I NEED IDEAS

[Builderwither]

Umm quick question
Is that a girl?
(NOT TO BE RUDE THO)
Also do u have a color palette or scheme for this character, and a name?

yes thats a girl XD
you can be rude this drawing have 5 years XD , color palette i dunno , you're da artist ;3
name ? bworfl , choose please XD

...
did you have a person u were obsessed w :333

ohohohohoooo thats old XD
ermmm lemme rethink . . . obsessed . . . no , but there was that girl i was loving , the first time she talked to me i affraid her , she never talked to me again , so i was always managing for her and i met " radomly " in the corridors XD
dont judge me i was 14-15 D;

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[Pandeee]

yes thats a girl XD
you can be rude this drawing have 5 years XD , color palette i dunno , you're da artist ;3
name ? bworfl , choose please XD


ohohohohoooo thats old XD
ermmm lemme rethink . . . obsessed . . . no , but there was that girl i was loving , the first time she talked to me i affraid her , she never talked to me again , so i was always managing for her and i met " radomly " in the corridors XD
dont judge me i was 14-15 D;

naww i think its a fun phase to go thru,
Oof i renember there was this one guy back in my middle school who wouldnt stop asking this girl out and kept following her around it was funny kind of
i threw pencil shavings in his bag cuz he got too close once:3

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[Builderwither]

naww i think its a fun phase to go thru,
Oof i renember there was this one guy back in my middle school who wouldnt stop asking this girl out and kept following her around it was funny kind of
i threw pencil shavings in his bag cuz he got too close once:3

awww thats cuuutte ;3

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[joyee]

Welp i've done this a few years ago in my Yandere phase , maybe you can try improve it , im pretty curious to see what it will give with your own style
( PS : thats a gun in the hand behind :x )

Ok first r u ok? And second is it ok if I draw it in a more comfortable pose cuz it’s a bit hard to get my style in a more advance pose like that so I’m gonna do a easier pose for me to draw

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[BellaThorne_dyslexia]

Is it alright if I give you criticism?

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[joyee]

Is it alright if I give you criticism?

That’s fine

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[Builderwither]

Ok first r u ok? And second is it ok if I draw it in a more comfortable pose cuz it’s a bit hard to get my style in a more advance pose like that so I’m gonna do a easier pose for me to draw

yes im okay that was years agoooo that drawing is a 5 years old drawing aaa im happy af right nooow D;
and no problem for the pose and evrything , you're da artist :3

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[joyee]

Welp i've done this a few years ago in my Yandere phase , maybe you can try improve it , im pretty curious to see what it will give with your own style
( PS : thats a gun in the hand behind :x )

Ok so I made a different pose and the face was a little weird so I changed that too

and I rushed it srry

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[KingWolfy]

i love this pokemon

You mean TOKE-mon


lmao sorry

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[BellaThorne_dyslexia]

That’s fine

alright!

Ok so my style has changed a bit so characters will look more likeView attachment 150471

I'll just do this one. I'm going to break it down into sections, color choice, shading, anatomy.
Color Choice-
The color palette is nice! The background is bland (but I shouldn't be too picky).
Not too much to say about the colors,, But rather than using the color picker and just dropping the color onto your drawing, change the color slightly depending on theme of your drawing. ex; turning a dark purple into a slightly lighter shade for a "pastel theme".
here is an example; this is the same character but with two different color themes.
one is bright, while the other is more of a cool theme.
And here is the original art of the character.
Compared to the fanarts, the original is darker.

Shading-
The shading is okay, it isn't the best, but it's still good! I had trouble trying to find the light source, which is unpleasant, since it seemed to be everywhere. The hair was probably the most unpleasant to look at since it was.. everywhere. Maybe for your style start using "Cel Shading". Such shading is done by not blurring the shading, but by taking your shading color and lowering the opacity where it belongs.
Seen here;
The clothes were very simple, one thing that bugged me was that the print of the shirt didn't seem shaded. Maybe you did but I just saw it that way. : ( but that's just me being picky. Like I said before, try using cel shading!

Anatomy-
I'll be cutting this into subcategories, hair, face, shoulders/upper body. (Since this isn't a full body)
hair<
the hair is very nice! The style isn't complicated and is very simple. I like it! But the part of the pony tail on the top is very,, weird looking. The hair band isn't in the middle of the head were most pony tails uhm, are. I doubt this is on purpose, but this is probably me being picky again.
face<
The face is very pleasant! The face shape is also great. But the ears, are way too upwards. The ears should start at the bottom of the mouth and end at the top of your eyes.
like so,
I know your style is cartoonish but it's still important to follow basic anatomy.
shoulders/upper body<
Not too much to say, they are actually really good! Great job! : )
I'm not a professional and I am still learning very many things. I may have gotten some things wrong and some things may not make sense. So I apologize! My bad! (ﾉ´▽｀)ﾉ♡

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[BlazonierTheFox]

alright!

