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Dad yells at here. "DAISY YOU GET IN THAT STUPID CAR OR ELSE WE WILL CALL THE POLICE!" Daisy starts crying. "Stop dad! Stop Beng so mean. Your hunting my feeling". Daisy mom come out with a angry voice. "Excuse me Keven! You don't talk to our daughter like that! Do you understand that husband"
But her dad got mad so he put the daughter in the car and pull her wife from the leg. "MOM MOM! NO!! let me out! Help! Said Daisy with a cry." "Help someone help! Said the mom." "Oh honey I think this is goodbye to her." He slam the door behind him." "let me out!! Please someone!!"
2 hours later. "You awake?" says the officer scared. "Umm..umm yes.. WEAR MY MOM!" I'm sorry but we found you mother umm... Dead..I'm sorry." "No no THIS CAN'T BE! NO! Daisy start shooting and crying. That day the police were all around the house like completely surrounding the house. The dad was sent to jail for 35 years for case of murder. And the daughter was taken to a place that we start has.. hello ツ.
My story start here in a house were all kids go were there parent's are not with them. I called this place Hello ツ cause this is wear my story begins.
"I was 8 years old at the time, living with my parents." "They did everything for me so I can have a great life." When I was 9, we went out and got so much gift cause I was a only person in the family." "But one day, my dad came you know... And he started fighting with my mom and dad and he demanded for us to get in the car."
" I've refused to go in the car but my dad didn't like that idea and started hitting me to get in the cat." "My mom came out and push him to the ground and sayed "Excuse me you can't talk to my daughter like that." "But my mom shouldn't done that cause that cast her life to end. "He just grab her from her leg and went into the house, slamming the door behind him."
" All I can here was my mother calling for help in the house. "Me? I just tried to get out the car but it was no use for me. " 2 hours later the police work me up." "I said "wear my mother?" "And I just a responsible that caused my heart to shattered into pieces." " Days, and days past, I tried forgetting that memory in my mind but it was like a bubble gum stuck in your head."
"And now in here, in a house full of kids I don't know, getting treat it like we were garbage to them. And I'm here at age 12, being hit daily, eating moldy bread and salt water. Welcome to the place I call.. Hello ツ.
Chapter 2:
"Get up you lazy kids, can't you all do something useful in your life instead of sleep all night? Hu? Exactly! Your all useless and pathetic to me. Now get up, breakfast time." Says the lady that works there, then leave like she didn't care what she said.
"I'm so sick of this place! Said Melissa. I'm want to have freedom! Our place on earth that we deserve in life." Melissa listen said Daisy. I been here for 2 years, you think it's fun doing the same crap over and over again for 2 straight year's? No. So we just have to deal with this pain and move on." "Well I guess your right. Says Melissa while she walk out the room.
"Nooo..m it's my turn to do the garden today, I hate that job so much." Later in the afternoon. "It's about time you all do something useful! She said." Now the garden job today is.. she reads the list. Is Daisy and Toby. "Now get over there before I wipe you until you bleed." "Y-yes mam. They both said, while rushing out of there."
30 minutes later. She lays down in the grass while the sun hits her with the heat. "No, I can't, I'm burning out here I can't work like this!" "We don't even get water which is the bad part of this." She spots Toby working in the distance. "How is he even not a bit tired of doing this?" "He must be really good on this job!" "Welp now it's time for me to get to work before she spots me not working and gets wiped.
After they were done, they reported to the dining room for the meeting. "You all still useless she says with no shame." "The people that did the garden didn't even planted the flowers correctly. Toby says, please Ms.Gord! "Daisy and me work for 4 hour outside, burning the heat planting those flowers! At least give us credit!"
"Toby say that one more time to me and your be ending up cleaning the toilets for 2 month, do you understand?" "Yes Ms.Gord". "Ugh! People can't even take simple thing has a complement." "Everyone get out of my sight! You disgusting people! Get out!." That night Daisy was so mad and sad that she started to cry so much that it lead a puddle on the floor.
"She Hates everyone. Said there roommate. There 4 people in her room. Toby, Daisy, Melissa and John. "We don't belong here! We belong in a family that care for us!" "Ya we need something better then this! Said John. "Come one guys let's get some sleep, it's the best that we can get. Said Tony. That night everyone was sleep until...
