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Map Submission

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Idk this bad
 

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  • This looks like a sw map. I see 1 outer island, but you need all of them, so you should work on that.
  • The middle should be more circular and bigger.
  • Make your own trees, they look much better.
  • Add more details, this is too basic.
  • Good start, keep working on it :)
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  • This looks like a sw map. I see 1 outer island, but you need all of them, so you should work on that.
  • The middle should be more circular and bigger.
  • Make your own trees, they look much better.
  • Add more details, this is too basic.
  • Good start, keep working on it :)
i have no IDEAS lmao
Thanks good boi
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  • This looks like a sw map. I see 1 outer island, but you need all of them, so you should work on that.
  • The middle should be more circular and bigger.
  • Make your own trees, they look much better.
  • Add more details, this is too basic.
  • Good start, keep working on it :)
But I don’t have to do so much of them cuz that example for staff builder
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Idk this bad
Well I'm not bob the builder nor am I trying to come across as rude, but ummmm... your build doesnt look too good. It can be fixed though, from what i see (assuming this is a skywars map and that is the center island) your going to need to add more shape and detail to it. I suggest building higher up so you can add details to the bottom since you are in a flat world. I'd also reccomend making the island bigger since it's the center of your map. As I said I'm not an expert but I hope that will help you. Good start :)
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Sky wars maps name forest N [FIXED]
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Yea build higher up lol

Don’t make the islands so square either, and make the bottom less flat

You need to add a lot more detail too, like others have said, it’s very basic rn

Here’s an example lol

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Yea build higher up lol

Don’t make the islands so square either, and make the bottom less flat

You need to add a lot more detail too, like others have said, it’s very basic rn

Here’s an example lol

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Oooo I miss that SW map :(
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Idk this bad
I’m not a builder or anything special but I’ll input my thoughts of your map:

•Looks too square - make the islands & middle more circular.

•Why does the bottom base look so flat? Make them look pointy.

•The trees look so basic and lonely, maybe add more details around them to lighten the islands more.

•Make the islands more spacious - expand it to 3 blocks more.

•Ground looks boring - add texture, & details to it
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I wrote 15 lines about this map and I pressed back for mistake . reeeeeeeeeee , eighter way all I can say is I don't like it at all sorry
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Like all the others have been suggesting, build higher up. This will make it easier to make the bottom of the islands more pointed and detailed.
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