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Name Map Park
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12 Island Spawn
4 Chest On Mid
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Name Map Park
Build ProCandle729
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12 Island Spawn
4 Chest On Mid
ProCandle729
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And This Is Spawn
seacosmos
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this is too basic to be added. there is no depth to the islands, the decor isn't desirable to look at and you can find this type of map everywhere; it's not an original idea.
i'm aorry if this came off as harsh but this is just my opinion. if you can improve it then i'm willing to see what you do.
i'm aorry if this came off as harsh but this is just my opinion. if you can improve it then i'm willing to see what you do.
ProCandle729
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If You Want To Help Me.
Give Your Xbox Name
I Will Invite YOOU
Give Your Xbox Name
I Will Invite YOOU
karmatic
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Well.....
- there’s no base to the island. Give it more texture underneath it
- too plain — add some dirt or stone to make it look exquisite
- colour pallet — add some blues or yellows in there to brighten it up a bit
- texture to the trees — deliberately shape the tre
That’s all
@Diavent @ZoeyLynne
- there’s no base to the island. Give it more texture underneath it
- too plain — add some dirt or stone to make it look exquisite
- colour pallet — add some blues or yellows in there to brighten it up a bit
- texture to the trees — deliberately shape the tre
That’s all
@Diavent @ZoeyLynne
FieldLearner610
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I like the mid
Diavent
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Uhhh... Yikes... 
I don’t want to be rude, but I also try to give all my honesty in these kinds of things...
It’s horrible. I don’t like anything about the map, I’m sorry.
first time I said that...
It’s wayyy to square, extremely basic, no detail at all, horrible block palette... Trying to replicate default trees, too... Honestly, even the large default trees would work better than those.
I suggest looking up images of Skywars maps on Google. Especially those on other servers to really get a feel on how they look, how they are set up, and more.
The majority of maps are round. They have some form of spike underneath the island to make it look like it came from the ground, not cut. The trees look beautiful (if there are in an example map), not default and blocky. If they need to make something round, they make it round, not pointy. Additionally, especially, they have a great theme. In my opinion, “Park” isn’t a good theme. Something like... a game adaption... like Mario is good. Something you like, such as a movie is good. Something with more structure in real life is good, like a house or a train station is good.
Overall, I don’t like this map. I apologize if I came off harsh. I only give my honest opinion on these map kinda constructive criticism stuff.
I don’t want to be rude, but I also try to give all my honesty in these kinds of things...
It’s horrible. I don’t like anything about the map, I’m sorry.
first time I said that...
It’s wayyy to square, extremely basic, no detail at all, horrible block palette... Trying to replicate default trees, too... Honestly, even the large default trees would work better than those.
I suggest looking up images of Skywars maps on Google. Especially those on other servers to really get a feel on how they look, how they are set up, and more.
The majority of maps are round. They have some form of spike underneath the island to make it look like it came from the ground, not cut. The trees look beautiful (if there are in an example map), not default and blocky. If they need to make something round, they make it round, not pointy. Additionally, especially, they have a great theme. In my opinion, “Park” isn’t a good theme. Something like... a game adaption... like Mario is good. Something you like, such as a movie is good. Something with more structure in real life is good, like a house or a train station is good.
Overall, I don’t like this map. I apologize if I came off harsh. I only give my honest opinion on these map kinda constructive criticism stuff.
ProCandle729
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Uhhh... Yikes...
I don’t want to be rude, but I also try to give all my honesty in these kinds of things...
It’s horrible. I don’t like anything about the map, I’m sorry.
first time I said that...
It’s wayyy to square, extremely basic, no detail at all, horrible block palette... Trying to replicate default trees, too... Honestly, even the large default trees would work better than those.
I suggest looking up images of Skywars maps on Google. Especially those on other servers to really get a feel on how they look, how they are set up, and more.
The majority of maps are round. They have some form of spike underneath the island to make it look like it came from the ground, not cut. The trees look beautiful (if there are in an example map), not default and blocky. If they need to make something round, they make it round, not pointy. Additionally, especially, they have a great theme. In my opinion, “Park” isn’t a good theme. Something like... a game adaption... like Mario is good. Something you like, such as a movie is good. Something with more structure in real life is good, like a house or a train station is good.
