Is this a good map? Ocean Floor (TBB)

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I made a TBB map and i am not quite sure if this is good enough

Build By: Flikxtah

Name: Ocean Floor
Game: TheBestBuilder (SOLO)

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walls could definitely use some work, try detailing with stained blue glass or other blue blocks, and the building floor could also use work as well, try putting sand and sandstone too
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The map looks great!
But the walls look a bit boring
For the walls you can add bubbles and small fish(s)
And why is there a tree under the water?-
And maybe you can add a pineapple house (if you can-)
I think the “tree” is supposed to be an anchor
but like I said, you should probs change the anchor from wood to cobblestone or sumthin
wHy SpoNgEbOB
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The map looks great!
But the walls look a bit boring
For the walls you can add bubbles and small fish(s)
And why is there a tree under the water?-
And maybe you can add a pineapple house (if you can-)
That tree is the anchor haha, looks like a tree from far but if you see it closely that's a anchor
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I think the “tree” is supposed to be an anchor
but like I said, you should probs change the anchor from wood to cobblestone or sumthin
wHy SpoNgEbOB
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That tree is the anchor haha, looks like a tree from far but if you see it closely that's a anchor
I see-
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wHiCh iS WhY YOu ShOulD ChAnGe iT To CoBbLe
Oof, i think cobble is good for building that kind of stuff but isn't that will look like the stones on the surroundings? I will not know if i not try. And i think i will change the floor to sand, gravel, andesite and clay to look like the real ocean thanks for saying this stuff.
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Oof, i think cobble is good for building that kind of stuff but isn't that will look like the stones on the surroundings? I will not know if i not try. And i think i will change the floor to sand, gravel, andesite and clay to look like the real ocean thanks for saying this stuff.
I think it’s better to recreate the anchor as cobble/mossy cobble becuase it’s one of the few grey blocks that has a mossy and stairs variant, and make the ocean floor purely out of sand and sandstone since the andesite will blend with the anchor
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Such a nice map! Could use some improvements! I’ll suggest a few:

You say the name of the map is ocean floor but the floor is water? The floor of the ocean would be sand or if it was deeper it would be a more dark rocky terrain. Sand and sandstone mixed together for the floor would be good enough!

Instead of a pixelated fish you could try building a 3D clownfish and many other types of fish across the map.

More coral and kelp can add more depth and make the map less plain.

I agree with Kimmy to add bubbles and for the anchor made of wood I don’t mind but realistically speaking it should be a much more stronger material or should appear to be. You can try dark gray concrete or some other blocks similarly colored to it.

Overall, great start! Definitely want to see this when it is fully finished! :P
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Thank you so much guys all of your comments will make a huge change on the mao thanks for your suggestions and your comments make me feel energized i will recreatr the map now :) it'll take some time tho
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