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This map was made by my friend "Ranielle" hes Brlns ign is Ranielle30MCPE.

This map is called Futuristic It can be cool if its Night time while playin this Map on SW/TSW The Long gray Things is Skateboards without wheels But it has 2 Support things that Can make the Skateboard float and The mid has 4 Buildings with Red,Blue,Yellow and Green Windows Theres also 4 Robots with a Floating Vehicles Theres only 11 Chests at the Mid theres no Chests Inside and Outside the 4 Buildins What so ever
The only 11 Chests is at the Center of the 4 Robots And ofc the Red thing is a Car without weels But with 4 Support things That can make the Car float. Theres only a few Ores in every Single islands thats All i can say
 

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Owww cool. I like those car thingys. I love how futuristic it is. I really don't like the middle island. The theme should be futuristic right? It could be more futuristic and also symmetrical. But I really love the concept of it. I wish a good luck for him. :joyful:

Edit: This could also be in mobwars with just some further edits to the map. ^°^
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It's good enough


But i honestly not very interesting cause some reason like

The Chest
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I think the chests look crowd. I mean wait, there were 11 chests in "One Place"? It's look like somethin untidy and not looking good enough in my opinion. Idk how bout ur opinion about that. It's okey it's ur map not mine.

Buildings
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Idk it's just look, plain i think. If you said futuristic or somethin, i recomend change the design like this
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If you cant it's okay. U can change it with ur own version. And also the floor. I think the floor it's plain too. U can maybe add small street and lamps maybe.


And well, the other islands are absolutely GREAT i like it. But the middle island look plain or somethin else

Note: i just giving my opinion not mean i'm insult you or somethin bad. I also appreciate ur build too.

Well. How bout the other people's opinion?
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It's a pretty cool theme honestly I like the car idea xD but the buildings on the middle seem kinda plain and too 'boxy', I suggest probably try mixing gray with white and dark gray colored blocks? I kinda suck at explaining but this is what I mean xD
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This map has potential so try to create your own design and be creative :p
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KhrizKGM said:
It's a pretty cool theme honestly I like the car idea xD but the buildings on the middle seem kinda plain and too 'boxy', I suggest probably try mixing gray with white and dark gray colored blocks? I kinda suck at explaining but this is what I mean xD
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This map has potential so try to create your own design and be creative :p
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Cool. where did you find it?
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