Overall, I don’t like this map. I apologize if I came off harsh. I only give my honest opinion on these map kinda constructive criticism stuff.
What About This.Grafity Map Sucks TOO BECAUSE THEY EZ TO KNOCKPEOPLE
karmatic
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I think what Dia meant about the islands's bases were that they should be pointed and uneven, not all....blocky
Like this:
And I would also like to see a bit more colours, like some reds or purples or something
ProCandle729
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FireFox1318.Whats Your Minecraft PE IGN
karmatic
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What my forums IGN is.
And if you're asking if I can help you with your map, I can't rn
ProCandle729
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Help Me.I Will Invite You On Minecraft PE 1.2.10.Give IGN Name
karmatic
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I just did, and I said I can't right now
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You just said what I wanted to say ;-:Uhhh... Yikes...
I don’t want to be rude, but I also try to give all my honesty in these kinds of things...
It’s horrible. I don’t like anything about the map, I’m sorry.
first time I said that...
It’s wayyy to square, extremely basic, no detail at all, horrible block palette... Trying to replicate default trees, too... Honestly, even the large default trees would work better than those.
I suggest looking up images of Skywars maps on Google. Especially those on other servers to really get a feel on how they look, how they are set up, and more.
The majority of maps are round. They have some form of spike underneath the island to make it look like it came from the ground, not cut. The trees look beautiful (if there are in an example map), not default and blocky. If they need to make something round, they make it round, not pointy. Additionally, especially, they have a great theme. In my opinion, “Park” isn’t a good theme. Something like... a game adaption... like Mario is good. Something you like, such as a movie is good. Something with more structure in real life is good, like a house or a train station is good.
Overall, I don’t like this map. I apologize if I came off harsh. I only give my honest opinion on these map kinda constructive criticism stuff.
ProCandle729
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No way.This Would Got Delect For No Reason.Uhhh... Yikes...
I don’t want to be rude, but I also try to give all my honesty in these kinds of things...
It’s horrible. I don’t like anything about the map, I’m sorry.
first time I said that...
It’s wayyy to square, extremely basic, no detail at all, horrible block palette... Trying to replicate default trees, too... Honestly, even the large default trees would work better than those.
I suggest looking up images of Skywars maps on Google. Especially those on other servers to really get a feel on how they look, how they are set up, and more.
The majority of maps are round. They have some form of spike underneath the island to make it look like it came from the ground, not cut. The trees look beautiful (if there are in an example map), not default and blocky. If they need to make something round, they make it round, not pointy. Additionally, especially, they have a great theme. In my opinion, “Park” isn’t a good theme. Something like... a game adaption... like Mario is good. Something you like, such as a movie is good. Something with more structure in real life is good, like a house or a train station is good.
Overall, I don’t like this map. I apologize if I came off harsh. I only give my honest opinion on these map kinda constructive criticism stuff.
BYE.IM SAD NOW BECAUSE DEL
Lanima
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Oh lord...No way.This Would Got Delect For No Reason.
If this doesn't help I don't know what will
Can you...
Learn
From
THE PROBLEMS?
We're giving you critique for a reason: to help you improve next time
3vro5
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I would say... NO. Because
1: Since the center is rectangular. It gives people advantages and disadvantages. Because half of the players would be closer to the mid and half will be further.
2: It’s just plain basic. Square islands. No spike. Saplinged trees.
Maybe try to make it more circular and it will be x10 better.
3. The rest of the things dia said
1: Since the center is rectangular. It gives people advantages and disadvantages. Because half of the players would be closer to the mid and half will be further.
2: It’s just plain basic. Square islands. No spike. Saplinged trees.
Maybe try to make it more circular and it will be x10 better.
3. The rest of the things dia said
Diavent
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All Skywars maps are easy to get knocked off on. Especially the small ones like Nether and Snowy. Hence the name “SKY wars.” Additionally, the Gravity map was added in way before a build team was created for the server. Maps not made by the build team or community will soon be replaced.
