Mafia: Midnight Chimes N3

Icy_Hatake

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Im sorry, this really sucks. I didn’t know what direction to take it, and I had promised Nash that if he had died early on, I’d make him into something else for the story so he could still be in it.
(Nash, your part is at the very end)

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It was late at night, once again, in the town of Winterfell. Pufflin and Anmo were out, walking back from an art show. Anmo would normally be on edge, but the art show put him at ease. He was constantly ranting about all the beautiful art to Pufflin, who simply tuned him out. While Pufflin was on her phone, Anmo kept talking about this painting that he absolutely adored. “Did you see those colors and how they blended?! Absolutely ama- Hey! Are you even listening to me?”

Pufflin just nodded, still scrolling through her phone.

Anmo sighed, “Well since you have your phone look for a place to eat. I’m starving and it’s nearly midnight.”


The pair decided on a small café that was still open. This made Anmo suspicious of the place. Sitting at a table outside, Anmo started to tell Pufflin how unease he was. “Puff, why would a café be open this late?”

“Oh I don’t know... maybe for people like us? Maybe they actually get people this late?”

“Still Puff, it’s rather odd...”

“Ah, enough of that from you Anmo. Just relax. We’re at a café, outside, nothing will happen.”


However, as soon as Pufflin said that, a hooded figure approached. Anmo immediately confronted them. Before much was said, the figure pulled a weapon on Anmo. Anmo fought for the weapon at first, but he couldn’t keep up with the figure and lost. He was killed there, in front of Pufflin. With no time to react, the figure turned to Pufflin and took her out as well, just in time to enjoy the sound of the clocktower.

~


Mayor Hatake called for another meeting before the executions the next morning. “Due to some pressing matters, I have decided to overrule the people’s vote and send Mauri into execution. For reasons why... that shall stay with me.” With that said, Mauri was executed.


~
(You May skip this part, it’s mainly for Nash. It is simply a confrontation between a mafia member, and Nash, a witness to this nights murders.)


Some time after the execution, one of our killers was taking a walk through the nearby forest. “Why did you kill those two people...”

They looked around, startled that there was a voice yet no person around. “Who’s there? What do you want?” A chuckle sounded through the air. “I had my suspicions it was you.” This made the figure pale. Someone knows... they thought. There was another chuckle. “Don’t worry. I am already dead. I’ll be seeing your partner though, I’m sure they will be easier to startle.”

“Wait!” Yelled the figure. “If you’re dead who are you exactly?”

“Nash. Watch your back, for I shall be back to haunt you and your partner.”

(This was a cheesy last second thing I apologize Dx)
 
PLAYERS:
Thomas
Klassux
Pandee - DEAD: Townsfolk
Evie
Builder
Kawaii
Elk
Highlight
Mauri - DEAD: Traitor
Galactic
Anmo - DEAD: Townsfolk
Angry
Gracie
Sami
Jewel
Nash - DEAD: Townsfolk
Bark
DaGamer
Sheldorium
Kristina - DEAD: Townsfolk
Sazzy - DEAD: Townsfolk
Icy
Aruka
CrystalCruz
Jay
Pufflin - DEAD: Townsfolk
Lolo
Neko
Shive - DEAD: Townsfolk
Banana
Bear
Berry
Snowflakss
Faith


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Ok listen. In the extra part, nash said “i had my suspicions it was you.” For that reason, I looked back and at n1, nash was suspecting highlight. For that reason I vote highlight!
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It was late at night, once again, in the town of Winterfell. Pufflin and Anmo were out, walking back from an art show. Anmo would normally be on edge, but the art show put him at ease. He was constantly ranting about all the beautiful art to Pufflin, who simply tuned him out. While Pufflin was on her phone, Anmo kept talking about this painting that he absolutely adored. “Did you see those colors and how they blended?! Absolutely ama- Hey! Are you even listening to me?”
Just a little suggestion because this doesn't provide enough suspense to wonder who's gonna die. By mentioning their names at the start of the night, you give away who's gonna die unless they get saved. A way to avoid revealing who's gonna die is to use words that make the people anonymous until a good time, like when someone calls for another. Maybe even mention their names at the end such as:
"Name 1 has been eliminated" Mafia 1 said.

And uh, yay of course I die because I never make it to the end alive
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im trying to figure out who likes pastries and etc for the whole cafe scene you chose but i caNt. so im gonna go with aruka because for some very odd reason you overruled the vote. very suspicioussssss ; )
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Just a little suggestion because this doesn't provide enough suspense to wonder who's gonna die. By mentioning their names at the start of the night, you give away who's gonna die unless they get saved. A way to avoid revealing who's gonna die is to use words that make the people anonymous until a good time, like when someone calls for another. Maybe even mention their names at the end such as:
"Name 1 has been eliminated" Mafia 1 said.

And uh, yay of course I die because I never make it to the end alive
Gracias
I appreciate the suggestion
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My vote goes to Highlight because the last time I was at the cafe in town the crazy 100 year old women who owns it was highlighting all the prices on the menu idk why she was but she did give me a free coke once so I like her heh
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And I don’t think the story sucks I find it suspenseful idk what you are talking about xD 10/10
Thanks Jay but it does kinda suck xD
I’m not good at writing ;3
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