MAP SUBMIT FOR SKYWARS/TEAMSKYWARS

[xLqnce24_]

name of the map:KRADES

Built by:LanceCoder_24

Game Type:Skywars/teamskywars

download map:http://www.mediafire.com/file/1pangclrmhiiqen/SKYWARS+MAP+FOR+BL.mcworld/file

I make A map that half a With a ring It looks like an Old map Sunny With full rings cause someone When they have no more Food Or block or low health or Running so they cannot Killed
So i made half of a ring Cause someone Just running Circles of the map and Thats kinda Annoying so i made that half a ring The island look like easy to rush but i hope soon you put border then after any second the border will gone just like on hive SKYWARS

 

[SplashingPaint836]

Looks very interesting. I don’t know what you are trying to build but I do like what you did at the bottom of the rings with the drooping stone. I’d recommend to build your own trees and as well remove some unnecessary blocks like the sand and the red sand. I don’t know what that green thing is it looks odd and that orange fire like thing is a bit weird. If you’d tell me what they are it would be easier to critic. Also some of the islands are closer than others I think. Anyways pretty good start but unsure what you are trying to build.

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[xLqnce24_]

Looks very interesting. I don’t know what you are trying to build but I do like what you did at the bottom of the rings with the drooping stone. I’d recommend to build your own trees and as well remove some unnecessary blocks like the sand and the red sand. I don’t know what that green thing is it looks odd and that orange fire like thing is a bit weird. If you’d tell me what they are it would be easier to critic. Also some of the islands are closer than others I think. Anyways pretty good start but unsure what you are trying to build.

I WAS TRYING TO BUILD 2RINGS BUT I CANT DO IT So I gonna remove the Red sand? then The island Will Far from each other? Oh i guess i should Made onather 1day

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[xLqnce24_]

Looks very interesting. I don’t know what you are trying to build but I do like what you did at the bottom of the rings with the drooping stone. I’d recommend to build your own trees and as well remove some unnecessary blocks like the sand and the red sand. I don’t know what that green thing is it looks odd and that orange fire like thing is a bit weird. If you’d tell me what they are it would be easier to critic. Also some of the islands are closer than others I think. Anyways pretty good start but unsure what you are trying to build.

i made an animation ill send u link Try to Fucos on island Cuase i screenshot those on side i noticed that the island Was so close when looking there

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[xLqnce24_]

Looks very interesting. I don’t know what you are trying to build but I do like what you did at the bottom of the rings with the drooping stone. I’d recommend to build your own trees and as well remove some unnecessary blocks like the sand and the red sand. I don’t know what that green thing is it looks odd and that orange fire like thing is a bit weird. If you’d tell me what they are it would be easier to critic. Also some of the islands are closer than others I think. Anyways pretty good start but unsure what you are trying to build.

does it ok on the island??

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[SplashingPaint836]

Okay so the islands look good but try to make them even. The ring looks okay you could make more circular and i suggest to remove the slabs since it looks less natural. Also yes remove the sand and red sand. I will tag builders too help you too!

@AllyMac_ @_TrenzK_ @KhrizKGM

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[SplashingPaint836]

does it ok on the island??

yes but make it even

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[xLqnce24_]

Okay so the islands look good but try to make them even. The ring looks okay you could make more circular and i suggest to remove the slabs since it looks less natural. Also yes remove the sand and red sand. I will tag builders too help you too!

@AllyMac_ @_TrenzK_ @KhrizKGM

Thanks you so much

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[xLqnce24_]

Okay so the islands look good but try to make them even. The ring looks okay you could make more circular and i suggest to remove the slabs since it looks less natural. Also yes remove the sand and red sand. I will tag builders too help you too!

@AllyMac_ @_TrenzK_ @KhrizKGM

but how Gonna Help me @AllyMac_ @_TrenzK_ @KhrizKGM

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[SplashingPaint836]

but how Gonna Help me @AllyMac_ @_TrenzK_ @KhrizKGM

You can try to look up some tutorials on YT on how to make the ring and other things that you want to improve!

