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Hydroid (Updated TBB Map)

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Name: Hydroid
Builder: Flikxtah05
Game:TheBestBuilder
Download Link/s (if the one doesn't work try the other one):
https://www.mediafire.com/file/r0mk2s62nfhw698/Hydroid_%28TBB%29.mcworld/file

https://www.mediafire.com/file/r0mk2s62nfhw698/Hydroid+(TBB).mcworld/file

First of all, i changed the name of the map from "Ocean Floor" to "Hydroid" because i saw a simillar map on TheBestBuilder and also named as "Ocean.. (i forgot the whole name)" so i decided to change the name of the map to be unique. I tried my best to do your suggestions about the map and here what it looks like.
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*Sorry, i uploaded this map quite delayed because i have many school works to do but, yeah this is it!*
 

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wa- this is greater than the other onee. Honestly this can top my ocean adventure(the one you said that has similar name) map at tbb:p good jobb
suggestion, make the bubble in either concrete powder or stained glass
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Name: Hydroid
Builder: Flikxtah05
Game:TheBestBuilder
Download Link/s (if the one doesn't work try the other one):
https://www.mediafire.com/file/r0mk2s62nfhw698/Hydroid_%28TBB%29.mcworld/file

https://www.mediafire.com/file/r0mk2s62nfhw698/Hydroid+(TBB).mcworld/file

First of all, i changed the name of the map from "Ocean Floor" to "Hydroid" because i saw a simillar map on TheBestBuilder and also named as "Ocean.. (i forgot the whole name)" so i decided to change the name of the map to be unique. I tried my best to do your suggestions about the map and here what it looks like.
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*Sorry, i uploaded this map quite delayed because i have many school works to do but, yeah this is it!*
Wowww, amazing amazing, hope it will get added :D
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Ps. Is it ok that i used 1.16.40?
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Name: Hydroid
Builder: Flikxtah05
Game:TheBestBuilder
Download Link/s (if the one doesn't work try the other one):
https://www.mediafire.com/file/r0mk2s62nfhw698/Hydroid_%28TBB%29.mcworld/file

https://www.mediafire.com/file/r0mk2s62nfhw698/Hydroid+(TBB).mcworld/file

First of all, i changed the name of the map from "Ocean Floor" to "Hydroid" because i saw a simillar map on TheBestBuilder and also named as "Ocean.. (i forgot the whole name)" so i decided to change the name of the map to be unique. I tried my best to do your suggestions about the map and here what it looks like.
View attachment 270322 View attachment 270323 View attachment 270325 View attachment 270326 View attachment 270327
*Sorry, i uploaded this map quite delayed because i have many school works to do but, yeah this is it!*
This was a great improvement! I do have an optional suggestion but you don’t have to if you don’t want to! I suggest, if you want, to make the sand have layers that pile up into mounds. Sort of like having sand mountains just to add some height to cover the flatness. Anyways, this is really good! :p
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This is MUCH MUCH MUCH better :D

but tbh it’s kinda space-ie and it’s a bit too square (the plants and animals)

The animals used to be in that shape because that were inspired on some tropical fish in minecraft and i have plans to change the plants but that will go onto the builder area and outside the map.

wa- this is greater than the other onee. Honestly this can top my ocean adventure(the one you said that has similar name) map at tbb:p good jobb
suggestion, make the bubble in either concrete powder or stained glass

Thank you but i think that is enough, but i will take that in mind if i make another sea-like map

Wowww, amazing amazing, hope it will get added :D

Thank you :)

Yes

This was a great improvement! I do have an optional suggestion but you don’t have to if you don’t want to! I suggest, if you want, to make the sand have layers that pile up into mounds. Sort of like having sand mountains just to add some height to cover the flatness. Anyways, this is really good! :p

Great suggestion but i think that is enough i will just keep that in mind if i made sea-like map again.

Thank you for your comments :)
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In my opinion, I like this map a lot, but it could use a lot more details. I feel like your pushing yourself to finish, just calm down and take your time when building this! It takes a long time to build a nice map.
The walls and floor are a bit too flat for me and could use more details in the walls and floor. Maybe add hills and such into the sand, and have some Birch, Endstone, and sandstone for sands. And of course, use plain sand as well, maybe add some gravel uwu
For the walls, I'd use concrete powder so it's a bit nicer, but that's if you don't like just 1 color your gonna have to maybe separate the colors to be- Blue for the bottom, Cyan for Middle, and Light Blue on top to give that "Underwater" feeling :D
Adding bubbles was nice but like a said, it's way to "square-ie", make them more "circle-ie", and maybe use white as an outline instead of black. Try not to make the bubbles too big, I mean imagine going into the ocean and seeing a 1000000-mile long bubble. Not really realistic :,)

For the fish, I understand if your tryna add tropical fishes in there, but it's still too square-ie! Look up how to build a Fish In Minecraft on YT (Youtube) for some ideas on how to build a nice tropical fish without it being so square-ie.

I also don't get what a Hydroid has to do with this map
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In my opinion, I like this map a lot, but it could use a lot more details. I feel like your pushing yourself to finish, just calm down and take your time when building this! It takes a long time to build a nice map.
The walls and floor are a bit too flat for me and could use more details in the walls and floor. Maybe add hills and such into the sand, and have some Birch, Endstone, and sandstone for sands. And of course, use plain sand as well, maybe add some gravel uwu
For the walls, I'd use concrete powder so it's a bit nicer, but that's if you don't like just 1 color your gonna have to maybe separate the colors to be- Blue for the bottom, Cyan for Middle, and Light Blue on top to give that "Underwater" feeling :D
Adding bubbles was nice but like a said, it's way to "square-ie", make them more "circle-ie", and maybe use white as an outline instead of black. Try not to make the bubbles too big, I mean imagine going into the ocean and seeing a 1000000-mile long bubble. Not really realistic :,)

For the fish, I understand if your tryna add tropical fishes in there, but it's still too square-ie! Look up how to build a Fish In Minecraft on YT (Youtube) for some ideas on how to build a nice tropical fish without it being so square-ie.

I also don't get what a Hydroid has to do with this map

I will answer this as i possibly can because i don't feel that comfortable with these but i got your point

I wasn't pushing myself to finish, in fact that map took me 4 days and 8 hours a day to re-create. Cuz' i thought i would add something here and there and adjust here remove there all of that stuff

I was thinking of adding hills at the very beginning but instead of adding those i add rocks so i did'nt have that much space to work on.

For the "square-ie bubbles" those only consist of 16 blocks each side which 8 of them is the outline, i used black color to highlight the bubble also if you could notice i put big bubbles on the walls to match the big fishes. Maybe that is too big but if you think outside of the box, is the fishes only lives there?

I actually used concrete powder on the walls to give the wall that pixelated look
But that suggestion will work too

For those fishes, i tried to make it not "square-ie" but i ended up making a pixel art that was quite nice but that was a clownfish so i restarted again and i made that.

Hydroid thinking of a new name makes my brain hurt but Hydroid means Hydro-Identification Design but you could suggest a name if you wanted.

All of those were noted...

I respect all of your comments and learning new on some of them but... i don't know what to say anymore.
Have a good day, maybe?
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