildings and the islands design and size. Big and Large size kinda good idea. GoodJob and hoping this map will be submitted.

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[Dominicshortbow]

Who can I privately send the map to so no one else takes my map.

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[_TrenzK_]

Looking great so far! It seems like a very fun map to play on. Good job

Who can I privately send the map to so no one else takes my map.

You can send it to me via a conversation

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[Dominicshortbow]

Looking great so far! It seems like a very fun map to play on. Good job


You can send it to me via a conversation

ok thanks!

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[Dominicshortbow]

Oh @_TrenzK_ when I tried converting this to bedrock, the polished andecite slab turned into purpur slabs. So before I reconvert it again, I'm going to change the slabs to probably normal andecite slabs.

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[Selp]

Amazing.

Where the ores tho

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[Dominicshortbow]

Amazing.

Where the ores tho

There in the spawn island, behind the chains

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[Dominicshortbow]

Also behind the wood stairs!

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[Eyow189]

niceee this pretty cool

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[AllyMac_]

@AllyMac_ needed more pictures and I did need to complete the bottom, but now I got it done. Now I need to see what the staff says and if I need to change anything!
@AllyMac_ @_TrenzK_

And I have questions if the previous thread that hasn't been answered yet if you can answer them, thanks! https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/sky-wars-abandoned-castle-nearly-done.132793/#post-1100650
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Great job! Thank you for adding more pictures

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[temmie!!]

@AllyMac_ needed more pictures and I did need to complete the bottom, but now I got it done. Now I need to see what the staff says and if I need to change anything!
@AllyMac_ @_TrenzK_

And I have questions if the previous thread that hasn't been answered yet if you can answer them, thanks! https://brokenlens.xyz/forums/threads/sky-wars-abandoned-castle-nearly-done.132793/#post-1100650
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Looks great, I love the fire ball!! But the fires around the island look a little bland in my opinion- but it’s you’re map so if your happy with that ePiC! Anyways looks great :>

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[Dominicshortbow]

Looks great, I love the fire ball!! But the fires around the island look a little bland in my opinion- but it’s you’re map so if your happy with that ePiC! Anyways looks great :>

idk how it's bland as there's not much fire options, but I do have campfires under some leaves to bring in some smoke! But it is your opinion!

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[BuilderRilder]

One problem I think you need to fix asap, is the tree on the connecting island, the trunk looks un-natural as well as the leaves, you need to make it look more airy, and less blocky

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[Dominicshortbow]

One problem I think you need to fix asap, is the tree on the connecting island, the trunk looks un-natural as well as the leaves, you need to make it look more airy, and less blocky

Sorry, but I already submitted the map and I'm very terrible with trees. That's the best for a tree you will get from me.

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[Dominicshortbow]

Maybe @_TrenzK_ know someone to make the tree better?

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[_TrenzK_]

Maybe @_TrenzK_ know someone to make the tree better?

Lattes, Lucas and Ian are pretty good at building trees, but I don't know any of the community builders that are good at building trees yet I like the cherry blossom tree @bubblegums built in her Ryu Tree's MobWars map submission, it's quite realistic and natural

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[temmie!!]

Lattes, Lucas and Ian are pretty good at building trees, but I don't know any of the community builders that are good at building trees yet I like the cherry blossom tree @bubblegums built in her Ryu Tree's MobWars map submission, it's quite realistic and natural

Maybe @_TrenzK_ know someone to make the tree better?

Now that I look at it it do be looking a bit blocky- maybe space them out and add different blocks like green wool or the green mixed up block or smth like I did! Maybe give the trees more of a curve to make it look a bit more natural, not all trees are straight( unless you purposely grow them in a way they are straight)

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[Dominicshortbow]

Lattes, Lucas and Ian are pretty good at building trees, but I don't know any of the community builders that are good at building trees yet I like the cherry blossom tree @bubblegums built in her Ryu Tree's MobWars map submission, it's quite realistic and natural

Do you think maybe one of them can edit it? You can also give them some credit if the map gets accepted!

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