Daisy dream: "Hi Toby she said." Hi Daisy~ she said with a sweet voice. You are a nice guys to me. she giggles." "Welp I'm one of the best person out there! He said with a calm voice." "Can I tell you something?" "Heh sure!" I... But that moment she work up. Aaaa who there?!?!. It's me Toby. Umm Toby? Toby says... Hello ツ.
The next day at the hello house. "Hmm that wired, Ms.Gord haven't said wake up to us. Daisy walk to her room slowly so she doesn't get notice. "She not here, maybe she went to buy food." At that moment everyone woke up. "Hey Daisy said Toby, you awake early." "Umm yes.. Ms.Gord isn't here today." "Well you know what that means?" "Umm actually no said Daisy." "WE GET TO PARTY!" Everyone heard what Toby said and less then 2 minutes, the house was full of confetti! Party!!
So the 130 people were have a party all day and never got tired on that day! ♥♥♥♥♥♥ call the pizza guy and tell him to get 400 large pizza on the house with chess! On it! The party was so huge that people around the neighborhood even came! But until Toby found out something...
" I'm dancing! I'm Dancing! Until she spills the punch into the ground. Opps..." "It's Ok Daisy I'll get the mop downstairs. That when Toby discover it. Tony's sings. "Wow it's still here! Now it brin.... What is that?" He unfolds the tower. He drops the broom. AAAAAAAA!!!!!! Everyone stops.
20 minutes later.. WHY IS THERE BLOOD AROUND HERE?!? SOMEONE KILLED HER!!!! omg. Even if she was mean we was the only that cared for us.... Now what... Well first to start of said Sammy, There is killer out there for in here right now that could've kill her but who?
Nobody said a word. "Well there has to be a logical explanation for all this. Ik but who could have a cold heart on killing her? " "Someone that hated her so much? Hmm that true... Until the door slam shut by itself." "All 130 get shoot. Who there? A voice in the room come.... Hello ツ"
To be continue...
But her dad got mad so he put the daughter in the car and pull her wife from the leg. "MOM MOM! NO!! let me out! Help! Said Daisy with a cry." "Help someone help! Said the mom." "Oh honey I think this is goodbye to her." He slam the door behind him." "let me out!! Please someone!!"
2 hours later. "You awake?" says the officer scared. "Umm..umm yes.. WEAR MY MOM!" I'm sorry but we found you mother umm... Dead..I'm sorry." "No no THIS CAN'T BE! NO! Daisy start shooting and crying. That day the police were all around the house like completely surrounding the house. The dad was sent to jail for 35 years for case of murder. And the daughter was taken to a place that we start has.. hello ツ.
Hello ツ
By: Ericthewriter
Chapter 1:
Hi. My name is Daisy. I'm a 12 year old girl living in the city side of California. I'm a shy person that really doesn't want to be around people. Ever since my mom died and my dad was sent to jail, I was completely homeless...By: Ericthewriter
Chapter 1:
My story start here in a house were all kids go were there parent's are not with them. I called this place Hello ツ cause this is wear my story begins.
"I was 8 years old at the time, living with my parents." "They did everything for me so I can have a great life." When I was 9, we went out and got so much gift cause I was a only person in the family." "But one day, my dad came you know... And he started fighting with my mom and dad and he demanded for us to get in the car."
" I've refused to go in the car but my dad didn't like that idea and started hitting me to get in the cat." "My mom came out and push him to the ground and sayed "Excuse me you can't talk to my daughter like that." "But my mom shouldn't done that cause that cast her life to end. "He just grab her from her leg and went into the house, slamming the door behind him."
" All I can here was my mother calling for help in the house. "Me? I just tried to get out the car but it was no use for me. " 2 hours later the police work me up." "I said "wear my mother?" "And I just a responsible that caused my heart to shattered into pieces." " Days, and days past, I tried forgetting that memory in my mind but it was like a bubble gum stuck in your head."
"And now in here, in a house full of kids I don't know, getting treat it like we were garbage to them. And I'm here at age 12, being hit daily, eating moldy bread and salt water. Welcome to the place I call.. Hello ツ.
