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Okay so I thought we needed new hide and seek maps so I built one.

Map name: Magical Cave
Built by: xAmandax00
Game type: Hide and Seek

I wanted a map that was quite small (like “deposit”) but that still has enough hiding spots to give hiders a chance to win the game.

This is my first time building a map and I know that it’s definitely not perfect and I would be very happy to receive criticism about it to make it better.

These pictures are taken without night vision because according to me it looks better.
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(Seeker spawner room)

The same pictures but with night vision.
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I have nooo clue if the download link works since I’ve never done something like this before so if it doesn’t work, help me xD
 
You did a good job for your first map! However, I think you can randomize the stone with more gray blocks. Also, maybe you can add small fairies and some floating torches to make it more magical
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You did a good job for your first map! However, I think you can randomize the stone with more gray blocks. Also, maybe you can add small fairies and some floating torches to make it more magical
Totally agree with you now when you said it, thaanks!
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I agree with Ian and I would like to see a couple more of the houses if you can. I like the magenta glass- it looks pretty. The grass adds a little more color to the map so if u are able to add more houses in the walls you can add more grass for more color. Overall cute map- good job! Maybe some more vines too......
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I like it. It’s way better than my first map, the Creeper Bunker. :D
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For any Builders who wants to go to the map , I fixed the download , and Btw 8 / 10 I agree whit Ian you should randomize the stone whit diffrent type of grey blocks , and I'm not 100% sure but I cant tell if the map is big or small, and come to think of it why can't I join the world , it says that this world has an older version or something like that
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I agree with Ian and I would like to see a couple more of the houses if you can. I like the magenta glass- it looks pretty. The grass adds a little more color to the map so if u are able to add more houses in the walls you can add more grass for more color. Overall cute map- good job! Maybe some more vines too......
Thanks for the feedback! I will definitely keep that in mind!
Looking at it again I do see that it lack some details and that it probably is way too small, oop
For any Builders who wants to go to the map , I fixed the download , and Btw 8 / 10 I agree whit Ian you should randomize the stone whit diffrent type of grey blocks , and I'm not 100% sure but I cant tell if the map is big or small, and come to think of it why can't I join the world , it says that this world has an older version or something like that
Thank you! Idk either why you can’t join it
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It's really nice for your first attempt of building a map. I suggest adding some secret spots, idk I guess it will make it more challenging since it's not a huge map to hide or seek.
I'm not sure if it's just me but all that stone looks a little overwhelming in my opinion, maybe add some ores or a mixture of different stones, or even more of the sea lanterns in the ceiling.. and also add some vines to close a bit of the openness space (it can add closure) - idk im not a builder but yk what i mean xD

I also cant download the map onto my minecraft :notworthy:
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It's really nice for your first attempt of building a map. I suggest adding some secret spots, idk I guess it will make it more challenging since it's not a huge map to hide or seek.
I'm not sure if it's just me but all that stone looks a little overwhelming in my opinion, maybe add some ores or a mixture of different stones, or even more of the sea lanterns in the ceiling.. and also add some vines to close a bit of the openness space (it can add closure) - idk im not a builder but yk what i mean xD

I also cant download the map onto my minecraft :notworthy:
You did a good job for your first map! However, I think you can randomize the stone with more gray blocks. Also, maybe you can add small fairies and some floating torches to make it more magical

I agree with Ian and I would like to see a couple more of the houses if you can. I like the magenta glass- it looks pretty. The grass adds a little more color to the map so if u are able to add more houses in the walls you can add more grass for more color. Overall cute map- good job! Maybe some more vines too......
I agree with that
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It's really nice for your first attempt of building a map. I suggest adding some secret spots, idk I guess it will make it more challenging since it's not a huge map to hide or seek.
I'm not sure if it's just me but all that stone looks a little overwhelming in my opinion, maybe add some ores or a mixture of different stones, or even more of the sea lanterns in the ceiling.. and also add some vines to close a bit of the openness space (it can add closure) - idk im not a builder but yk what i mean xD

I also cant download the map onto my minecraft :notworthy:
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