i need suggestions on this map .

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me and nanananah r working on this map named : Amusement Park

Since me and hannah have -1000 Brain cells , we need ideas from u smart people! GO

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ill upload more pictures later.
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MarvelB0i said:
Oh well just add fake hiding spots that will use redstone to push you put of them.
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redstone is disabled . i just want some suggestion on what to like add on the floor my son
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Maybe try and get better screenshots and put some stone walls connecting with the rollercoaster pillars. Add some pathways. Remove the unnecessary objects like those fliyng things and the campsite they dont relate to "Amusment Park" at all. Add actual amusment park rides like Drop Towers, Ship Swing, Carousel, Spinny flying thingy and ETC. Also add a main entrance building.
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SlayCC said:
Maybe try and get better screenshots and put some stone walls connecting with the rollercoaster pillars. Add some pathways. Remove the unnecessary objects like those fliyng things and the campsite they dont relate to "Amusment Park" at all. Add actual amusment park rides like Drop Towers, Ship Swing, Carousel, Spinny flying thingy and ETC. Also add a main entrance building.
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an "extreme frisbee" like ride (ill attach a pic) maybe too. I'd suggest looking up a real park for ride reference or what to add

Add more supports to the coaster, most coasters have more supports than that, especially on loops that size and on the bottom of hills/drops.
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I don't like it, when you mixed up a spruce slab on a white wool or quartz, I can't even identify wether it is a wool or a quartz because of the texture pack. It's just not that good to see, for me, I don't know for others.

Try to get a better screenshot next time as well, I can't see the real and exact map just some few things that surrounds it.
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It almost reads more county fair to me. If that was what you were going for I can understand the tent/campsite for carnival workers. Around here county fairs have dirt "roads/paths" that twine around all the tents. In fairs here there are tents with fruits and vegetables that farmers are presenting to win prizes. There are usually tents with farm animals in seperate fenced in pens. Google "Barnstable County Fair". That is a fair where I am from,they have a "midway" where all the games and rides are. Another area with a stage for performances. A bunch of food trucks and picnic tables. Bathrooms. A huge pen for horse events, etc., etc. Like Slay said- build an entrance. A ticket booth where they sell you tickets to get in. Strel is right- the rollercoaster 100% needs supports. Google a real roller coaster so u can see. Hiding places. A "funhouse" with a maze like MM circus map. We are not critiqueing right now correct? Just giving ideas? I need to go to bed. Zoey is away camping this weekend so don't expect an answer from her until after the weekend. Goodnight :)
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thanks you guys are smart :p ill try to do allof the suggestions
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Needs more food trucks. And istg if you say "denied do to unconfirmed idea."
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