I'll just do this one. I'm going to break it down into sections, color choice, shading, anatomy.
Color Choice-
The color palette is nice! The background is bland (but I shouldn't be too picky).
Not too much to say about the colors,, But rather than using the color picker and just dropping the color onto your drawing, change the color slightly depending on theme of your drawing. ex; turning a dark purple into a slightly lighter shade for a "pastel theme".
here is an example; this is the same character but with two different color themes.
View attachment 151952 one is bright, View attachment 151953 while the other is more of a cool theme.
And here is the original art of the character.
View attachment 151954 Compared to the fanarts, the original is darker.

Shading-
The shading is okay, it isn't the best, but it's still good! I had trouble trying to find the light source, which is unpleasant, since it seemed to be everywhere. The hair was probably the most unpleasant to look at since it was.. everywhere. Maybe for your style start using "Cel Shading". Such shading is done by not blurring the shading, but by taking your shading color and lowering the opacity where it belongs.
Seen here; View attachment 151949
The clothes were very simple, one thing that bugged me was that the print of the shirt didn't seem shaded. Maybe you did but I just saw it that way. : ( but that's just me being picky. Like I said before, try using cel shading!

Anatomy-
I'll be cutting this into subcategories, hair, face, shoulders/upper body. (Since this isn't a full body)
hair<
the hair is very nice! The style isn't complicated and is very simple. I like it! But the part of the pony tail on the top is very,, weird looking. The hair band isn't in the middle of the head were most pony tails uhm, are. I doubt this is on purpose, but this is probably me being picky again.
face<
The face is very pleasant! The face shape is also great. But the ears, are way too upwards. The ears should start at the bottom of the mouth and end at the top of your eyes.
like so, View attachment 151950
I know your style is cartoonish but it's still important to follow basic anatomy.
shoulders/upper body<
Not too much to say, they are actually really good! Great job! : )
I'm not a professional and I am still learning very many things. I may have gotten some things wrong and some things may not make sense. So I apologize! My bad! (ﾉ´▽｀)ﾉ♡

And this is what I'd like to call real constructive criticism

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[joyee]

alright!

I'll just do this one. I'm going to break it down into sections, color choice, shading, anatomy.
Color Choice-
The color palette is nice! The background is bland (but I shouldn't be too picky).
Not too much to say about the colors,, But rather than using the color picker and just dropping the color onto your drawing, change the color slightly depending on theme of your drawing. ex; turning a dark purple into a slightly lighter shade for a "pastel theme".
here is an example; this is the same character but with two different color themes.
View attachment 151952 one is bright, View attachment 151953 while the other is more of a cool theme.
And here is the original art of the character.
View attachment 151954 Compared to the fanarts, the original is darker.

Shading-
The shading is okay, it isn't the best, but it's still good! I had trouble trying to find the light source, which is unpleasant, since it seemed to be everywhere. The hair was probably the most unpleasant to look at since it was.. everywhere. Maybe for your style start using "Cel Shading". Such shading is done by not blurring the shading, but by taking your shading color and lowering the opacity where it belongs.
Seen here; View attachment 151949
The clothes were very simple, one thing that bugged me was that the print of the shirt didn't seem shaded. Maybe you did but I just saw it that way. : ( but that's just me being picky. Like I said before, try using cel shading!

Anatomy-
I'll be cutting this into subcategories, hair, face, shoulders/upper body. (Since this isn't a full body)
hair<
the hair is very nice! The style isn't complicated and is very simple. I like it! But the part of the pony tail on the top is very,, weird looking. The hair band isn't in the middle of the head were most pony tails uhm, are. I doubt this is on purpose, but this is probably me being picky again.
face<
The face is very pleasant! The face shape is also great. But the ears, are way too upwards. The ears should start at the bottom of the mouth and end at the top of your eyes.
like so, View attachment 151950
I know your style is cartoonish but it's still important to follow basic anatomy.
shoulders/upper body<
Not too much to say, they are actually really good! Great job! : )
I'm not a professional and I am still learning very many things. I may have gotten some things wrong and some things may not make sense. So I apologize! My bad! (ﾉ´▽｀)ﾉ♡