Chapter 2:
"I'm so sick of this place! Said Melissa. I'm want to have freedom! Our place on earth that we deserve in life." Melissa listen said Daisy. I been here for 2 years, you think it's fun doing the same crap over and over again for 2 straight year's? No. So we just have to deal with this pain and move on." "Well I guess your right. Says Melissa while she walk out the room.
"Nooo..m it's my turn to do the garden today, I hate that job so much." Later in the afternoon. "It's about time you all do something useful! She said." Now the garden job today is.. she reads the list. Is Daisy and Toby. "Now get over there before I wipe you until you bleed." "Y-yes mam. They both said, while rushing out of there."
30 minutes later. She lays down in the grass while the sun hits her with the heat. "No, I can't, I'm burning out here I can't work like this!" "We don't even get water which is the bad part of this." She spots Toby working in the distance. "How is he even not a bit tired of doing this?" "He must be really good on this job!" "Welp now it's time for me to get to work before she spots me not working and gets wiped.
After they were done, they reported to the dining room for the meeting. "You all still useless she says with no shame." "The people that did the garden didn't even planted the flowers correctly. Toby says, please Ms.Gord! "Daisy and me work for 4 hour outside, burning the heat planting those flowers! At least give us credit!"
"Toby say that one more time to me and your be ending up cleaning the toilets for 2 month, do you understand?" "Yes Ms.Gord". "Ugh! People can't even take simple thing has a complement." "Everyone get out of my sight! You disgusting people! Get out!." That night Daisy was so mad and sad that she started to cry so much that it lead a puddle on the floor.
"She Hates everyone. Said there roommate. There 4 people in her room. Toby, Daisy, Melissa and John. "We don't belong here! We belong in a family that care for us!" "Ya we need something better then this! Said John. "Come one guys let's get some sleep, it's the best that we can get. Said Tony. That night everyone was sleep until...
Daisy dream: "Hi Toby she said." Hi Daisy~ she said with a sweet voice. You are a nice guys to me. she giggles." "Welp I'm one of the best person out there! He said with a calm voice." "Can I tell you something?" "Heh sure!" I... But that moment she work up. Aaaa who there?!?!. It's me Toby. Umm Toby? Toby says... Hello ツ.
Chapter 3
"Umm hello... What are you doing up this late? Says Daisy." Oh sorry, I heard my voice in your dream. Is everything ok?" Her face turns red." "Umm.. yes I'm ok, thanks for asking." "Ok happy to help but we both should really be heading to bed." "Sure Toby, whatever you say.
The next day at the hello house. "Hmm that wired, Ms.Gord haven't said wake up to us. Daisy walk to her room slowly so she doesn't get notice. "She not here, maybe she went to buy food." At that moment everyone woke up. "Hey Daisy said Toby, you awake early." "Umm yes.. Ms.Gord isn't here today." "Well you know what that means?" "Umm actually no said Daisy." "WE GET TO PARTY!" Everyone heard what Toby said and less then 2 minutes, the house was full of confetti! Party!!
So the 130 people were have a party all day and never got tired on that day! ♥♥♥♥♥♥ call the pizza guy and tell him to get 400 large pizza on the house with chess! On it! The party was so huge that people around the neighborhood even came! But until Toby found out something...
" I'm dancing! I'm Dancing! Until she spills the punch into the ground. Opps..." "It's Ok Daisy I'll get the mop downstairs. That when Toby discover it. Tony's sings. "Wow it's still here! Now it brin.... What is that?" He unfolds the tower. He drops the broom. AAAAAAAA!!!!!! Everyone stops.
20 minutes later.. WHY IS THERE BLOOD AROUND HERE?!? SOMEONE KILLED HER!!!! omg. Even if she was mean we was the only that cared for us.... Now what... Well first to start of said Sammy, There is killer out there for in here right now that could've kill her but who?
Nobody said a word. "Well there has to be a logical explanation for all this. Ik but who could have a cold heart on killing her? " "Someone that hated her so much? Hmm that true... Until the door slam shut by itself." "All 130 get shoot. Who there? A voice in the room come.... Hello ツ"
To be continue...
You really have a gift for writing, Eric!