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[xLqnce24_]

You can try to look up some tutorials on YT on how to make the ring and other things that you want to improve!

WE CHANGE THE RING WE PUT THEME TO

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[xLqnce24_]

You can try to look up some tutorials on YT on how to make the ring and other things that you want to improve!

is it ok to add pixel art?

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[SplashingPaint836]

is it ok to add pixel art?

sure

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[xLqnce24_]

sure

Its ok we themed? rainbow

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[xLqnce24_]

sure

Example What if this map got approved what date will release on brokenlens Skywars map?

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[SplashingPaint836]

Example What if this map got approved what date will release on brokenlens Skywars map?

Until the next update which I don’t know when exactly but probably soon.

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[AllyMac_]

name of the map:KRADES

Built by:LanceCoder_24

Game Type:Skywars/teamskywars

download map:http://www.mediafire.com/file/1pangclrmhiiqen/SKYWARS+MAP+FOR+BL.mcworld/file

I make A map that half a With a ring It looks like an Old map Sunny With full rings cause someone When they have no more Food Or block or low health or Running so they cannot Killed
So i made half of a ring Cause someone Just running Circles of the map and Thats kinda Annoying so i made that half a ring The island look like easy to rush but i hope soon you put border then after any second the border will gone just like on hive SKYWARS

Hi Lance-
It has potential but it is a bit strange to me- I don’t like the big green and orange structures coming up from mid- I don’t know what they are and they would majorly obstruct e-pearling

There are 3 islands that are blue and 9 that are gray- I would make all gray or change the opposite 3 to blue

Under the ring is very “straight” (I don’t know what other word to use) instead of tapering down underneath

I wouldn’t add pixel art (my opinion) Right now the only maps that have pixel art are Mario and MusicN- I don’t think pixel art really belongs in SW maps

I don’t really understand the theme either- the whole map is very lush/full of nature and then the islands have the pixel art hearts- it’s cute but a little confusing

The stone structure at mid doesn’t fit in with the rest of the map to me either- It looks like a small stone hill/mountain

I just woke up so I’m not thinking creatively yet but I think you need to change some things at mid and find a cohesive theme that shows throughout the map- maybe mid could have a bigger pixel art heart in the middle above it to tie the islands to the mid

The islands look good for pvp and I like the checkerboard pattern underneath them- it looks cute

The ring looks okay on the top although it’s a bit bare- I would make custom trees and it just needs some tapering on the bottom

I hope this helps- sorry I didn’t comment sooner- I was on vacation

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[xLqnce24_]

Until the next update which I don’t know when exactly but probably soon.

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Hi Lance-
It has potential but it is a bit strange to me- I don’t like the big green and orange structures coming up from mid- I don’t know what they are and they would majorly obstruct e-pearling

There are 3 islands that are blue and 9 that are gray- I would make all gray or change the opposite 3 to blue

Under the ring is very “straight” (I don’t know what other word to use) instead of tapering down underneath

I wouldn’t add pixel art (my opinion) Right now the only maps that have pixel art are Mario and MusicN- I don’t think pixel art really belongs in SW maps

I don’t really understand the theme either- the whole map is very lush/full of nature and then the islands have the pixel art hearts- it’s cute but a little confusing

The stone structure at mid doesn’t fit in with the rest of the map to me either- It looks like a small stone hill/mountain

I just woke up so I’m not thinking creatively yet but I think you need to change some things at mid and find a cohesive theme that shows throughout the map- maybe mid could have a bigger pixel art heart in the middle above it to tie the islands to the mid

The islands look good for pvp and I like the checkerboard pattern underneath them- it looks cute

The ring looks okay on the top although it’s a bit bare- I would make custom trees and it just needs some tapering on the bottom

I hope this helps- sorry I didn’t comment sooner- I was on vacation

we change everything we removed the Mid stone And The only we gonna Change is Island Range Then add decor on ring

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[xLqnce24_]

This thing look like ill get update you if i get full pic then tell me what gonna change

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