Oh geez that’s a lot of stuff, I get my shadings off and I’m trying to work on it, I’ve only been drawing digital for a while(on iPad) and I still am learning since I’m self taught and only do art as a hobby
I tried really to shade on here and I know it’s bad but it’s what I can do now
For anatomy I had a really HUGE anime style and I’m trying to escape that and drift from that, I was never good with ears so that’s something I’ll work on to since before I usually covered it with hair and never bothered with it.
I hate drawing hair bands and whenever I actually draw them, they’re scrunchies and a more puffy look
Styles and prints on clothing are something I never understood so I’ll work on that too.
Thank you for the criticism and I’ll try to work on these stuff more

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[joyee]

Also I have no idea for background and those are also something I’m working desperately on with the time I have at home and at school when I don’t have work

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[BellaThorne_dyslexia]

you are very welcome!

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[joyee]

My head and neck hurts now, this drive is taking too long lol

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[Zayn]

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[Builderwither]

Ok so I made a different pose and the face was a little weird so I changed that tooView attachment 151943 and I rushed it srry

ahaaaa no problem , i'll be honnest i love your style , you seems to be between SD and Manga and thats something i love !
Too realist is bad imo and too SD is bad too . . . The Drawing is an art where the artist can show to the world how he see the world Himself , and your style is just . . . Fascinating !
i cant explain , omg you think im weird O-O

Anyway i love your style and i love the 2nd version of the drawing too , looking forward to see your next arts ^^

Thank you Bubble and . . . yeah , have a nice day ;3

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[joyee]

ahaaaa no problem , i'll be honnest i love your style , you seems to be between SD and Manga and thats something i love !
Too realist is bad imo and too SD is bad too . . . The Drawing is an art where the artist can show to the world how he see the world Himself , and your style is just . . . Fascinating !
i cant explain , omg you think im weird O-O

Anyway i love your style and i love the 2nd version of the drawing too , looking forward to see your next arts ^^

Thank you Bubble and . . . yeah , have a nice day ;3

I don’t think you’re weird at all, I really do the same to my artist friends and I can tell they get weirded out lol(sorry i didn’t reply till now) but tysm I had this eye bleeding anime style that I have in my old drawing books and there’s others where I drew “realistic” art. I’ve kinda picked up artists techniques and added it to my art which is why my style changes a lot and I draw very often.

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[joyee]

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I wonder what it was

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[Lanima]

alright!

I'll just do this one. I'm going to break it down into sections, color choice, shading, anatomy.
Color Choice-
The color palette is nice! The background is bland (but I shouldn't be too picky).
Not too much to say about the colors,, But rather than using the color picker and just dropping the color onto your drawing, change the color slightly depending on theme of your drawing. ex; turning a dark purple into a slightly lighter shade for a "pastel theme".
here is an example; this is the same character but with two different color themes.
View attachment 151952 one is bright, View attachment 151953 while the other is more of a cool theme.
And here is the original art of the character.
View attachment 151954 Compared to the fanarts, the original is darker.

Shading-
The shading is okay, it isn't the best, but it's still good! I had trouble trying to find the light source, which is unpleasant, since it seemed to be everywhere. The hair was probably the most unpleasant to look at since it was.. everywhere. Maybe for your style start using "Cel Shading". Such shading is done by not blurring the shading, but by taking your shading color and lowering the opacity where it belongs.
Seen here; View attachment 151949
The clothes were very simple, one thing that bugged me was that the print of the shirt didn't seem shaded. Maybe you did but I just saw it that way. : ( but that's just me being picky. Like I said before, try using cel shading!

Anatomy-
I'll be cutting this into subcategories, hair, face, shoulders/upper body. (Since this isn't a full body)
hair<
the hair is very nice! The style isn't complicated and is very simple. I like it! But the part of the pony tail on the top is very,, weird looking. The hair band isn't in the middle of the head were most pony tails uhm, are. I doubt this is on purpose, but this is probably me being picky again.
face<
The face is very pleasant! The face shape is also great. But the ears, are way too upwards. The ears should start at the bottom of the mouth and end at the top of your eyes.
like so, View attachment 151950
I know your style is cartoonish but it's still important to follow basic anatomy.
shoulders/upper body<
Not too much to say, they are actually really good! Great job! : )
I'm not a professional and I am still learning very many things. I may have gotten some things wrong and some things may not make sense. So I apologize! My bad! (ﾉ´▽｀)ﾉ♡

HOLY SH*T
IS THAT CHIHIRO FUJISAKI?!

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